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okay that was great as a set-up and building up chapter I loved the character of nandini...the way of her thinking is really good..and exciting..
The only thing I could ask for is write the dialogue of character with thier name's at first like-
Alya-oh, stop teasing her..
and the rest is good...waiting for manik and more his character sketch
continue soon :)
The only thing I could ask for is write the dialogue of character with thier name's at first like-
Alya-oh, stop teasing her..
and the rest is good...waiting for manik and more his character sketch
continue soon :)
Cricket
