MaNan TS: Innocence (COMPLETED wd BANNER).

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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#461

Wonderful lst chp...
U did a grt job dr...
Nandu ws reay funny in dis cho..
N d nms dat c gave to cabir were hillarious...lvd d updt a lot..

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#462

Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome awesome and very cute update.

I just loved it.

You penned very beautifully.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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anjali3010

@anjali3010

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#463

It was awesome...loved it :-)

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jeevikasharma

@jeevikasharma

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#464

its awesome very good

keep smiling😊

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Palchinn

@Palchinn

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Posted: 9 years ago

#465

Ohh this update.. is far far and more above my expectations 😳
This is like WOW.. ! 😉 You nailed it girl !!

I actually thought this one to hav MaNan confession with some emotional ending..
How on earth i forgot.. That its you who is the writer 😃 there has to be something unexpected 😉

This Manik i tell you.. Really.. As Nandini said .. How on earth can some one be so stupid?!! 🤣
A lovable Idiot he is 😉

Nandini 🤣 you actually were complaining about Manik and his staff in front of Manik.. 🤣 This I call is real Innocence 😛

And Manik was already all set with the ring 😉 & how can we miss the famous Nandini's punch !! 😉

I just loved it.. You can actually believe me by this lengthy comment of mine 🤣

And no way this is ur last update.. I want Mr. Rockstar vala FF to be continued once you are done with your exams !!!

All the very best !! Stay blessed 😊

Edited by Palchinn - 9 years ago

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anjali10896

@anjali10896

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#466

Oh god your story is too good

In fact its wonderful n unpredictable😉😛

I just started n completed it

Rly rly loved ur story but already missing it

Why don't u continue it dear

The concept is surely unique

So plz think abt continuing

All the very best for ur exams

Hope they don't eat ur brain much😉😆 caz we want many beautiful stories like dis one😊

Stay blessed n happy

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Rumanan

@Rumanan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#467

oh wow

that was so so so so cute.
i loved it :)
A beautiful story of love nd passion.
A beautiful story of our Manan.

Thankyou ..
its super.

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vaastha31

@vaastha31

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#468

Hmm.it was amazing n hilarious too
Haw poor nandu got confused n told manik's employees n cabiraa pta Nh kya kya.. Hehe
Soo finally happy ending..
Thx for the pm it was awesome ssly

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#469

Omg ... This so awesome nd very interesting ... Though it was the last part bt I loved it very much ...

U know my battisi was in full flash mode ... Love everything frm the strt to end ... Specially tht verbal fight between MaNan ... Nd nd nd also Nandini's description abt Malhotra industry ...

Omg when she said abt Cabir I jst burst out laughing ... Really loved it ...

So finally everything is sorted between MaNan ... Nd they confessed ... Finally they are MaNan now ... Also Manik got a taste of Nandini's punch ... Nd seriously Manik did tht to divert her mind ... Lyk seriously ...

I really loved this update very much ... So our Manik arranged a birthday party fr Nandini ... Nd Nandini's expressions after knowing tht Malhotra industry belongs to him ... It was really priceless ...

Thank u soo much fr writing this awesome story ... U seriously penned it superbly ... I jst can't stop smiling after reading this ...

Waiting fr u to continue ur ff ... Hope u continue soon ... Thank u again for your writing ...