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Thank u for all the comments. Here is the last part. I am so sorry for being so late. Thank u for waiting.

Part 2
At night
Priya is in her room and working in her laptop
Priya gets a call
P: hello yes may I know who is calling? What work do u have that u are calling a girl so late at night?
R: Priya Priya its me ram
P: sorry ram
R: it's ok. Wat are u doing?
P: just wOrking on my laptop
R: ok ok. I was thinking if we go for dinner tomorrow
P: Yea sure. Ok then good night
R: good night

Next day
P: papa Aaj Shaam Ram n me are going for dinner
S: ok beta

Evening
Priya is waiting for ram and he comes and takes her to beach resort..
Ram and Priya have reached the resort and Priya just loved it.
R: chale
P: can't we be outside
R: ok as u say

Ram tells to set the dinner outside..
R: liked the place?
P: I just loved it
R: thank you
P: welcome

They sit at their place for dinner. Ram orders juice and some veg starters.. At a distant Vikram (Rams best friend) spots ram with a girl..

(Vikram has been away since long and has no contact with ram and he finds him today here)

V: Neha vo ram lag raha hai na
N: ha vo ram hi hai. Vo kiske sath?
V: usne shadi kar li?
N: pata nahi
V: but kaise jaye samne.. Hum itne saal bad
N: he will be happy to see us.. We have to go

Vikram reaches there
V: ram
R: Vikram tum yahan? Akele ho ?
V: Neha Bhi hai
R: kitne saal bad. How much I missed u guys. You were my only friends and u both also left me..
V: I am sorry yaar. Now we are here with u and will never leave u alone. U didn't tell me u got married? Bhabhi se toh milao.
R: Teri would be bhabhi. We are engaged and will get married soon. She is my would be wife Priya And Priya they are my best friend Vikram and his wife Neha
P: hi happy to meet u both. Why don't u join us for dinner ?
N: sure

They do lots of chit chat and Priya gets mixed with them easily and Neha becomes good friend of Priya.. And they say bye to them after dinner

In car
P: ram aapke sirf Ye do hi friends hai? I heard u saying ur only friends
R: yes Priya they are just my friends and very good friends
P: that's great..
R: Ye lo pahunch Gaye
P: thank u ram
R: your welcome

Priya reaches home
Ship: Kya hua?
P: kuch nahi ma. I met ram k best friends there after a long time he too met them.
Ship: achha
P: or bht baatein ki unse..
Ship: ok chal so ja
P: ok good night

Priya goes to her room and changes n lies on her bed. Just then she receives a message
R: reached home.
P: good
R: and say how did u like the place And sorry our date got spoilt. Neha n Vikram came
P: I don't need ur sorry. In fact I am very happy to meet your best friends and from today they are also my friends
R: thank you Priya. Aaj tak kisine Mujhe Aise nahi samjha.
P: there is no need of thanks. Now u go and sleep. Good night
R: ok Priya good night

In the next few days marriage is decided and it will be in a week. The nearest shubh din for marriage.

Flashback ends

Present ram is in his room sitting alone and talking to himself
R: Priya me janta Hu tum bht miss Karti ho sabko. Me Bhi karta Hu. I just wanna return back home but kaise jau. Jo hamare shadi se pehle hamari companies me hua how can I ?
Ram has tears in his eyes..

Flashback continues
All the shopping is done of marriage and is the sangeet. All are getting ready. But who knew what would come it's way.
Flashback ends

Present
R: wakt AA Gaya hai tumhe Sab batane ka
He goes to Priya and sees him sitting on the sofa..
R: Priya tumse baat karni hai
P: Mujhe nahi karna
R: please Priya
P: Kya hai?
R: Tum janna chahti ho na hum Kyu aaye sabse dur..
P: ha I want to know par aap toh kabhi nahi batate ho
She goes to the window and ram goes behind her and just hugs her n cries.
Priya also had tears in her eyes..
P: ram chup ho jao
Ram calms down in sometime
P: ab batao Kya hua tha ?
R: chalo wahan bethte hai
They are sitting and ram starts
R: Ye hamare sangeet k wakt hua tha
P: u were looking tensed. I could feel it
R: yea now I will tell u the full thing

Flashback continues
We see in Kapoor industries a man transfers so much of fund which is 20 crores in Rams personal account..
Amarnath usually gets call about the transfer and all.

All are enjoying the sangeet. Ram is looking handsome in brown sherwani and Priya in lehenga. In middle ram gets a message and is shocked
R(thinks): how is this possible? Who has done this??
Amarnath on the other hand thinks ram has done something and waits for the sangeet to get over.

Priya senses ram is not in his state
P: r u ok?
R: yes yes just office pressure
P: ok but now u enjoy

All dance on the dance floor. Finally raya dance on a song "bahon me chale aao"

"

Baho me chale aao - (2)
Ho hamse sanam kya parda,
oh hamse sanam kya parda
Yeh aaj kaa nahee milan,
yeh sang hai umar bhar kaa
Baho me chale aao,
ho hamse sanam kya parda
Oh hamse sanam kya parda Mm
oh chale hee jana hai najar churake yun Phir thami thi sajan tumne meri kalayi kyun hmm) - (2)
Kisi ko apna banake chhod de, aisa koyi nahee karta Baho me chale aao,
ho hamse sanam kya parda Oh hamse sanam kya parda

Ram hugs her and both lost in each other and the song.

