*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 4

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M_Nira thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Immensely loved the 2nd part. 

nicely written while the flashback part was a little bit sad for me!!

Chhavi ke pass jab bhi Viraf hota hai kitna khush hota hai...!! πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Giraffe & Chubby...awww , I always think that they might call each other by these names. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
He always teased her for her weight...but it is so cute!! πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³

Their phone conversation...beautifully written. 

That was lovely how he wished her and gave her the surprise. 

I agree with Viraf this song (Tum hi ho...) perfectly suits with ViCha too. 

Loved how you portrayed Chhavi's pov about Pracheen. 

Of course he is a cheap & πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ guy. 

but ek kaam achha hua...uska zikr hua toh Chhavi ko Viraf yaad aa gaya...!! 

After ViCha the one character I starts loving is Nadia ; she is the angel for her. 

Freddy's idea is good. And Viraf actually has changed after Ebi ; that is very prominent.

Chhavi *Caught you* "blue nahi black" πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

There were so many disgusting people around them who constantly caused misunderstanding between them.but after all that, deep down in their heart they still feels something very intense for each other. Viraf loves her so much & true love always wins. And that is why there is a hope that they both will find their way to each other. ❀️ β€οΈ β€οΈ  
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
Fantastic update dear.πŸ‘ Just loved the way you used Flashback and how Viraf made a plan to surprise Chhavi on her birthday.πŸ˜‰ The way he flirts with her is so lovely I always drool over him more and more when he flirts.😳 I have seen him in Kismat and he was fantastic in the show and that made me watch EBI.😊 Chhavi would thank her personally wow ahem ahem...πŸ˜‰ So Viraf has changed and now his friend suggest him to go out on a trip nice idea.πŸ‘πŸΌ Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
Hey Vartu,πŸ€— super cute update πŸ‘ specially the telephonic convo where Viraf wished Chhavi on her birthday and made it special with whole crew 😳. Obviously only he can make that plan? πŸ˜‰  Chhavi can thank her personally that is not only cool but lovely.😳 Chhavi beta you are caught red handed,πŸ˜‰ didn't u see the video of L'Oreal event? πŸ˜† Nadiia is really smart and witty reporter.πŸ‘πŸΌ I hate how much now Chhavi hate Pracheen.πŸ˜ƒ
Continue soon dear.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Lovely convo on phone and liked Nadiia who is playing as cupid. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Lovely update. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Do update fast

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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
Hey dear very fantastic update.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I loved the way Viraf wished Chhavi on her birthday. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Do continue soon,

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Posted: 8 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Viraf's surprise for Chhavi in the flashback was very sweet!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Their talk was so cute and adorable!!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
Thank u Shai and yes they are lovely πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Their calling each other Giraffe and Chubby is simple adorable and shows how close they were!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Soon they would be closer  😳 😳 😳

Viraf never leaves a chance to tease her about her weight!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

She is not at all over-weight but still he grumbles about lifting her!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
That's the way he teases her and get an irritated response, πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

His flirting is just too romantic and how can anyone not melt at that!!!!☺️ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ β˜ΊοΈ

But Chhavi is so unromantic and doesn't understand his feelings!!!!   
Abhi is ko akal nahi aayi hai let everyone tell her to use her brain and than she will never leave that chances. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

It was lovely when he finally wished her and sang for her!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

So he wants all of her days to be with him!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Obviously and we want that as well na?? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

His surprise for her was soo sweet and indeed she should thank him properly for it!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

Woh bhi kya din thhe and he is thinking about them!!!!   
Ha yaar I wish I would have been there on that time.

