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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Humnava
Awesome OS dear Viji. Loved it vry much!!😃

-Aheli.

Thanks so very much Aheli sweetheart 🤗

So glad that you loved this OS.

Love

Viji

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Today part ...im back sissy...
FRANKLY telling...reading your writing skills...each words...literally making me fall more and more for swasan...
Cute,sweet OS sissy,,.

Wonderful morning to both... 😃 ...
"You missed her,You mean"...hahaha..so correct 😳

Movie idea..was perfect sissy...cute argument..(loved to imagine that part) 😳
AC 😡 .. 👏 ...Even single things played important role in their lives...Ac I love this...16 and 25..(hahah)...
Mutual deal 😳
I loved it sissy...

Love
Lekah

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: leku
Today part ...im back sissy...
FRANKLY telling...reading your writing skills...each words...literally making me fall more and more for swasan...
Cute,sweet OS sissy,,.

Wonderful morning to both... 😃 ...
"You missed her,You mean"...hahaha..so correct 😳

Movie idea..was perfect sissy...cute argument..(loved to imagine that part) 😳
AC 😡 .. 👏 ...Even single things played important role in their lives...Ac I love this...16 and 25..(hahah)...
Mutual deal 😳
I loved it sissy...

Love
Lekah

Hey Leku my dear pal 🤗 🤗

Thanks so much yaar. You saying that reading my works makes you fall more and more in love with SwaSan---that's the best compliment I could have got. Really made me feel so touched and humbled. 🤗

Yup, Sanskaar had certainly missed Swara terribly on his business trip, and she had missed him a lot as well. 😳 At this stage, they still feel they are "best friends", but have started feeling more for each other. Haven't yet accepted or analyzed their deeper feelings, though. 😉

Since they have started becoming a bit possessive about each other, they have some cute nok jhoks about the movie selection. 😆 Sanskaar feels a bit peeved that Swara admires Siddharth Malhotra, and Swara likewise, feels a little irritated that Sanskaar admires Deepika Padukone. 😉

And the A/C dispute 😊-- I had a lot of fun writing that, and am so very glad to hear you liked it too. They reach a compromise temperature setting of 21 degrees 😆

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Amazing OS :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha
Amazing OS :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)

Thanks Sumana 🤗

Very happy to hear that you loved this OS.

Cheers

Viji

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Dear Viji 😊😊.

Such a sweet , cute and lovely OS.

Superb imagination and vey well wrtten 👏👏.

Loved it .

Perfectly described their moments together

and I loved that there was no Ragini there to disturb them😆.

"You missed her ,You mean "

And then "Ofcourse I did ,why wouldn't I? she is my friend " .

Their bonding was surely more than friends

but he wasn't ready to accept it.😉.

And the crossword puzzle 😊 Wow what a idea .

Raginic 😆😆 ...That was hilari

ous 😆

Next clue was ... Angelic female spirit in Hindu mythology ,

and sanskar said "Swara "before he could stop himself ❤️

And answer was Apsara ...

So Swara is Apsara for Sanskar 😳😳

Indeed she is 😊

And their conversation regarding to the movie ...Brilliant👏

Swara and sanskar ,

both were getting irritated as she was admiring siddharth and he ...Deepika😆

And about AC convo ...🤗🤗

Loved it ...Totally 😊😊

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Sree

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Wow Viji!!

A really refreshing one. Short and sweet.

Deepika and Sidharth both are my favorite actors. And it's true that Sid needs to improve his acting skills.

Ragini's redemption has not happened yet in this one huh? Since this before her redemption in the serial did you manage to write one? A more convincing one. Please send a link if you had.

Love

Sree.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Alvapriya
Dear Viji 😊😊.

Such a sweet , cute and lovely OS.
Superb imagination and vey well wrtten 👏👏.

Loved it .

Perfectly described their moments together

and I loved that there was no Ragini there to disturb them😆.

"You missed her ,You mean "

And then "Ofcourse I did ,why wouldn't I? she is my friend " .

Their bonding was surely more than friends

but he wasn't ready to accept it.😉.

And the crossword puzzle 😊 Wow what a idea .

Raginic 😆😆 ...That was hilari

ous 😆

Next clue was ... Angelic female spirit in Hindu mythology ,

and sanskar said "Swara "before he could stop himself ❤️

And answer was Apsara ...

So Swara is Apsara for Sanskar 😳😳

Indeed she is 😊

And their conversation regarding to the movie ...Brilliant👏

Swara and sanskar ,

both were getting irritated as she was admiring siddharth and he ...Deepika😆

And about AC convo ...🤗🤗

Loved it ...Totally 😊😊

Hey Harshada my dear 🤗 🤗

Thanks so very much. Am very happy that you loved this OS.

I wanted to show the gradual by steady deepening of the SwaSan relationship, from their close friendship to their deep and intense love for each other. Plus, I really wanted to show them having some fun times together, going to movies, playing some games, doing the crossword together. 😳 Like a couple. 😉

At the stage this OS is set, Sanskaar and Swara have started developing feelings for each other. There is definitely some possessiveness there 😉, hence all the cribbing about Siddharth Malhotra and Deepika Padukone. 😆

Very happy that you liked the crossword clues and Sanskaar's response to each one; as well as their AC negotiation. 😉

This OS is a midquel to my very first SwaSan fic, my 3S titled "It was written in the stars ". You could read that when time permits.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Sree8410
Wow Viji!!
A really refreshing one. Short and sweet.

Deepika and Sidharth both are my favorite actors. And it's true that Sid needs to improve his acting skills.

Ragini's redemption has not happened yet in this one huh? Since this before her redemption in the serial did you manage to write one? A more convincing one. Please send a link if you had.

Love

Sree.

Hey Sree 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton dear. Am so glad to know that you loved this piece. This was a midquel to the very first Fic I wrote, my SwaSan 3S "It was written in the stars ". Don't recall if you've read that already, if not, do read as and when time permits.

Deepika is my favorite actress, I am neutral towards Siddharth Malhotra, but he was quite good in "Kapoor and Sons". Have you seen the film?

I had written a 3S titled "Music of the Soul " covering the SwaSan reconciliation after their MU following Ragini's kidnapping drama, as well as Ragini's redemption. It is on my index dear, along with all my completed SwaSan works. You could go through that when time permits.

Thanks again for your comment.

Lots of Love

Viji