OS : YAADEIN last part updated on pg 4

Posted: 8 years ago
Hello everyone!! I am back with a small os.
I know I am still left for updating my ff. will update them soon

Ram and Priya are settled in U.S. for the past 2 years. They got married and within 6 months they got settled in U.S.

Every Sunday morning is a lazy morning. Everyone gets up late on Sunday's . So as ram n Priya. It's 8am

R: good morning darling
P: good morning ram
Priya keeps her head on Rams chest and is hearing his heartbeat. The best music for Priya..
R: Aaj hum ghar walo se baat karte hai na
P: off course we will talk to them. Come let's get ready.

Kapoor mansion, Mumbai
All are excited to talk to ram and Priya. Sharma Shergill and Kapoor are at Kapoor mansion.

Kk: Aaj kitne dino baad we are gonna speak to ram n Priya.
Dadi: ha Krishna puttar. Kash wo Nahi jate U.S.
Kk: biji Priya toh Jana Nahi chahti thi lekin ram ki job k wajah se
Amarnath: usko hamari company me job karne me Kya problem thi pata Nahi. Kash purane din wapas aate..

On the other hand in U.S. Ram n Priya have got ready. Ram is in his white kurta pyjama and Priya is wearing pink colour churidar.
Priya usually wears western there but today as she is gonna talk to her family she is wearing Indian dress.

Ram and Priya are having breakfast and Priya comes out with this topic
Priya: ram humko wapas chalna chahiye please
Ram: Priya sorry we can't. I have my job here.
P: ram aap India me bhi toh Kar sakte hai and we have our family business too. Please ram.
R: Nahi Priya. Bilkul Nahi.
P: u always do this ram. Jao Jo karna hai karo. Mujhe Nahi baat karni aapse. Lekin chalo ghar me baat karni hai. Aapse I don't want to talk..

Priya switches on the laptop and log in the Skype account

P: hi ma dadi Kaise ho aap Sab?
Kk: hum Sab thik hai Tum batao?
P: thik hai ma..
Dadi: golu puttar me tujhse bht naraz hu
R: mene Kya kiya dadi?
Dadi: itna time ho Gaya lekin Tum India Nahi aaye
P: Dekha ram me Bol rahi thi lekin aap hai ki bas kAm or kaam. Dadi rehne dijiye Ye nae sunne wale.
R: mujhe bolne toh do.
P: mene kab roka bolo na
Ram stares at her..
Kk: Priya ko Kya Dekh rahe ho vo bichari tumhari wajah se sabse dur hai. Dekho Rakhi aa rahi hai aa Jao na
R: sorry ma hum Nahi aa sakte..

Priya listens this n gets more angry at him.
R: excuse me ma mujhe kaam hai. Me jata hu..
P: Dekha ma inko Dekh liya
Dadi: Tu achi Khabar le ram ka..
P: ji dadi
She talks to everyone n ends the call..

She goes to the kitchen to prepare lunch..
She makes shahi paneer n rice n remembers something

Flashback
P: ma dekho na Kartik ko
K: di mene Kya kiya
He pulls her hair n runs..
P: Aaj Kartik ko me Nahi chodne wali hu..
Shipra comes to the hall
S: ho Gaya shuru chuhe billi ka khel. Mere pyare bte ne aisa Kya Kar diya
Sud: toh meri beti ne Aisa Kya kiya
Here comes Sudhir in all support for his ladli daughter Priya and on the other side Shipra supporting Kartik
K: ma aap ladke walo se baat Nahi ki shadi k liye ab tak
P: papa chodiye ab toh Ye mere hath se maar khakar hi rahega. Mujhe ghar se bahar bhejne me itna utawala ho raha hai.
Kartik teases her and runs from there..
Flashback ends