Viraf is very happy to know Chhavi has broken up with Pracheen!!!!   
Just like him we are happy as well.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š

I agree with Viraf that this song seems to be written for them!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
Obviously that's why it was used in the show as well. 😊 😊 😊

Good that Chhavi realized how Pracheen is and she is angry at him!!!!!    πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬

One thing good about it is that she remembered Viraf at the mention of Pracheen!!!!😳 πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
Yes she must now admit that Viraf suggested her a good thing but she didn't pay attention to it that time. πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Nadia is a sweetheart and tries to get Chhavi down to repairing the damage done!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Obviously she should πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Freddy is right that Viraf has changed after EBI ended and that is very obvious to everyone!!!!    πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

He even guessed that the girl is Chhavi and rightly too!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Aur kaun ho sakta hai is ka reason na? 😳 😳 😳

Freddy's idea of getting some change is good and hopefully that would improve things for him!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
N what more it will do will surprise you as well.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Nadia seems to like Viraf a lot and I love it that she praises him for the L'Oral event!!!!😊 πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Just like us 😳 😳 😳

Nadia teasing Chhavi over Pracheen was too funny and she was so irritated!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Caught you Chhavi and Nadia is fantastic!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰     πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
She did that purposely πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Really Chhavi doesn't know what she wants and I hope she realizes soon!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
She has to...mai hoon na to make her realize that.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

This part is wonderful!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Thanks a lot Shaina that u loved my update and thanks again for such lovely comment. πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful Update Vertika...πŸ‘
thanks Khadeja
πŸ€—

That is sweet Viraf planned surprise for Chhavi.
Their talk was so cute and adorable 😊
Just like him na? πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

He is happy that Chhavi broke up with Pracheen.
Only if he knows actually they had no relation πŸ˜›
We are happy as well if it would have happen than. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

He misses her very much.
we miss them

Chhavi is angry on Prachen, really he shouldn't do that.
That's good now she actually know how is he? 😑 😑 😑

Viraf was caught by his friend about Chhavi πŸ˜ƒ
Bus har jagah Chhavi, all is just because of Chhavi. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Nadia was testing Chhavi, now Chhavi caught by her πŸ˜†
Black not Blue πŸ˜‰
Really she doesn't know what she wants πŸ˜”
I hope she realizes.
She will realize it soon and she keeps all info about him no matter what she shows. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Just love the whole part.
Update soonπŸ˜ƒ



A big thank u Khadeja that you liked my effort.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

Wow nice startπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
thank you dear 
πŸ€—

 
Giraffe and chubby uff mardala 😳😳😳
So so so so cute
Aub kitni beqarari hai BD wish kerne ki ☺️☺️
Honi hi hai aakhir Viraf has started feeling something for her.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Beechara kitna preshan hojata hai jub chhavi ko bahon mein lena hotoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Love their NOK JHOKπŸ‘πŸ˜³
They are always cute while doing it.

And finally he wished her
And sang a song in his chocolati sweet melodious voice❀️❀️
Its very romantic and mesmerizing the way he flirt ❀️
But chhavi is so dumb(sorry) and unromantic sara muzza
Kirkira kerdiyaπŸ˜•
Pata nahi ye itna dumb behave kyoun karti hai kabhi kabhi mujhe bhi bahut gussa aata hai.😑 πŸ˜‘ Par kya karein ye munda jo us pe fida hai.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Chaavi ne kitne haq se gift manga yahi chemistry dil ko achi lugti hai donon ki
Kisi ki nazer na lugeπŸ‘πŸΌ
Sach me


Sodhi ji bhi bude chunge hai jiπŸ‘πŸΌ
Lovely flashback darling πŸ€—

thank u so much 😊 😊 😊

Viraf ki feeling bohot strong hain chhavi keliye hope juldi se yeh sach hojaye
Perfect song played by RJ Neil
(Naam
Suna suna sa lugta hai )

Haan mujhe bhi  πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Chhavi ka opinion mr. Pracheen 🀬ke bare mein change hogaya bohit acha howaπŸ‘πŸΌ
Akhir viraf ki yaad phir agayi☺️☺️☺️

Aani hi thi jo humara well wisher hota hai us ki yaad aati hi hai kabhi na kabhi. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Nadia is such a sweetheart πŸ€—
Viraf kiya hum sab change hogaye freddy Ebi ke baadπŸ˜”πŸ˜”

Par Nadia humare changes nahi dhoondh sakti na bus Viraf k dhoondh sakti hai. πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Again do doston ki batein
Love their bonding

yup that was sweet πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ


Uff chhavi ka jhoot pukra gayaπŸ˜‰
Nadia ne kamal kerdiya πŸ‘
Haan aur drama to aise karegi jaise she doesn't know anything.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Chhavi please auone dil ki suno
Hum sab yeh sach hona dekhna chahte hain
Dimag nahi lagana chahiye dil ki baaton me us ko bus dil se soche.


Mahak kiya likha hai bohot piyaraπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Interest level kahin bhi kum nahin hota berhta jata hai
Likhti raho aur hum muze lele ker perhte rahein
πŸ€—
I will try my best πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Great job dear
thank u 😊 😊 😊

πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ



thank u so much darling for such lovely comment πŸ€—πŸ€— Edited by Mahak Sinha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: kumari27

Wonderful start dearπŸ‘
thank u sweetheart  πŸ€—

Viraf never missed any chance to tease her abt weIghtπŸ˜†πŸ₯±
the thing which he does daily πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Cute phone conversation❀️
thanks 😊 😊 😊

Viraf is happy now to know her relationship status.πŸ˜›
so as we πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Nadia is cute Frnd who know how to get things from chhavi.
So we make it  πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Akhir chhavi ne admit kiya ki usne vedio dekha😳
Ghuma fira k Nadia ko admit karwana pada akhir. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Kitna time le rahi chhavi dill ki awwaaz sunne me. β€οΈ
Ab jaldi hi karegi akhir mai jo karwaaongi.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Jaldi update kijihega ...intezaar rahega



Thanks a lot dear for such lovely comment
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Immensely loved the 2nd part. 


nicely written while the flashback part was a little bit sad for me!!
Thank u πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š and I know it was a bit painful.😭 😭 😭

Chhavi ke pass jab bhi Viraf hota hai kitna khush hota hai...!! πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š πŸ˜Š
Sach me pata nahi kahan se Pracheen aa gaya beech me. 😑 😑 😑

Giraffe & Chubby...awww , I always think that they might call each other by these names. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
He always teased her for her weight...but it is so cute!! πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³ πŸ˜³
We all love that and the style he gives her names is damn lovely. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Their phone conversation...beautifully written.
thank u πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

That was lovely how he wished her and gave her the surprise.
That was the most beautiful thing he did for her.


I agree with Viraf this song (Tum hi ho...) perfectly suits with ViCha too.
Yup when I saw them in temple scene I understood that time this songs suit them.

Loved how you portrayed Chhavi's pov about Pracheen. 

Of course he is a cheap & πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ πŸ€¬ guy.
He doesn't deserve anyone. 😑 😑 😑

but ek kaam achha hua...uska zikr hua toh Chhavi ko Viraf yaad aa gaya...!!
Bcz he was the man who warned him about Pracheen.

After ViCha the one character I starts loving is Nadia ; she is the angel for her.
Their cupid πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Freddy's idea is good. And Viraf actually has changed after Ebi ; that is very prominent.
Ye baat vo bus dikhana nahi chahta bus πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Chhavi *Caught you* "blue nahi black" πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Laakh chupa lo pyar to hai.😳 😳 😳

There were so many disgusting people around them who constantly caused misunderstanding between them.
totally agree with u πŸ‘πŸΌ
πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

but after all that, deep down in their heart they still feels something very intense for each other. Viraf loves her so much & true love always wins. And that is why there is a hope that they both will find their way to each other. ❀️ β€οΈ β€οΈ 
they will be we have high hopes about that.




A big thank u Nira dear πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— Edited by Mahak Sinha - 8 years ago