Ohhh it was so emotional 😭😭Was really crying
You write so brilliantly... Beautiful👏👏
Manik's confession oh my god
It was so emotional I was crying with them
The way you have written... Waooww
I could literally imagine the scenario
He was in front of her sitting...crying to make her understand what he feels for her
And what happened all this while that unintentionally nandini got Dragged to complete his mission
But could feel the genuine pain...he was full of love
Poor nandini wanted to reply but could do nothing
Obviously she was hurt... The one she loved have always hurt her... Those words were so harsh to hear
No one can forget everything and move on... The way you have penned nandini's character...amazing... Just Waaaooowww...
She is so naive but I think she is strong enough to show her love towards manik...Let's hope she would make a stand this time...
In this situation if it was me I would go with my mother
Because she is the one who have always been there for her...y she should not go... All she got here was only pain given by the man she loved... But
Somewhere I want nandini to stay because it was manik who forced her to fulfil her dreams... What she always wanted to do... Literature... The love toward writing
And ya as we all want the happy ending... We are always greedy of love... Want manan to be together
So ya I am Ok with both the situations... Whatever you feel like you can write... I would love to read
So enough of my thoughts
Amazing writer you are
Should continue with this skill of yours
May you give us these amazing stories
Brilliant job...hats off to you girl
Keep up the good work
Update soon
Thanks for the pm