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CID: Written Update: Shatir kidnapper, airing 16th Oct 2015

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Hello Guys, firstly I want to say that it's my very First Written update till now I only used to read but this time I wrote myself πŸ˜ƒ and got to know how difficult task it is.. . Hats off to u guys who timely Do WU that too with proper explanation.. πŸ‘πŸ‘. Now, enough of my bak-bak let's move to WU direct, if u guys find tons of mistake please pardon me for that. 



The episode starts with  Film's shoot near Water-fall,  where running scene of Hero-heroin is going on and goons were following them. While, running suddenly the actress finds problem in her foot and says CUT, Actor says, "not again.. " and calls out for make-up Dada and Spot Dada tells him to bring Umbrella, Actress adds, "mineral water too".  Whereas, the Directer is pulling his hairs and wonders how to complete this 'Scene ', his Assistant Directer says.., "there is no chance of completing this movie at least in this nativity." on which his Senior scold him as.., " he is his Assistant Directer or his Enemy.. whenever opens his mouth blurts  Bad..."



Afterwards, goes to Actress and says.. "Avantika ji what are u doing..? simple running shot doesn't went  okay in 15-Shots yet.. why u starts Bharathanatiyam with your shoes.. " and she back fires him.., "Bunny ji.. your production Houses hasn't provided a pair of good quality shoes to me (looks at the actor) now you make him understand.. " Actor comes in  mid and supports Avantika and asks Directer why he is troubling Avantika,  and also tells Avantika to come under Umbrella otherwise her skin will get affects and become tang, also suggests Directer to shoot some other scene , let's schedule this one for tomorrow and by tmrw bring another comfortable pair of shoes for Avantika. Director tells them that from there last 15-Days schedule they shooter only three scenes and if the same goes on..  then the Producer will not allow him to even enter in his Office. 


Turns to his crew members and tell them to arrange the Set-up for the Scene, where hero-heroin jumps in water. Again the Actress starts her tantrums and asks him..., "is the water is clean na.. (Directer replies positively, while she continues ) that if she get skin- infection, then she will gets her treatment in US on producer's expense". Actor assures her that nothing will happen, he is there to save her and she gets agree. 



Scene starts, where the hero 'Tinku' and heroin 'Jalebi' were standing near the water fall and was all ready to jump -in  looks back to the goons who are following them,  the Herion jumps in and followed by hero who jumps to save her, he hold one hand, thinking that it's of Avantika, and drags her out and shocks..


Scene shifts to a bungalow :-

where a Door bell rings and lady goes to open it..  Abhijeet  sir enters and querries her that.., "is she sheetal? " giving a affirmative nod she allows them to enter in. Abhijeet sir asks her why she is scared and what's the matter?. sheetal answers them that Anjali and Rohan are her neighbours who came here to stay one month before and they also have 5-years old kid named Payel.. further adds that today earlier morning around 4am their maid takes Payel along with her in some car. when Purvi inquires regarding the presence of the payel's parents, sheetal denies and says that her parents left before leaving Payel with their maid 'Mansi'. Abhijeet sir again  queries her  that why she was awake at that odd timing,  to which she replied that she was not well and went to gallery to take her medicines and just then saw all these,  and also adds that Mansi is also having a Gun with her and the car's number. 


Payel's parents enter crys for their daughter. Payel's mother scold her husband for not doing Police verification of Mansi, to which Abhijeet sir scold him for the same and also ask. them for the photo's of Mansi and Patel both. 

Scene shifts back to shooting :-

After finding that the girl is not Avantika.. and shouts founds that it's a dead body of some other girl, just then  Directer comes and tell him that it's not part of his scene, infact he has to save the Herion rather than shout. Actor tells him that it's dead body and looks for Avantika who was shouting for help, all turns and found her drowning, one of the member goes and saved her. 

