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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

Omg..

Tat was superb..
Just can't express in words..
Plz plz one request continue with it we really want the next part of this..
Coz in serial they just simply ruin it...
Plz plz do make the next chap..
N BTW what happen to tat creative story still waiting for the next part...


thanks shikha... will try to continue this...

will try to follow on with the old story, but it gets difficult to continue with the old part... as that is moving a lot faster...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rosabelle


thanks shikha... will try to continue this...

will try to follow on with the old story, but it gets difficult to continue with the old part... as that is moving a lot faster...


No worries will love to read ur parts..
So plz plz continue..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Perfect.. I wish they had shown something like this.. Thanks for writing rosabelle and thanks anku for the idea..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kyun nahi dikhaya aisa..show mein..waise aur episodes baaki the...I think it was imp to know what were there immediate feelings
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

Aww...Im touched..bt vl share dis honour with sam (angevil786) partner in crime 😎


Aww thats kind of you Pri but i did nothing😳🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786


Aww thats kind of you Pri but i did nothing😳🤗


your comment was the source of inspiration!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharvi_warrior

Kyun nahi dikhaya aisa..show mein..waise aur episodes baaki the...I think it was imp to know what were there immediate feelings


yeah... but i guess due to time constraints... they can only show so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -MariaMars-

Perfect.. I wish they had shown something like this.. Thanks for writing rosabelle and thanks anku for the idea..


welcome :) glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angevil786

Brilliant and very romantic👏


thanks a lot sam :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Following on to the next part...

So both Parth and Vibha are about to go to sleep and both have smiles on their faces. As they were both in love, with one another, for the first time ever they had felt this wonderful feeling, and there was just no looking back now! Parth can hear Vibha's words 'I love you Parth... I love too' over and over again, and he just doesn't want her voice to stop ringing in his ears... Vibha can hear 'I love you, I love you a lot' in her head and her heart keeps beating at a rate faster than ever before! She wonders why she kept herself away from such an amazing feeling and why she kept running away from Parth... She thinks she will never leave his side now (song plays in the background - tu jahan main waha, sang sang yu chalu tere, jaise tera aasman... tum aa gaye ho to jeena aaya hai, khushiyon ka tumne, yu jaal bichaya hai, khoya hai khudko ya sab kuch paya hai...)

It was morning the next day...

Parth starts thinking of Vibha again, as he gets dressed with a big smile on his face. His aches and pains seem to fade away with every passing moment of his heart echoing the fact that he would see his Vibha soon, in a matter of minutes. He just can't wait! He wants to meet her, and he hasn't thought what will follow on now, he just wants to keep looking at her all day and be with her! (song plays in background -hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte, tere bina kya wajood mera, tujhse juda agar ho jayenge, toh khud se hi ho jayenge juda, kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho, chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...)

Vibha is also getting ready in her room and she just can't decide what to wear. She is feeling shy, she wants to look good for Parth, she wants to look young. For the first time ever she has felt something that churns her stomach and makes her extremely happy, excited and giddy, all at the same time! She wants to care for him, just as much care and concern he had showed for her the previous night, and always before that. She wants to be with him! (song plays in background - tera mera rishta hai kaisa, ek pal door gavara nahi, tere liye har roz hai jeete, tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi, koi lamha mera na ho tere bina, har saas pe naam tera, kyunki tum hi ho, ab tum hi ho, zindagi ab tum hi ho, chain bhi, mera dard bhi, meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho!)

He starts to look for her in the mess as the students all walk in to have breakfast. She is standing with all the other teachers. He notices her in red kameez, looking as beautiful as ever. She blushes and smiles as she sees him looking at her. He gives a faint smile and takes his breakfast. She sits facing opposite him on another table, so that she can see his face. His smiling face brings a sense of calm and happiness in her heart and mind. She just wants him to recover quickly.

In the classroom, Parth tries to walk into the class early so that he can talk to her, but students start barging in and he loses his chance. And right after, Vibha walks out before he can get a chance to talk to her. He tries to look for her on numerous occasions that day, but luck seems to be running out. He finally finds her in the staff room but as he walks in, he notices Kamini maam in there, and Vibha quickly signals him to not enter. He leaves and feels sad.

He thinks he is happy knowing that she loves him and the fact that she knows that he loves her too. But what is the point if they can't even get a few minutes during the day to say something. Or even be together and just hold hands for a moment! He doesn't want to have dinner and sits by himself, hoping he will get to see Vibha when she passes to go to the mess. But he doesn't see her and then goes to the library. He turns on the light and starts wandering around the shelves looking for a book. Just as he is about to take a book, the lights turn off.

Parth - Kaun hai?

No one answers, so he thinks there might be a power outage so tries to walk towards the door but he hears someone coming towards him and a hand pulls him and takes him behind a shelf.

Vibha - Parth!
Parth - Maam?

She slowly takes him to a corner where the moonlight peeps in through the glass window in the ceiling. He is able to see her face and is happy. She slowly lifts her hand and gently puts it on his face, and moves her thumb across his cheek. He holds her hand and wishes that she never lets go... They both look into each other's eyes, emotions and happiness come gushingly...

Vibha - Parth, tum kaise ho?
Parth - Main, main theek hu... Aap... aap kaise ho?

They both fumble a bit as they don't know what to say (song plays in background - khamoshiyan, ek saaz hai, tum milne to aao kabhi, chukar tumhe khil jayengi, ghar inko bulao kabhi, bekarar hai, saath chalne ko, kehne do inko zara, khamoshiyan, teri meri, khamoshiyan...), they want to say so many things, but words just don't seem to be coming out right. He thinks he has already told her that he loves her, so what else can he tell her? She thinks she doesn't want to say anything foolish. But she senses his awkwardness and realizes that he has always been there for her regardless, and that she doesn't need to change anything, as he loves her just the way she is. She smiles...

Vibha - Main toh bilkul thik hu... Pitai toh tumhari hui thi... (she lightens the mood)
Parth - (smiles and looks at her) Aap aaj bahut sundar lag rahe ho
Vibha - (blushes a little) Thank you... Par tumne bataya nahi ki tumhe sar main dard ho raha hai? How are you feeling?
Parth - I'm feeling great... Because I'm with you...
Vibha - Hmm, ab yeh sab baatein tumne kaha se seekh li?
Parth - Pata nahi, apko dekhte hi pata nahi mujhe kya ho jata hai
Vibha - (blushes a little and goes closer to his face) To phir chalein...
Parth - Chalein? Kaha?
Vibha - Bahar ghumne?
Parth - Bahar? Ghumne? Sach?
Vibha - Haa...
Parth - I can't believe this... Lets go...
Vibha - Arey, I was joking... Tum bilkul pagal ho gaye ho... Mess chalo khana khane, maine dekha ki tum kaise library main ghus gaye, isiliye main wait hi kar rahi thi ki sab chale jaye...
Parth - Aur phir aap mujhse milne aa gayi... Aur mujhe laga tha ki aaj aapse milna toh ho hi nahi payega... Maine aapko kitna miss kiya!
Vibha - Parth, main bhi har pal tumhare baare main soch rahi thi... Lekin we have to be careful...
Parth - Hmm...

She plays with his hair, makes him smile and smiles herself... They both walk out of the library and head towards the mess for dinner! (song plays in background - zehenaseeb, zehenaseed, tujhe chahu betahasha zehenaseeb... mere kareeb, mere habib, tujhe chahu betahasha zehenaseeb...)


Edited by rosabelle - 10 years ago

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