Cheater, Cheater, Pumpkin Eater

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cheater, Cheater, Pumpkin Eater 

Payal

Cheat me
Abuse me
Fight with me
Just blame me
BUT
You dare not use me
To get your work done at PWD through me!

This scam of yours with Phool Singhji
I will sort out, do not worry dear (Natru) Babuji!

Dev

You can cheat me
Blame me
Use and abuse me
Oh go ahead and downright ignore me!

But my wife - you dare not drag
into this fight
Let her be - please let her be!

What is this I hear ...
dear wife, you will sort things out and bring Babuji in the clear?
How many times do I tell you
That while your love is true, their's is a lust for greed!
You think it is OK to protect and save Ayyo and Babuji
But mark my words!
They will keep forever cheating you, me, and the world!

Gul

You scoundrel Natru
Just wait and watch what I do to you
And you too Patidev - from my wrath
will not be spared!

YOU mortgaged my house
To run a scam
You two cheating idiots
Are such a sham!!

Oh how I would like to wring your necks
for cheating my brother and me of our wealth

You lazy slobs
are such a grouse
Why did you cheat on me - the one you, Ayyo claimed to love?
Now you claim to be victim and cheated on 
by Phool Singh and his clan
With a broken heart, I wonder how did I trust?
Someone as low as you who made this house go bust!


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice ๐Ÿ‘
You captured the escence of the characters their mind set 
Payal going to make everything right sort out her inlaws mess but they will not be thankful towards her instead they want to shove her far away from them Payal refuse to accept that she is not wanted or valued clinging to a dream. Dev loves Payal very much he is her greatest support all the while trying to make her understand he has a useless gready family and she should not waste her time trying to change them.Gul and her anger justified her husband is a waste of space like his dear father.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sb1410

Very nice ๐Ÿ‘

You captured the escence of the characters their mind set 
Payal going to make everything right sort out her inlaws mess but they will not be thankful towards her instead they want to shove her far away from them Payal refuse to accept that she is not wanted or valued clinging to a dream. Dev loves Payal very much he is her greatest support all the while trying to make her understand he has a useless gready family and she should not waste her time trying to change them.Gul and her anger justified her husband is a waste of space like his dear father.


Thank you for the kind comments๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful write up on Payal and Dev.....But Gul's s d best of all...How could Devyal still did not grow up their mind...