ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts #11 - Thread 12 link on Page 139 - Page 83

Finally arnie confessed...so now its turn for khushi...common khushi let it go...update soon darling.. Waiting for that

what an magnificient update dear, hatts off to u👏
each and every pov was so beautifuly potrayed.

Starting was amazing, hiccuping khushi with confused on how to react? One side its unexpected shock and other side her serene friendship make her stop frm reacting. While arnav observing her every move, every expression and reading her eyes, giving her time to accept his words and react on it. And at last her running from him while his plea to stop her, all just visualizing.

Lavanya is right with all her point, knowing her bestie's future is bright no matter what. He is definitely a keeper, Bestie!, here she go with understanding Arnav's feelings and his presence to her bestie's life vivid.

I most love khushi's pov, it was sober. U have wonderfully potrayed it. Her distress after understanding his feeling towards her, her anger for taking her friendliness with other point n widout thinking society, her realisation abt his confession on past call and at last that question or doubt, if she provoke him for dis feeling, was so so realistic. Her all emotions at dat time was so practical, how can u come with it so fluently? Hatts off to u Deepthi.

Aranav and Gaytri's talk was so tender. The way arnav joke and ask for dinner, his showing her first gift with possessive and at last his calmness while telling truth of his confession and then taking solace frm mother on the same tym he missing his Dad, was so touching.

Khushi's dream was realy mixure of emotion, tenderness with pain, pecefulness with agonising scream, fondness with fear.

Arnav's guilt for forgetting biding bye to mother, with just having khushi in mind, was telling all his situation. His dreaming to have her his side for all life, his craving to see her, talk to her, his realising her impact on him, bringing a new Arnav in him for become Her Everything! was so fascinating.

Marvelous update.😳

Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

update was fabulous...ofcourse Khushi retreating and her anger is understandable...loved the way LA gave Arnav a thumbs up, she is his champion...n m glad she is with Khushi n on Arnav;s side :P

Lovely update. Hope Khushi gets past her nerves soon.

Awesome update.. had inkling of Khushi's reaction.. hope she gives Arnav the chance.. well can understand Arnav's feelings.. he will get his love.. sure as he is definitely a Keeper and nobody can give Khushi the happiness and love like Arnav.. looking forward to see what happens next.. loved the update..

amazingly written.. now or never.. so true.. loved it..

loved it. m also restless. somebody plz help this women whose not thinkin straight..

see wat i was doing in classroom😆😆

Loved the update ,and I hope Arnav can really feel where khushie is coming from ,in her world girls were invisible in their society ,they did not have free choice to fall in love or expect to be seen as individuals ,they were seen but not heard ,,I glad you written a story based on women as even today a daughter is not valued as compared to a son even if she is more hardworking than the men in her family ,hope you can show khushie perspective especially how she feels as a woman .