#3 Devil's Bride manan ff link of thread 4 on pg 1

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simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#941

hey di...
amazing update...
so finally manik came to knw abt the truth...
n mukti is bck...
lt see wats going to hppn nxt ..
cntinue soonnn...di..
tc

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Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 9 years ago

#942

Damn intersting turn sweetoo.
And I'm happy present track is on the way.
And yeah ur PoV was awesome.
Poor nandni feeling worse just thinking she will lose her baby.
Ur one line just touched my heart.
" Love is about giving, first to yourself." It's damn true. Very deep thinking.
And the other one was" we thought life partners can complete us, but if we can't complete ourself then no one else can do" damn true yaar.
At the end I will say both are suffering.
I hope in present track we will see little bit caring manik. Little bit cozy cozy devil.
Come back soon with another update.

Edited by Sofiafarooq - 9 years ago

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Alishakhna1998

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Posted: 9 years ago

#943

nice

eagerly waiting for the next part

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#944

Ur too good ... Waiting for the next update... Ya but why Manik all of the sudden. ... Started behaving with nandu so badly... N started blaming her ... Waiting for the current track ... Update soon eagerly. Waiting... God bless u take care keep smiling... Take care 😊

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pinkrose90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#945

Awesome update! Great job. Thanks for the pm. 😃

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wissam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#946

my poor nandu manik did not trust her i knew but when he will comme to knew the truth he will regret he will die for her and i really don"t want her to forgive him so easilly no.no bcz he is really hurting and she is pregnant i wander what he saw or what he heard that he becam lik this he clearly love her but he cant controle his anger angry hulk lolll my pllr nandu i wanted to crie dam i'm so sad for her l hope every thing will be fine soon bcz my baby deserve happiness lots and lots of happiness

by the way good job loved the update awsome lik always update soon bye

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neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#947

Oohhh

so much pain

i m crying

nandini suffers here without her foult

why manik is behaving like this???

kahi dhruv ne to manik ke kan ni bhare na uski trip me???

thnx forpm

u r mindblowing

with each charecter u have done great job

sometimes ur writing makes me speechless that how someone can be so perfect that she can deal so easily to show wat she feels and want us to make feel

and believe me u have sucessed in this wat u wanna us feel u made us feel that only with ur each word

awesome update it was

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vyshnavivaiga

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Posted: 9 years ago

#948

Awsm!!!!
plz letz knw wat went wrong bw dem.
cant wait.

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devilkhushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#949

So Abe finally manik Will get to know that he is wrong n will rectify his mistakes but on pov nandini should punish him for not trusting on her love n honest toward their baseless n hateful marriage