RaYa OS - Back in yours arms 'Happy birthday Sanjukta' - Page 2

rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

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Posted: 8 years ago

Superb OS

Loved it dear...

:)

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reshak

@reshak

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful update.. loved the way u wrote...
keep writing more... thnx 4 d pm..

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iluvusakshi

@iluvusakshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

wow. superb.

raya missing each other n cant get enough of each other. loved raya romance.

thanks for pm. do write more.

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Sanjukta

@BALHLOVER

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Posted: 8 years ago

wooow first attempt ..and i am speechless.

Anchu u should write more darling..

and thank u and love u as u dedicated this one for me ...

Thank u so much

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DiehardRaYafan

@DiehardRaYafan

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Aanchal Superb attempt in your first OS! The Romance was subtle yet very realistic...my only thing...I wish it had kept going and going😉 Do write more ...looking forward to more RaYa stories from you👏

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Aanchal ... wohhh i was surprised to see your OS 😉

remember i asked u to write a story sometime ago [ flash back ] but never mind it happend now

and that was beautifully enacted how Raya missing each other

though he was in work thoush she was in house hold works both r reminding and drowning in each others love . what a beautiufl way you penned down ..

awesome .do write more buddy 😛

Thanks for the pm ..

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Jyothi

@jodude

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Posted: 8 years ago

hheyy nice story

short n sweet..

do write more..

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MyLuvRaShi

@MyLuvRaShi

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+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome OS
Very beautifully written
Plz do write more
Thanks for PM

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Aanchal ur first attempt..Its very sweet

Raya missing each other and finally they fulfill their need without anybody's disturbance😉

I felt very short. Next time go for bigger one

I don't mind if u write FF.😛

thanks for PM

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aman.anjaan
clap clap clap what an amazing writing work

superb just speechless yar (fir bhi itna likh diya )

please Write more bcoz ye dil maange more

Thank You Aman 😊

i am glad you like it

will try to write more

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