Rishbala ff OM SHANTHI OM- chapters 6 updated page 20 - Page 2

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really good start dear!!! continue soon!!!
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plot seem interesting ...😃
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First of all Congo on your new story babes 🥳🥳

OK so the character sketch is looking good . 

Abhay as usual a vampire 🤣 but Geet is his love 😲😲 So first time an unusual pairing of Abheet rather than Abhiya or Maneet . Quite interesting 👏👏

Alright so Maan and Geet both are dead as in one dies out of accident and other one is killed and reason is unknown that means someone has killed both of them . OK I am waiting for the story to unfold now ...

OK so Rishbla are the reincarnation of Abheet . Not bad 😛😛 .. Lets see how you have planned the future chappys . 😳😳

Nice concept of reincarnation which mostly writers don't take but you have taken it so I am quite excited to know what is Rishbala revenging for and how and how they will meet and story starts . 😳😳

Update soon  😛😛

TC  😛

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Welcome to the Forum Meriliah, agree with you.