Ek Maharana aur Ek Maharani Praja Poem

faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#1
Hey guys.
This is a poem on ajabde and pratap during Coronation.
I wrote this then but I couldn't post it
so now I am posting it
please read and review

here u go

Mewar mana raha kushiyan
sab de rahe badhayiyan
Rana ban rahe Pratap
rani ban rahi Ajabde.


Vinayak puja sampan hua
gau puja bhi samapth hua
mata ka darshan hua
pita ka yaad aaya.


pratap ko pagdi pehenane ka rasam aaya
chundwat ne pehenayi padgi
Rajmata ne kiya tilak
Aur bhillo ne bahaya rakth.


phir bulaya rani ko
paanch raniyo mein gayi ek
kyuki rana ne bulaya sirf ek ko
kaha "aayiye ajabde"


pandit ji ne aadesh diya stan grahen karne ko
rana ne kaha "ajabde aaj yaha humare sath virajegi"
baiti woh rana ke baayi aur
taki woh keh sake "rana ji hum sadaiw apka sewa karte hi rahenge"
Iska uttar tha "ajabde chahe aap sewa karen ya na karen hum toh sirf aur sirf aapse hi prem karenge aur aur aap hi rahengi humari maharani"


yah thi unke ankho ka kamal.
Sab ke samne bina kahe hue baath
ek adbudh maharana ke liye bani ke ajab deh wali maharani
Aur Pratap ke liye bani Ajabde

that is it for this one.
please read and review
Edited by faishar02 - 9 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

2.2k

Users

5

Likes

14

Frequent Posters

faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Beautiful Rosh

It's simply beautiful
TFS

thanx di
thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š
faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#3
thanx ramya๐Ÿ˜Š
Jaz_ thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Refreshing! Haven't read a Hindi poem in a while.
Great job. Continue to share your creations ๐Ÿ˜Š
faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: Jaz_

Refreshing! Haven't read a Hindi poem in a while.
Great job. Continue to share your creations ๐Ÿ˜Š

thanx
will continue sharing more
Smsm18 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Beautiful peom rosh love it
Piya04 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#7
lovely poem...โค๏ธ...keep it up dear...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
vibrantvibes thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Beautiful poem ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ loved it โค๏ธ
faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: rashi04

lovely poem...โค๏ธ...keep it up dear...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

thanx rashi
faishar02 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Lovely poem Roshniโค๏ธ

thanx nonie

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".