Originally posted by: sudanindia2014
Wow Priya Chapter one is out
OK you are a great writer this is so obvious, excellent command of English, smooth writing technique, interesting plot ..I'm not professional and I'm not the best person to give a professional dependable assessment here but I go with what I feel , my POV, my likes and dislikes this sort of things I'm so easy to be pleased when it comes to romantic stories particularly... the happy ending is all I'm looking for and I have great hope your story will have this ..but of course it's for you to decided.. I can only hope ..
As for chapter one.. to be honest it's very well written but reading it gave me the feeling of swallowing a bitter tablet and then threw some sugar after it to make my self feel better ..I know this is difficult to understand so let me explain my self ..every one who know me in IF know that I can't stand Tanu and I disliked her so much and I never considered what was between her and Abhi to be love not for her and certainly not for him so the first part of the chapter was so difficult for me but I read it and it left a bitter taste in my mouth, then came the last paragraph and it was like a sugar coat for me "He had fallen for her pretty face and her charming personality" .. " Tanu saw this as the golden opportunity to make a mark in her career and decided to indulge Abhi. Through Abhi and his popularity, she made contacts in the fashion world and was now Tanu, The Supermodel." This is more like how I see it between them and it immediately gave me a good feeling..I'm happy that from the next update Pragya will be in the picture so I do not think I have anything to fear after that ..right ?
Thanks Priya and please update soon ..I hope I did not offend you as it was not my intention ..sorry if I did 😊
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