NEW ARSHI OS - Yeh Moh Moh Ke Dhaagey

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Welcome back Ankita, after a long time!

How have you been?

Sorry for reading so late as I'm also not too active in forum nowadays,

what a lovely thoughtful OS!

Your insightful thought always attracts me. As always how you expressed the depth of Arshi's relationship is amazing.

A person doesn't need to be a real prince to be one's prince charming. true and unconditional love is the most important thing in a relationship.

Moho moho is a beautiful song and one of my recent favorite.

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Apoorva

@Sugar_Hugs

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Welcome back...

lovely os..

my all time fav song...

Hope u write more...

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@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Great work! You've Beautifully portrayed their emotions! One of the finest Shots i've ever read!

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

I haven't read ur previous works.. but since u have said u haven't been on the forum for sometime.. Welcome Back 😉

And regarding the os.. I loved it.. it was easy flowing.. ebbed through the tale.. poetical portrayal of Khushi's feelings..without making it very intense.. but u put her feelings across the reader.. made us to feel through her.. I really fell in love with it..

And do pm me if u have any plans of writing further!! Please

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ShaheenaSingh

@ShaheenaSingh

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Wow...

Beautiful

beyond any word...

loved the way you described their relationship, their faith, their trust and mostly their love

loved d shot

and especially the last few lines

"You don't need prince charming but a real man who is true in his actions and reactions with you.Life will continue to throw curve balls every now and then but with that one person holding your hand through all walks of life,you could carve your own fairy tale that is far more beautiful than any fantasy."