Collision - A MaNan Fan-Fiction Ch-11, pg-31 - Page 14

It ended too soon :'( I wanted more much more :'(
This was quite an interesting update, I liked Manik's foul mood regarding her questioning his manhood :p it kinda gave me pheels :p
I loved how Eric and Manik stood by her while this whole her being his sis thing was out..
last part was the bad, though I didn't like sudden entry of Eric :| thora late aajata tou :p

All in all a really well thought and extremely well jotted part, many different parts of Nandu's life you tried to show and all those fitted in well..

Won't say update soon cuz I know I've bug u for update and I'll happily do that..

Hey...

I seldom post anything. But your FF deserves appreciation. Maybe it reminds me of high school with its elite groups, popular boys & girls, the wall flowers & the occasional so called baddies - totally relatable. As an author you definitely know your characters & you have molded them picture-perfectly in their respective roles.

Wohooo!!

RES ❤️
To be unressed tomorrow! :D
As it turned out my tomorrow became 7 days!😆
I love this story so so much!
I cracked up so bad in this chapter!🤣
Manik and Eric doing each other?!🤣
I love Nandini's sense of humour!
And that elaborate Manik tease session which was followed by a glorious 'should I show you how straight I am?' Oh! This is bliss!
Reading your stories makes me want to write too! Such an inspiration you are!😳
Oh God! I want a brother like Eric Like RIGHT NOW! Why did you make him so adorable, I curse my sister for being the bad sister that she is and Eric makes me want to curse her even badder!😆
I am running back to read it again as it seems you won't be able to update today.😭
But if you do, Hugs and kisses for you!
Love you😳
Edited by Cooldude101 - 8 years ago

That was another wonderful update !

Edited by asmi.6 - 8 years ago

i guess this chappy s longer than ur usual😕

Hey really very  sorry fr commenting late but was down with fever anyways,

W.O.W. 

It has been so long