SS: Malignant Ardor - Page 5

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

U completely changed the story...😆

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And i totally loved it...

Protective SwaSan for Ragshya...

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Khub jamengi jodi...

Continue Soon

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Awesome concept.. 😛

You made Swalak siblings 😆

Swasan has so many similarities already I can see 😳

I can smell nok-jhoks on the way! 😉

Who's name is giving Swara so much pain? 

cont soon.

Wow...
Unique concept. ..
Lucky n swara siblings. . :)
Waiting for the next chapter. ..Edited by shreyaansh - 8 years ago

Very interesting concept, Sharon 😊 So who was Lucky referring to, which caused Swara to halt, remembering a person whose memory hurts her to this day? Does she have a past with Sanskaar? Or has she lost someone just like he lost Kavita?

Intriguing. 😊 And like how you have made Lucky into her younger bro, and Ragini into Sanskaar's younger sis. 😊 You will be continuing this after Dussehra?

Awesome waiting for next part... pm me please...

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very interesting concept, Sharon 😊 So who was Lucky referring to, which caused Swara to halt, remembering a person whose memory hurts her to this day? Does she have a past with Sanskaar? Or has she lost someone just like he lost Kavita?

Intriguing. 😊 And like how you have made Lucky into her younger bro, and Ragini into Sanskaar's younger sis. 😊 You will be continuing this after Dussehra?

Edited by Sparkler8 - 6 years ago

It means they both gng to ask help to fix this alliance😕. Anyway really well written. She is very protective towards her brother and towards her sister. Nice update. pls continue soon😊

swara and sanskar are very strict and strong personalities. I wonder how they will unite? ragya union also seems to be impossible due to swasan. both swasan are 2 side of same coin. I think ego rules here. this is a powerful concept dear.. I really loved to see both swara and sanskar are such a strong personalities. and they are self made.. I'm very happy that you make swara as a powerful business women. this update was fantastic. .. loved it.. poor raglak. hope swasan will not make their life miserable. swasan love hate saga is waiting for us na? .. continue soon... thank you for this awesome update...

Another sharp update dearie! I can just imagine the analytics running in both their minds... Cool, calculated and composed. 😎


Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 8 years ago