KaYa FF: Heart Beat PART 9 Pg 17 ( 14 th October) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manaalkhan

wow!! nyce update..!!
uhfff!! i so hate this shreya meetji churi...๐Ÿ˜ก
iski sweetness se pakka mjhe diabettes hojaegi..๐Ÿ˜†
any way... i hope ananya gains her consiousness soon..
update soon & thanks for the PM..


Ananya will take time

and yes i ll update soon and pm u 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Loving the updates. ..shreya is really a nagin as sunny says in the show. ...I wish kabir had not let her touch the baby. .

Waiting for the next update


thank u 

glad u liked it

will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Karela khana padega
othwys diabities ho jayegi


glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update yar!!!! Thanks for the pm!! Can't wait for the next update!!! Man Shreya is so ehhh!!! And I just love reading your FF
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shinyshajil

Awesome update yar!!!! Thanks for the pm!! Can't wait for the next update!!! Man Shreya is so ehhh!!! And I just love reading your FF


thank u very much

as for the next update

m not in a mood to write

but dont worry i ll update soon

and thank u once again
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Posted: 8 years ago

thank u 
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Posted: 8 years ago

A Month Later...


Doc's Cabin:


Kabir: Ananya ab kaisi hai doctor?


Doc: Kabir mai tumse kuch chupaana nhi chaahta hu


Ananya mai kuch improvement nhi hai


woh na tumhaare emotions par response de rahi hai,


na humaari treatment aur dawaaiyo pe



Kabir: Par woh theek toh ho jaayegi naa



Doc: Kuch keh nhi sakte Kabir


kuch keh nhi sakte


ab bass tumhara pyaar aur duaaye hi kaam aa sakti hai Ananya k liye


Miracles happen and you know that


bhagwaan aur apne pyaar par bharosa rakho Kabir sab theek ho jaayega



Kabir: Mai Ananya se milke aata hu


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Kabir: Hi Ananaya ..!!!


kaisi ho??


kya aise laiti hui ho


dekho bahaar baarish ho rahi 


tumhara favourite mausam


baarish mai bheegogi nahi kya


dekho baarish bula rahi hai


Kabir held Ananya s hand 's


Vaise pata hai humaari Kavu ko bhi tumhaari tarah baarish bahut pasand hai


jab bhi baarish dekhti hai na itni badi smile deti hai


tumse bhi badi


smile karte nhi dekhna chaahogi usse kya??


Itni bhi kya naraazgi mujhse


tumse yeh sach maine tumhaare liye hi chupaaya tha


tumhaare liye


tumhe bachane k liye 


yeh sab kiya tha maine


kyuki yeh sach barbaad kar sakta hai sab kuch


Kabir kept on speaking but didnt react at all


After leaving the hospital Kabir went somewhere which he had never imagined that he would go ever


in his life


But if he has to go there for Ananya 


He ll go without any hesitation




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Inside the cold storage


Kabir And Ananya were struggling to keep themselves warm


Kabir somehow was okay but Ananaya s condition was worsening


though she was wearing Kabir s jacket and was tightly held in Kabir s embrace( Kabir s effort


to keep her warm)


but Ananya was slowly loosening her consciousness


Kabir had too shake her , rub her arms and whisper her name every few seconds so that she does nt 


get in an  inert  state


but it was not having any effect on her rather she was becoming cold ...too cold


And Kabir was helpless 


he was not able to do anything for her


Somewhere deep down , he started having feeling for his Miss Kashap


Yes His Miss Kashyap 


He didnt have any idea what were his feeling regarding Miss Kashyap


as something like this never happened before in his life


He had a bitter past but never felt these emotions before before Miss Kashyap


Did he like her?? ...Or love her?? still a question


And did Miss Kashyap also have these feeling for him


The past few months have been a bliss to him


Joining KKN was only for professional gain


atleast he thought so but it turned out a personal gain too


Little did he know that he knew that he would fall for Miss Kashyap


Did he say fall for Miss Kashayp??


Indeed   Kabir Sharma the ruthless , the shrewd , the bad had fallen for a cute, free-spirited , bubbly


, innocent Miss Kashyap 


But was he worthy of her love?


Will she ever love him because his past is strongly connected to her life


A past which had somewhat destroyed both of their lives


The past which made them what they the are today


Kabir The Manipulative , shrewd , ruthless and what not Sharma


And Ananya carry the burden of running her house all alone , being the man in her house


and somewhere guilty for clearing off her father s name


In past few months Kabir learnt a new fact about himself that even he could be happy


Miss Kashyap though he disliked her first but then as he started to know her


little did he know that his life would have a drastic change like he ll be happy,


carefree and also tease Miss Kashyap


yes he loved to tease her too see her sulking or the puffed cheeks of her


all he wanted to do was pull her cheeks and say her that she looked sooo cute while sulking  


Indeed he had fallen for Miss Kashyap but was scared 


Will she ever return his feeling?


Did she love him ?


Would she accept him with his past?


Past...How can he tell her about it


He cant , he just cant


as it will be dangerous to her life , her family , her everything


he did nt want the ugly history to repeat


He cant afford to loose Ananya


No he cant..!!


He cant tell her the past..!!


Because if she gets to know about her Father s truth , she would start re investigating which he didnt


want


No he cant lose her


"I love you Ananya 


And I really really do"


He kissed her on her forehead


But he panicked when he saw that she s now unconscious 


Now that s not a good sign 

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Posted: 8 years ago
Love it ๐Ÿ˜Š
You wrote it beautifully ๐Ÿ‘
Last line is really scary and sad ๐Ÿ˜ญ hoping everything will will be good 
waiting for more ๐Ÿ˜‰
really excited to know what will happen next๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
uhff! yarr such an emotional update... i was about to cry seeing kabir's state as his life is lying on the hospital bed unconcious๐Ÿ˜ญ
ohk now i m eagerly w8ing to know whats gonna happen nxt...
update ASAP plxx... & thanks for the PM. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update..
Flashback was good..
So that's how kabir realized his feelings..
Oh no Ananya got unconscious..
Hope she is fine..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon