The handkerchief and the bracelet- KaYa OS

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Posted: 8 years ago
The Handkerchief and the bracelet-KaYa OS 
I know..u must all be thinking i Hv gone mad..posting this OS now..but I wrote it a while ago..and I will appreciate if u guys read it and let me know ur view.Ok guys..this is my version of how the handkerchief fiasco goes..I know it is nowhere close to the real track..but I sort of wanted this to happen.. Kabir doesn't have to be the only person who has a past,others can have one too :P :P

"Kabir.. Agar Tum Mujhe bhul gaye ho to ye rumal tumhare pass Kya kar raha hai?" Shreya asked kabir,looking him right in the eye. Kabir glared at her. Ananya stood shell shocked and frozen. Kabir angrily responded "Kaminapan nahi Gaya hai tumhara. Aur kuch bacha nahi Bolne ke liye ?" Shreya replied "Mere sawal ka jawab nai diya tumne." No one noticed that amid all this ananya was fidgeting almost guiltily with her bracelet,not paying much attention to the two. Kabir turned to reassure ananya, but she didn't look at him and without a word, left the room. Shreya smirked. Kabir gave her a death glare and said "You will not get away with this shreya. And that's my promise." Saying this,he left the room and ran after Ananya. He assumed that she wud be greatly upset,and he wanted to make up with her at the earliest.

Ananya was sitting on a bench outside the gates of the KKN office,still fidgeting with her bracelet. Tears had formed in her eyes. She held up her hand,and stared hard at her bracelets. The tears escalated and she cried,breaking down. Kabir came there and found her looking at her bracelets and crying. This puzzled him. Confused,he stared at her for a while and then walked up to her. When she saw him walking towards her,she hurriedly tried to wipe her tears,not wanting him to see. He cupped her face with his hands,and made her look at him. "Kya hua,ananya?" He asked her softly. She stared into his eyes. "Kuch nai..I'm sorry.." She was saying but he cut her off "I'm sorry for that,ananya..yes,the handkerchief was given to me by shreya.. But I don't keep it as a token of love. I did love her,but I don't anymore. U r my life and my world. I keep that handkerchief to remind me that I made a mistake once,and I can't make that mistake again. I keep it to remember all that she made me go thru. It keeps me grounded in all situations and helps me to get a grip on myself. I had decided to keep it always with me to never ever get on the wrong path again and always be on the right track. That's it,ananya. Nothing else. I love you and only you. More than my life and the entire world combined." "I don't hold it against u,Kabir. I understand..there r somethings which at times we don't want to give up.." She said and her gaze flickered to her bracelet again. Now,Kabir was curious. "Y do u keep staring at ur bracelets?" He asked her. She avoided his gaze  and said "What? Can't I look at my own bracelets? It's a democratic country!" Saying so she got up and was abt to leave when he pulled her back on the bench,almost on top of him. She shivered at the close proximity.

Tracing her face with his hands, he asked her " Tell me. What's the matter? U r behaving weirder than usual! If that handkerchief doesn't bother u,then y r u crying? And y r u looking so guilty?" Ananya moaned. She so wished she cud avoid this discussion. Finally she told him "These bracelets..they were given to me by nikhil oberoi.(Her ex bf,in my fictional world. See my other OS's.)As a gift. And till date I wear them bcoz they give me strength and keep me going in all situations." She said,closing her eyes and dreading his reaction. She opened them to see various emotions flicked his face- Shock,realisation, anger,a bit of jealousy and a hint of sadness.. The shock was most prominent. Finally he said "U r very bad for my ego. Here I thought I was the only one who had a past,an ex and a tragic story and u then u go ahead and prove me wrong." With a slight smile. He then continued,not letting her interrupt "Remember when I said that I'm a very possessive boyfriend? I meant it,I damn meant it. This nikhil better not be trying anything with u NOW.." Ananya laughed. "Sorry,sorry..I knew u were expecting a classic reaction of jealousy..sorry to disappoint u! And whatever was between me and nick has run its course. We r just friends now.I love u and only u. And I hv one request..Plz,burn that handkerchief. U keep it as a symbol of hate. Mera pyar kafi nai hai?" Those words were all he needed to hear. The handkerchief found its way to the fire. 

The next day,a gift was there on ananya's doorstep. She opened it and found a stunning diamond and gold studded bracelet. Her breath was blown away,and she gasped at the beautiful jewellery. Suddenly she heard a voice "Well my possessiveness got the better of me.. So from now u will wear THIS bracelet gifted by ME." Ananaya screamed and jumped into his arms. "U really know how to sweep a woman off her feet. I love u to infinity!!" Kabir smiled and sealed his lips with hers in a hot,passionated,drugging and possessive kiss which lasted for QUITE a long time...

Plzzz do review :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
U wrote it really beautifully
I loved itπŸ‘

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Choclate...

U wrote it really beautifully
I loved itπŸ‘


Thanks a lot πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aash2302

Res. ..review later..



Waiting πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago

Still waiting for the review πŸ˜†
Come on guys thoda to response do.. Accha nai hai kyaπŸ˜•?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naturegirl99


Still waiting for the review πŸ˜†
Come on guys thoda to response do.. Accha nai hai kyaπŸ˜•?


hey I had read it that day only when I got home , cant stay away from a KaYa OS😳 but forgot to mention here 

your writing style is amazing . Its very well written 

Keep it up. The emotions and imagery you used were very good

Though I am a little possessive about Ananya too, I want her to belong only to Kabir in the past, present and future πŸ˜³

go ahead you can accuse me of double standards because that is what they are πŸ˜† 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NandiniRaizadaa


hey I had read it that day only when I got home , cant stay away from a KaYa OS😳 but forgot to mention here 

your writing style is amazing . Its very well written 

Keep it up. The emotions and imagery you used were very good

Though I am a little possessive about Ananya too, I want her to belong only to Kabir in the past, present and future πŸ˜³

go ahead you can accuse me of double standards because that is what they are πŸ˜† 


Hahaha..thanks a lot..no I won't accuse u,i feel the same..I just wanted Mr Sharma to not be too caught up in his own world and see his reaction of he gets to know Ananaya has a past too..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sigh,.i wish more ppl had read this one :( 
But no problem,cheers..to reporters!! πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
Write another one and make it romantic 
You write well dear 


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: NandiniRaizadaa

Write another one and make it romantic 

You write well dear 



Thank u..for someone who is barely 16 that's a huge compliment πŸ˜Š