KaYa FF: Heart Beat PART 9 Pg 17 ( 14 th October) - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: piamastani

Beautifully written ...u have prefectly described kabir's dilemma that whether he should confess his love to his miss kashayap or not ...ur a good writer... waiting for ur next update ...continue soon dear...


hey
thank u very much
m glad u r liking my write ups
will surely continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
its awesome dear
I feel you are just superb!!!
Please upload the next chapter at your quickest... You write beautifully and trust me, I mean it!!
Love you for this!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asthana.shaily

its awesome dear

I feel you are just superb!!!
Please upload the next chapter at your quickest... You write beautifully and trust me, I mean it!!
Love you for this!!!


thank u 

u r an assistant prof in dept of English na?

then suggest me some improvements

because i still feel that I lack emotions
i write dialogues more than paras and I want to improve upon them
how can I do that?

plus my writings are just too immature
so what can I do to make them feel mature

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Posted: 8 years ago

"I love you Ananya 


And I really really do"


He kissed her on her forehead


But he panicked when he saw that she s now unconscious 


Now that s not a good sign 


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Malvika: Listen up everyone


9 baj rahe hai and Kabir , Ananya ka koi ata pata nhi hai


does anyone have any slightest idea ki woh dono kaha hai??


Manav : Kyaa baath hai Malvika?


Aise chilla kyu rahi ho?


Oh toh apne Editor in Chief sahab ab tak nahi aaaye hai


Arre apni star reporters Miss Ananya Kashyap bhi nahi dikh rahi


dono breaking news lene gaye hai ya breaking news banne ki taiyaari kar rahe hai


kya keheti ho Malvika?


Malvika: ohh plz Manav


ek suggestion doo


plz apna muh apne bulletin mai hi khola karo


kam se kam dono kisi story par kaam toh karte hai unlike you jo...


Ronnie: mam Ananya mujhe subah bata rahi thi ki Tinu ne usse koi solid lead bataiyi thi


shaayad Kabir sir aur Ananya wahi ho


Malvika: Then Ronnie tum Tinu ko phone karo and Richa tum Inspector Khurana ko phone karo


shaayd unhe kuch idea ho ki yeh dono kaha ho and kuch bhi ho toh mujhe inform karna


Manav: toh mai 9 baje ki bulletin ki taiyaari karu Malvika


mujhe nahi lagta Kabir Sahaab aa paayenge


Malvika ignoring Manav


Malvika: Richa agar Kabir naa aa paaye toh aaj raath ka bulletin tum padhna


(Meanwhile Ronnie had called up Tinu)


Ronnie: mam maine Tinu se baath ki aur usne kaha hai ki usne Ananya ko   ki Delhi ka mash hoor 


chocolate brand Choco-Tocco


baal mazdoori karata hai


jiske baare mai kisi ko nahi pata hai


woh bhi yeh koi latest cheez nahi hai


kaafi mahino se


Malvika: 9 bajne mai ek ghanta hai so 


ok guys mai Inspector Khurana se baath karti hu


umm Richa


Richa 8 baje hai tumhara bulletin ?


Richa: mam aaj saturday hai and mere mon-fri hota hai


Malvika: ohh haa mai bhool gayi


then guys listen up


Manav and Sunny tum dono woh chocolate factory jaao 


tum dono waha se live coverage pesh karoge


Richa hum on air jaa rahe hai 8:30 pm toh tum ready ho jaao


Ronnie tum PCR mai Richa ke live jaane ki taiyaari karo 


mai Inspector Khurana se baath kar ke aa rahi hu


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Inside the cold storage Kabir had no idea what to do 


Ananya s condition was worsening and all he could do was provide her his body warmth and


nothing else


All of a sudden the door burst open and there came Inspector Khurana with his team


Stretchers were bought in Ananya along with Kabir were taken to hospital


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Richa: Jaisa ki aap sab dekh sakte hai ki humaare editor in chief Kabir Sharma 


aur KKN ki senior journalist Ananya Kashyap ko kaise Choco-Tocco ke maaliko ne bandhi 


bana liya aur unhe apne hi factory ke cold storage mai band karke chod diya tha


Iss waqt humaare saath ghatna sthal par maujood hai Manav Gupta


toh Manav waha ki kya stithi hai?


Manav: Richa yaha par abhi thodi der pehele hi Inspector Khurana aur unki team ne pahuch kar 


yaha chaapa maara hai


 Choco Tocco ke maalik ka philhaal kuch ata pata nhi chal raha


Inpsector Khurana iss case par abhi aage kya kaarwaayi hogi


Khurana: abhi puri police force lagi hai maaliko ko dhoodhne mai


tab tak k liye yeh factory band hi rahegi 


Richa: Thank you Maanv 


jasie ki aap sab ne dekha ki Choco-Tocco ke maalik philhaal pharaar hai


hum iss case  par apni nazar banaaye rakhenge aur jaise hi kuch pata chalta hai aap sab ko 


bataaeyenge


 Ab aap sab Mujhe yaani Richa Likhaani ko dijiye ijaazat aur desh aur duniya ki tamaam khabro 


k liye dekhte rahiye KKN


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Mlavika: good one Richa


Richa: mam Kabir sir aur Ananya kaise hai


Malvika: Richa meri Inspector Khurana se baath huyi thi 


unn dono ko philhaal Fortis le jaaya gaya hai


Khalid comes into the PCR


Kh: Richa bahut acha padha aaj ka bulletin


So Mlavika Kabir and Ananya ka kya haal


Malvika: un dono ko philhaal Fortis le jaaya gaya


Kh: good then hum dono phir wahi chalte hai


Malivika: then


Richa abhi 9:30 baje hai


maine kuch logo ko line up kar diya hai  ek online panel discussion 


10 baje tum phirse live jaaogi  


And Ronnie I hope tumhe pata hai ki tumhe kya karna


Ronnie: yes mam


Malvika: Good then best of luck guys


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Hospital


Kabir had been given  few medicines and he became fine but Ananya had to be admitted


Meanwhile Anita Ji also came to hospital


Kabir: namastey Mrs Kashyap


Anita:Kaise ho Kabir aur yeh sab kaise huaa?


Kabir narrates everything to her


Anita: Ananya kaisi hai ab?


Kabir: pata nhi


dr ne abhi tak kuch kaha nhi hai


Anita: bahut dino se milna chaahti thi tumse par kabhi waqt hi nhi mila


Kabir Ananya tumhaare piche paagal hai


idol  maanti hai woh tumhe apna


Kabir: Jaanta hu mai Mrs Kashyap


Anita: Kabir jaha tak mai Ananya ko jaanti hu woh tumse kabhi na kabhi zaroor madad maangegi ki


Sudhir k case k liye


plz usse us waqt manna kar dena aur wajah tum bhi bahut ache se jaante ho kyu


Kabir: jee Mrs Kashyap


Edited by RaizadaPriya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.. 
I loved how Malvika put Manav on a side.. 
Hope Anaya is fine..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome dear
Loved the way malvika was handling kkn 

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Posted: 8 years ago
sirf chaar replies  

acha nhi tha kya yeh waala?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing is the word for you. Another awesome update but please write a long one next time its just a request.
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Posted: 8 years ago
very nice update... manav the danav😡 baaz nai ata apni harkaton se...
continue sooner & thanks for the PM..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update!! Read the last 2 and it was fab!!! Loved it so much!!! Hope Ananya becomes alright!! Fingers crossed!! Do update soon!!
Thanks for the pm!!