R: Priya Kya hua aise khadi Kyu ho? Chalo lets have lunch..
P: mujhe Kya hua aa rahi hu
Ram and Priya are having food but Priya is in different world.
R: Kya hua?
P: mujhe ghar Jana hai
R: don't start it again
P: apke liye bht asaan hai na Ye Sab
R: do u really think it's easy for me to stay away from my family here
P: toh Kya samjhu me?
R: chalo mere sath..
P: mujhe Nahi Jana
Priya is so angry with him and she doesn't want to listen anything

Flashback continue
P: ma mujhe shadi Nahi karni hai
S: lekin beta Kyu
P: I don't want to leave u all and go. Plz ma
Sud: beta har ladki ko shadi karni hoti hai. Jinse me tumhari shadi karwaungi vo mere bht achhe dost ka beta hai. Tumne ram Kapoor naam suna hoga?
P: ram Kapoor Amarnath Kapoor ka beta
Sud: yes he only
P: no mujhe isse shadi Nahi karni hai
Sud: mil Lena and then decide Kya karna hai aage.. Ok!!
P: ok papa
S: chal tu mere sath. Tujhe tayar karwati hu.
P: no ma me khud ho jaungi

Before leaving for her room she goes to her brothers room hits him n runs to his room.
K: ma dekho wapas marke gayi
S: koi baat Nahi beta
Jitna bhi Priya pareshan Kare apne bhai ko lekin vo pyar bht karti hai usse. Or Kartik bhi usse bht pyar karta hai. In dono ka relation koi samaj Nahi sakta tha.

Evening
S: Priya tAyAr ho gayi Kya?
P: no ma. I am confused which dress I should wear.
S: Ek kaam Kar Ye red colour ka pehen
P: not red Plzz
S: red pehen it will look good
Sud: jaldi karo wo log aate honge
P: ji papa. Thik hai red pehenti hu

She gets ready in 10 minutes. And the Kapoors come home.
They say hello to each other and all settle.
Amarnath: sudhir kahan hai tumhari beti Priya.
Sud: Shipra Priya ko leke aao.
S: ha abhi lati hu usko
Shipra goes to her room
S: Priya chalo Sab aa Gaye hai..
P: ma vo
S: kuch Nahi hoga beta chal..

Priya comes with Shipra..
Sud: Ye hai meri badi beti Priya
Amarnath: Ye hai Mera bada beta ram
Dadi: Priya puttar yahan aao
P: ji
Priya goes and takes their blessings
Dadi: jeeti rahe puttar. Ye toh bataa Kya karti ho Tum?
P: me toefl me padati hu n jab time mile toh NGO bhi jati hu
Dadi: bada achha kaam karti hai beta
P: thank u dadi
A: Sudhir ram se kuch puchna chahoge
Sud: Hume toh kuch puchna Nahi hai.
Kk: Ek Kaam karo ram or Priya ko akele baat karne dete hai
S: ji Krishna ji me bhi Ye soch rahi thi. Priya beta ram ko apna kamra dikhao or baat Kar lo
P: ji ma.. Chaliye

Ram n Priya reach her room
R: apka kamra bht achha hai
P: thank you Mr Kapoor
R: u can call me ram
P: ok ram
R: tumhari hobbies?
P: reading, trying new dishes n spending time with ngo children and urs?
R: iPad me kaam karna,eating
P: vo dikh raha hai
R: excuse me
P: sorry sorry
R: it's ok
P: aap mujhse Kyu shadi karna chahte ho? Aapko toh koi bhi mil sakta hai then why do u want to marry me?
R: sach kaha tumne ki mujhe koi bhi mil sakti hai. Lekin Vo log sirf mere liye paiso k liye shadi karte and not accept me for who I am. I have met so many girls but after meeting u I felt ki Tum mujhe samjhogi n paiso k liye u won't. U will accept me for who I am. That's why I want to marry you. Toh Kya Tumhe me pasand hu?
P: me badme bolungi
R: ok. So ab chale
P: ji chaliye

