Kaya OS, A very special first date

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys..i thought on writing an os...please hit the like button and comment , And the silent readers...please at least hit the like button...

A very special first date

Here were ananya and kabir...finally the day of their first date... After kabir confessed ananya his feelings...and ananya as well accepted her feelings to him...

kabir... Was getting ready with his formal suit and a tie... And a white shirt... And ananya with a beautiful long ombre blue dress with full flower net sleeves... with high heels... And had her wavy hair... She was looking gorgeous...

kabir took a little box...and kept it in his pocket...he was nervous...but was happy ...overwhelmed...so happy that he forgot every bad things pain or any negative feeling ... he even forgot his past... He was happy he found love again in his life... anaya ... And headed off to to pick up ananya... She was waiting in her house ... He came... He rang the doorbell.. ... Anahita was trying to zip up her dress til up and was stuck till below her neck... but was unable to... She came running to open the door... kabir saw her ... She was looking beautifulll...very beautiful...gorgeous... He just couldnt take his eyes from her...

A. Wow kabir... ... Youre looking very handsome today...? Come in.. ( kabir came in and she locked the door..)

k. Thanks ananys... Your looking really gorgeous today... .. Ready to leave ?

A. Actually no ... The zip of this dress... My hands barely reach...

And ananya was trying ... Soon...a pair of strong hands touched her hands telling her to leave the zip...as he had taken it ...and ... With a quick move... he pulled her zip up... And doing that his hands had touched annies hands... She felt a current passing through her spine...

A. Thanks... ( she said turning around )

k. Your welcome... Lets go ?

A. Ya...

kabir had booked a beautiful candle ligjt dinner in the back garden of a beautiful hotel ... It was decorated with a white floating candles centerpiece ... tje table had a beautiful heart made of red roses... and a little swimming pool which o...on the edges had red rose t

petals and red candles...

They reached the place... She looked at him... A wide smile drew on her face... They sat...a waiter came and opened a champagne bottle and poured it in both glasses...

k. i... didnt think i would finf love again... but you came inmy ife like anangel...

a. i couldnt believe it either... such a handsome intelligent and a an who has a heart pf gold would like a girl like me ...

kabir smiled...they spent a few minutes. stealing glances of each other ... ... and a song started playing... he got up and asked for ananyas hand ...he took her a bit for frpm the table and mear the pool... with him... he put his hands on her waist that sent and current to her spine... she softly kept her hands on his broad shoulders... and started dancing on the most romantic tune...

Jise zindagi dhoondh rahi hai

Kya ye woh makaam mera hai

Yahaan chain se bas ruk jaaun

Kyun dil ye mujhe kehta hai

Jazbaat naye se mile hain

Jaane kya asar ye huaa hai

Ik aas mili phir mujhko

Jo qubool kisi ne kiya hai

Kabir didnt take his eyes from ananya the whilevthey were dancing...neither ananya...

Haan..

Kisi shaayar ki ghazal

Jo de rooh ko sukoon ke pal

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjaare ko ghar

Naye mausam ki sehar

Yaa sard mein dopahar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjare ko ghar

Hmm...

they were dancing closely...their fsces were inches apart...no...cm apart... ...now... few mm apart while they were danc

Jaise koi kinaara

Deta ho sahaara

Mujhe wo mila kisi mod par

Koi raat ka taara

Karta ho ujaala

Waise hi roshan kare woh shehar

Dard mere woh bhula hi gayaa

Kuch aisa asar huaa

Jeena mujhe phir se woh sikha raha

Hmm.. Jaise baarish kar de tar

Yaa marham dard par

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjare ko ghar

Naye mausam ki sehar

Yaa sard mein dopahar

Koi mujhko yun mila hai

Jaise banjaare ko ghar

Ananya felt the closeness between them... and she tried to leave...but kabir grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him strongly ...her back clashed with his chest... her back was touching his chest... she was feeling his breaths... on hr ears...

k. want to leave so soon... ... dont you want to know why i brought you here?

a. no. ..i was ...i was ...

kabir went down on his knees...

k. will you marry me ms. ananya kashap...?

a. yes... .( with teary eyes because of the happiness ) yes...

kabir placed the ring in her finger... got up and hugged her tight... ananya responded with the same passion... and they hugged for a while... then breaking the hug ... kabir said to ananya...

k. your the most precious person in my life...

a.and youre in mine...

and they hugged ... The moon , the beautiful place were witnessing their love ...the most beautiful and unconditional love.

Hey guys, i have made a this os ... I made one in another forum ... And thought of making one same with kaya as i thought this all suited tem a lot... Guys please ... Like and comment...


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Lavi_dovey thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
beautiful os.
i have read its another version too on GG forum.
loved it alot.
thank you so much for pm.
do write more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful os with a lovely confession
very well written
thanks for the pm dearie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing it was short and sweet great work .
TitliBaisa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!!! KaYa ki itni closeness dekh kay maza agaya...!!! Kaash yeh jald dramay main bhi dikhayyy

I am loving it totally dear🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Awsum!! Such a lovely OS...!! Very well written 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Loved it 😳
write more on Kaya 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi...!!! It was beautiful...!!! Ohh...u have written dis for GG na..dats the reason dere is Anahita's name instead of ananya...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Completely awesome
Nice..
And especially the song Banjara was amazing..
Really a fantastic OS.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow great writing

Do PM me when u write next.

Love and prayer
Yogini

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