Ek Maharana aur Ek Maharani Praja Poem

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys.
This is a poem on ajabde and pratap during Coronation.
I wrote this then but I couldn't post it
so now I am posting it
please read and review

here u go

Mewar mana raha kushiyan
sab de rahe badhayiyan
Rana ban rahe Pratap
rani ban rahi Ajabde.


Vinayak puja sampan hua
gau puja bhi samapth hua
mata ka darshan hua
pita ka yaad aaya.


pratap ko pagdi pehenane ka rasam aaya
chundwat ne pehenayi padgi
Rajmata ne kiya tilak
Aur bhillo ne bahaya rakth.


phir bulaya rani ko
paanch raniyo mein gayi ek
kyuki rana ne bulaya sirf ek ko
kaha "aayiye ajabde"


pandit ji ne aadesh diya stan grahen karne ko
rana ne kaha "ajabde aaj yaha humare sath virajegi"
baiti woh rana ke baayi aur
taki woh keh sake "rana ji hum sadaiw apka sewa karte hi rahenge"
Iska uttar tha "ajabde chahe aap sewa karen ya na karen hum toh sirf aur sirf aapse hi prem karenge aur aur aap hi rahengi humari maharani"


yah thi unke ankho ka kamal.
Sab ke samne bina kahe hue baath
ek adbudh maharana ke liye bani ke ajab deh wali maharani
Aur Pratap ke liye bani Ajabde

that is it for this one.
please read and review
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twilightlover29 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful Rosh 
It's simply beautiful 
TFS
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Beautiful Rosh 

It's simply beautiful 
TFS

thanx di
thank you so much😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanx ramya😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Refreshing! Haven't read a Hindi poem in a while.
Great job. Continue to share your creations 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jaz_

Refreshing! Haven't read a Hindi poem in a while.
Great job. Continue to share your creations 😊

thanx
will continue sharing more
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful peom rosh  love it
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Posted: 8 years ago
lovely poem...❀️...keep it up dear...πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful poem πŸ‘πŸ‘ loved it β€οΈ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi04

lovely poem...❀️...keep it up dear...πŸ‘πŸΌ

thanx rashi