After sangeet
Kapoors reach home..
A: ram u needed 20 crores
R: papa why would I need? I don't know who did it?
A: rehne do ram. If u needed u could have told me but why did you take from company's account
R: Mene kuch nahi Kiya hai. Me nirdosh Hu
A: har koi Aisa karta hai galat kam Karke. Go to your room and don't talk to me now

Ram goes to his room in anger and decides if this is the case after my marriage I will leave India and work at USA. Let me contact my previous company at USA

R: hello sir this is ram Kapoor. Actually I wanted to apply for job.
Michael: you are welcome ram. We wanted you badly back. You are welcome.
R: thank u sir thank u so much. I would come in 15 days after my marriage
M: ok ram. Congratulations
R: thank you sir

Ram calls up Priya
R: sorry Priya I am late. I want your passport.
P: passport ??
R: actually after marriage we are going to USA as I have got a job there
P: what?
R: plz don't say anything plz
P: ok ram

Next day Priya gives the passport and he does all the work which was needed. And it's one day for marriage and all is set.

Next day all the rituals like the haldi and all is done and the reach the marriage hall.

Ram and Priya marriage is done.

R: I want to say something to you all.. I have got a job in USA
Priya is looking sad and all are shocked..

R: ma I am sorry but I promise Priya ka achha khayal rakhunga...
P: ma I will miss u..

They hug and take blessings from elders.

They are waiting for bidai rasam and Vikram comes to ram
V: ram congratulations
R: thank u
V: Tum Kyu USA?
R: Tu office ka kuch issue hai. Mene Kapoor industries chod di hai.
V; Kya hua
R: idhar AA chal
Ram tells him what happened
V: Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Tu kabhi nahi karega ye
R: but papa isn't listening

Shipra comes chaliye Sab bidai ki rasam k liye
Priya meets all one by one and cries a lot
Sudhir: ram beta meri Priya ka achhe se khayal rakhna
R: ji papa aap Chinta mat kariye

Soon they leave for Kapoor mansion

Priya kicks the Kalash and comes inside. Ram n Priya go inside and go for the ceremony. They do the ritual of finding the ring. Priya finds the ring first.

Dadi: chalo ab jao Kamre me. It's very late. Parso tumhe nikalna Bhi hai.
R: ji dadi.
Nuts take Priya to Rams home and ram is in study talking to Vikram n Neha

R: I will miss u both
V: u won't ram. Humne dadi se promise Kiya hai Tum dono k sath rahenge
R: means u both?
N: ha Buddhu we both are coming to USA
Ram hugs them..

Then Priya goes to the room
P: ram
R: ha Priya
P: I want to know Kya hua hai
R(thinks): Abhi kaise bolu. I don't want ki Tum Bhi papa k tarah
P: ram
R: I will tell u when the correct time comes
P: ok

R: Priya I
P: Kya hua?
R: I love u. Love u so much. Thank you for coming in my life. I always need u by my side.
P: I love you too ram. Really u r so special for me. Thank you for coming in my life.

Ram n Priya hug each other and Priya kisses him on his cheek
R: Aise nahi?
P: Kya?
Ram kisses her on her lips and both have a passionate kiss n are lost in each other and they lose their balance n fall on the bed and in 10 min they separate.

P: me change Karke aati Hu
R: ok

Ram changes into kurta pyjama n Priya in her nighty.
Both spend the whole night in each other's arm and make love

Morning
Priya gets up first and kisses ram and goes to the washroom n freshens up and later ram gets up and freshens up. Priya is wearing a red and yellow combination Anarkali dress and looking very pretty

Dining table
She takes blessings from dadi
Dadi: Priya Tum kheer banao
P: ji dadi

Priya is in kitchen cooking just then Vikram and Neha come inside
Dadi takes them to study
N: dadi Kya baat hai?
Dadi: tumhari help chahiye
V: boli Ye na
Dadi: Tum dono ram Priya k sath USA ja sakte ho
V: zaroor dadi. We will be with them always

They come to the room and all taste the kheer made by Priya
All appreciate the Kheer.

Dadi: Kab ja rahe ho?
R: Shaam ko dadi
Dadi: ok

Evening
All packing is done and they leave for USA and in some days Vikram n Neha too leave for USA

Flashback ends

Present:
P: ram aapne Jane ki koshish nahi ki?
R: bht ki but kuch pata nahi chala. Isiliye hum USA AA Gaye
P: ram ab chaliye wapas Sab bula rahe hai
R: par
P: me Hu na.
R: thik hai

Ram calls Vikram n Neha
R: Vikram chalo hum wapas chalte hai
V: tujhe Priya ne mana diya. Wow
R: u know
V: off course but let's keep it a surprise for all
R: ok

In next some days ram finishes all his work. He completes their packing and soon they are ready to leave for India.

India
Outside Kapoor mansion
R: Priya
P: chalo ram trust me nothing will happen.
Priya rings the bell and sees Priya and ram with Vikram n Neha

Kk: Tum log? Aao andar
And she shouts everybody's name

Kk: hamare bachhe AA Gaye Sab aao
Ram n Priya take kk Amarnath n dadi ki blessing.
Dadi: Priya puttar tune kar diya
P: ji dadi

Just then Amarnath comes n sees ram
A: kitna naraz rahega.. AA ja puttar
R: papa
Ram hugs him n both cry. All are emotional seeing this
A: Kyu Gaya?
R: toh Kya karta
A: Tumne nahi Kiya tha Ye Sab. Ye Sab hamare business rivals ne Kiya. I found out all. Kitna try Kiya batane k liye par Tum
R: sorry papa
They both hug each other

All have tears seeing all this. Now the whole Kapoor family has become one and all are very happy.

After 1 year
At hospital
Priya is in labour room and screaming so much. Ram is very tensed and impatient.
Soon Priya delivers a baby girl.
R: Priya how are u?
P: me thik Hu
R: or meri beti
P: she is also fine. Ye lijiye
R: Ye hai hamari "Peehu"
P: bht achha name hai
They have a family hug with their daughter peehu

End



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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww very beautiful riddhima loved it plsss keep writing i miss ur writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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