Both return where their parents are sitting
Kk: ram beta Tumhe Kaise lagi Priya?
R: ma meri taraf se ha hai. Priya ko thoda time chahiye. Vo badme batayegi
Kk: thik hai beta..
Kartik: jiju
R: tumhari behen ne ha Nahi kahi hai abhi tak
K: toh Kya hua? Aap toh ho mere jiju
R: ok ok
K: meri behen se bachke rehna
R: hehe
K: haso mat
Just then Priya comes
P: stop it Kartik. Tujhe me badme dekhti hu
R: haha
P: rehne dijiye Apko wapas Nahi Jana. All are calling u
R: thik hai me chalta hu
P: bye Tc
R: bye Tc and will be waiting for ur answer
P: ok ram
Kapoor family go back home.

Sud: Kya hua beta? Batao kAisA laga ram?
P: papa he seems different from the boys I have met till now and genuinely a gem at heart. He seemed very caring person
Sud: toh tumhari ha hai na
P: shayad ha hai
Sud: pakka bolo. Do u like him?
P: yes papa I liked him
S: meri beti ko akhir koi pasand aaya.
Priya smiles

Sudhir calls up at Kapoor mansion n talks to dadi
Dadi: hello
Sud: me Sudhir Bol raha hu
Dadi: Ji boliye
Sud: Priya ne ha bola hai.
Dadi: Ye toh bht Khushi ki baat hai. Ek kaam karte hai 4 days me we will get the engagement done
Sud: ji zaroor. Ab me rakhta hu
S: Kya hua?
Sud: in 4 days engagement
S: ohh God Kal Subah shopping Jana hoga.
P: Kyu?
S: four days me engagement
P: what??
S: ha beta. Ab so ja jaldi Kal Jana hai shopping
P: thik hai ma

Next morning Priya n Shipra go for shopping for engagement.
P: ma idhar chalte hai
S: ha chalte hai
They ask for churidar. They select a pink churidar and Priya is looking just so beautiful in it. And later they buy a green lehenga and a little heavy one.

On the other hand ram is also shopping for sherwani with dadi n Krishna ji
Dadi: Ye le golden wali sherwani
R: ji dadi
Ram tries the sherwani n it fits him well and they buy it and even they buy a brown sherwani..
Then they go to buy bridal outfit.
Dadi selects a red colour heavy lehenga and buy it for Priya

After that they go to jewellery shop for buying the engagement rings and they find Sharma family too
Ram goes to Priya
R: hi Priya
P: hi ram
R: toh ho gayi shopping
P: ha shayad. Pata Nahi ma ko exactly pata hoga
R: vo toh hai
Priya smiles
R: Priya me soch raha tha ki mujhe tumhara no mil sakta hai Kya
P: Kyu ??
R: we are going to get engaged. Toh no toh maang sakta hu
P: ok ok
Priya gives her no. To him
R: thank u
P: your welcome

Ram n Priya select the rings for each other. Simple rings but are very beautiful. Sharma n kapoors leave for home..

To be continued..Edited by rampriyarocks - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
very nice and different
pls continue soon
Posted: 8 years ago
Its beautiful start

Waiting for next one
Thanks for pm
Awesome he :-) concept
Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful OS...
Pls continue soon...
Posted: 8 years ago
Superbb start...
Plz continue soon...
And plz pm me from next time.. :-)
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by contactcharu


very nice and different
pls continue soon
thank u so much
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by dhristikpd


Lovely
thank you
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by krunalidivecha


Its beautiful start

Waiting for next one
Thanks for pm
Awesome he :-) concept
thank u so much dear
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by mayanandan


Beautiful OS...
Pls continue soon...
thank u so much
Posted: 8 years ago
its lovely ðŸ˜Š

why ram being so defensive whenevr asked to go back ... poor priya away from family ...loving the story ..plzz continue soon ,,and do send pm once u update 
thanks  ðŸ˜Š

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