Bureao :-


Nikhil and Pankaj were  trying to find that Car in which Mansi ran away with Payel. whereas, Abhijeet sir, Daya sir and Purvi di were shown discussing that if kidnapers were planning to leave the state then they will cross any tol-naka, Abhijeet sir agrees with him. while, Purvi di says that what if they haven't cross any toll naka means if they are still in city and hidden somewhere. Just then Nikhil informs that the car was last seen in vasai and crosses daisu (sorry couldn't heard properly) toll naka. Abhijeet sir orders Pankaj to inform vasi police station immediately. 

Freddy sir enters with a man, introduce him as 'Rakesh' and also tell them that he used to do night duty in Go😲regao's Petrolpump and also adds that he saw that man, he bitten him badly. Rakesh tell them that man (kidnapper) bitten him at 6 in the morning just bcz he ask him for cash as his debit card machine was not working. Abhijeet sir tells him to make the sketch of that man and also ask for the wellness of that little kid Payel and Rakesh assures them. 


Payel's parents enters and ask that if they got any news of their Payel and Abhijeet sir assures them that till now from their investigation they found that Payel is safe and also ask them that if they got any phone call for ransom to which Payel's mother replies that why they will ask call them for ransom as the bungalow in which they are living was on rent and we don't have much money either. Nikhil enters and handovers them the sketch, Abhijeet sir ask Payel's parents that if they ever saw this man to which they denies.  Daya sir tells them to go, if they got further information regarding Payel will them, they leaves. 

Abhijeet sir goes to vasai, where the car was last seen, along with Freddy sir and Jayawanti.  Jayawanti informs that the name of Sketch's person is Jagan, he is goon and went to jail twice but never get arrested. Abhijeet sir gets a call and tells them that they will be there so, after disconnecting it informs the both that a lady's dead body Is found near Water fall wearing yellow colored suit. Jayawanti says that Mansi too wore the same colored one, they doubt that if the body is of Mansi and goes there. Jayawanti checks the body and says that she wore same clothes like Mansi did.  They sends the body to Forensic lab so that Dr Salukhe reconstruct the face of body as it's totally damaged. They looks near by to get  clue of that little girl Payel and driver Jagan. While, Abhijeet sir moves to Director and asks them how all this happen, Director explains him al. Abhijeet sir further querries them if they saw any stranger there with small kid, they denies. 



Jayawanti find's Hairband of a kid and calls out Abhijest sir, later on they find another dead body (notn of jagan)  got murdered with gun shot and jayawanti finds a cell phone from nearby brushes, there  was a msg in it "meet at fort with kid" Jayawanti says that lets trace the number and Abhijeet sir agrees and also adds that  let the man meet  with the  kid at fort. 

Scene shifts to a food corner where Jagan is present with Payel making her eat some snacks. Jagan gets a call and goes aside to attend it, whereas a lady is spying on them. Over phone Jagan tells someone that the kid is still with him and alive too, he wants his money fast after that disconnects the call and leaves with Payel. spying lady inform someone that everything is okay till now. 

Scene shifts to Forensic lab, where Dr. Salukhe informs them that the dead body of girl is of Mansi and on the cloth of another dead body's cloth the found DNA of three kids, to which they concludes that may the man used to kidnap children's. Nikhil and Panjak enters and tell them that the dead body of man they found near water-fall was of Balvant urf ballu and he is involved many crime and also lives in vasai with his brother. Daya sir leaves for vasai and Abhijeet sir for fort. 

Freddy sir in goons outfit reaches fort with another kid( dressed up like payel) Abhijeet sir with jayawanti and vansh were following them. Abhijeet sir says that if the man was unaware about Ballu's dead then he will surely come here to take the kid. Man comes and ask Freddy sir that where is ballu?,   to which he makes excuse and follows man.  They reaches to a place where another lady is waiting for them with briefcase , followed by team and also by the same lady who was spying over Payel.



Scene shifts to vasai (Ballu's home), where team (Daya sir, Nikhil and Purvi mam)  was present to investigate for chetan ( Ballu's brother),  but the neighbours  were not ready to tell them anything then team threatens them (I loved the way they threatens them.. ) and one lady comes forwards with a boy and tell them that he told us not to utter a word regarding chetan otherwise he kill us and introduce as kansa (May be),  then kansa takes them to  chetan. where he was pleading someone for his life, another man  was about to shoot when team arrives and a fight starts (with goggles). 


At fort, team reaches there and the lady tell them that someone called her that if she wanted to adopt a child then he can help me..  and the same sent her information and pic of Payel in revert he demanded 15 lac. They takes both to bureao, while Abhijeet sir goes to that spying lady and also takes her to bureao. 


In bureao,  chetan says he don't know anything and Lavanya says the man who called her is a resident of Mumbai. while the spying lady tells that she is Meenakshi and works for an NGO someone called them and told us to spy over Payel.. and she know where they are right now. They goes with her to an old bungalow, where they finds Jagan's dead body and Payel was absent from there. Abhijeet ask Meenakshi for the number (from which she got call to spy over payel) she handovers him,  he calls and finds the lady on the other side was non another then Sheetal (payel's neighbour) he introgates  her first then got shocked. 

Scene shifts to same water fall, where payel's parents were present with payel.  Her father tells payel that today he will show waterfall to payel,  she replies that already she came here with Mansi and Jagan. He makes her stand near cliff and pushes her but Payel's mother saves her somehow and hanged down holding her in lap.. Team reaches to the same water fall, and saw both hanging down, saves them. 



Abhijeet sir asks them whats all this? Anjali ( Payel's mother ) says that it's all because of Rohan (Payel's father) because of he she wasnt able to tell them anything to them. Rohan says when his eyes was on her all the time then how cid came to know about him. Abhijeet sir says that sheetal told them that Anjali usually uses her landline, turns to Anjali and that u are the one who kidnapped payel from jagan and mansi. She confess that yes she did all this but just save payel from Rohan and also to hand over her to her real parents. They ask real parent means they are not Payel's parents then who they are?  , Rohan replies that they are kidnapers and uses to kidnap infants, when they grew up little they  sells them..but dunno why this time his wife got attached with Payel and wanted to save her. Payel says she kidnapped Payel with the help of Mansi and Jagan but before they meet payel's real parents Balvant rug Ballu came and took Payel in, but Jagan killed Ballu and took Payel from there..  but in this fuss Mansi lost her life. Abhijeets says they will get a   sentence of  to hand till death for all the murders and crime they did. 



PS- sorry guys for my mistake, if u don't like then let me know will tell Shreya di to remove my name from Writter Updaterd list. 

and Thank you for reading πŸ˜Š

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very detailed update Pari  πŸ‘  β­οΈ
Thank you so much for the written update.

About the bureau part:
Nikhil informed that the car was last seen at Vasai.It had crossed Dahisar toll naka.
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Welcome to updater gang sis...Very details update...Thank you very much..Loved it.
Edited by binod.abhijeet - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: CT_Shreya

Wow amazing Pari. Very detailed. πŸ‘


Thank you Shreya dI.. πŸ˜Š late ho gaya na.. 
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Originally posted by: -beena-

Very detailed update Pari  πŸ‘  β­οΈ
Thank you so much for the written update.

About the bureau part:
Nikhil informed that the car was last seen at Vasai.It had crossed Dahisar toll naka.


Thank you Beena πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š ooh to its Dahisar, good listening power haan..  πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ will change it..  soon πŸ˜Š Thank you once again. 
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Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet

Welcome to updater gang sis...Very details update...Thank you very much..Loved it.


Thank you CA for your welcome πŸ˜› and praise.. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Š
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Congrats on your 1st WU Pari di.. Its lovely πŸ‘
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Very nice, detailed WU Parii sis. Loved reading it. πŸ‘ πŸ˜ƒ Keep it up! Welcome to the WU team.
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