Raga OS : Jashn-e-bahaara

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Hi guys i have written an os on raga , i really hope you like it and please leave your feedback ( it really encourages me to write more πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ).

Jashn-e-bahaara


Everyone was present on their wedding reception, except they . The king and the queen. The newly wedded couple rana and gayatri. After a whilee, they saw a beautiful lady with her brown and red lehanga and a red and golden worked border appeared at the top of the stairs with her husband , who was wearing a white sherwani and a brown scarf ( male dupatta) .

When they arrived ,after congratulating them, it was time for a dance , and just then , the musicians started playing the most beautiful tune and the singer sang the most beautifully written lines.


Kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

Phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

Chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein

Saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

Aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain

Kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

Phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

Chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein

All the couples started dancing ... As the misic played, Rana held gayatris hand and lead her to the dance floor . And brought her hands to his lips and kissing each one of them softly. Rana smiled seeing at the blush that was more than evident on his wifes face. He wished... He wished to kiss each one of her cheeks ... But he couldnt ... In the hall. And put his hands on gayatris waist , she placed her hands behind his neck. Rana pulled her closer... And gayatris

eyes were shining in that hall..where ... A day ago ... Rana ji married her in front of the whole praja.


Kaise kahen kya hai sitam, sochate hai abb yeh hum

Koyi kaise kahen woh hai ya nahee humaare

Karte toh hai saath safar, faasale hain phir bhi magar

Jaise milte nahee kisi dariya ke do kinaare

Pasa hain phir bhi paas nahee, humko yeh gum raas nahee

Seeshe ki ik diwaar hai jaise darmiyaan


And they danced , lost in each others eyes, like no one was watching them .

The reception ended . At night ... In the garden , which had a beautiful fountain . And, where rana had stricktly given orders that no one should come to the garden when they were there. Rana brought gayatri to the garden . As it was night , rana was wearing a white shirt and trousers and gayatri was wearing a light blue saree with her long curly hair .


G. Rana ji, aap mujhe yahan kyu laye hain ?

And rana sliped his hands on her waist and pulled her from behind . Her back collided with his chest and his grip tightened and he whispered in her ears

R. Kyunki hum aapke saath kuch pal bitana chahte hain gayatri

And saying this , he kissed her ear, giving shivers to gayatri which is why she closed her eyes and rana was completely lost in her rose fragrance . After a while, she touched his hands and slowly opened her eyes.


Saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

Aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain


G. Lekin...koi aa jayega

R. Toh aane do

G. Koi sun lega

R. Toh sun ne do ( and he explores her neck with his nose , completely spellbound by her scent )

G. Rana ji... Koi dekh lega

R. Toh dekh le ne do... Ki hum apni biwi se kitna pyaar karte hain..


Kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

Phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

Chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein


He turns her around ...still his hands are on her waist and gayatris eyes are looking down... Rana lifts her chin up and looks deeply in her eyes

R. Nobody will come here . I have instructed to stay away from the garden area this night... And moreover , everyone is sleeping .. So no chance..


Hamane ne jo tha nagma suna, dil ne tha usako chuna

Yeh daastaan hame waqt ne kaisi sunayi

Hum jo agar hai gumgin, woh bhi udhar khush toh nahee

Mulaakaato mein jaise ghul si gayi tanhayi


He leaned forward and rest his forehead on her forehead , by then , gayatri had a very deep blush adorned on her cheeks . Rana just couldnt take his eyes of her face , specially those dark pink or reddish cheeks .


Milake bhi hum milate nahee, khilake bhi gul khilate nahee

Aankhon mein hai bahaaren, dil mein khija

Saare sehme najaare hain, soye soye waqt ke dhaare hain

Aur dil mein koyi khoyi si baten hain


He pulled back , and cupped her face . And got really close to her ... Their lips were just few milimetres from each other ... And rana kissed her left cheek... She closed her eyes due to the proximity , then he placed a wet kiss on her right cheek . He then proceeded to kiss her forehead .. ... The next kiss he placed was on each one of her eyes . When he reached her lips ... He looked at gayatri as she opened her eyes


G. Rana ji ... Yaha nahi

R. Toh

And he lifted her up in his arms

G. Rana ji ... Neeche utariye mujhe

R. Ap ne hi toh bola .. Yaha nahi...toh ... ( and he smirked as gayatri blushed )

And he took her to their chamber through the other side of the palace ... So that no one can see them.


O ho... kehne ko jashn-e-bahaara hai, ishq yeh dekhke hairan hai

Phul se khusbu khafa khafa hai gulshan mein

Chupa hai koyi ranj fija ki chilman mein



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