(MG-OS) VICTIM OF REVENGE LAST PART/PG 1 (July 13th'2K15) - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51
awesome os ...
Dev s taking revenge from Geet / sarah ... Maan s helping her...
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Congrats on the new story and fantasic job as always.Looking forward to what is in store nex Edited by saf24 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53
wow interesting os di... lovely maaneet past moments. .geet loss her memory or something else?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
nice start...eager to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Interesting  n amazing starting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 1 - dev was maan's big bro and killed geet aka.. sarah's family for the sake of revenge...maan helped her and saved from dev, brought her to his haweli...
they already met their collage days...so geet doesn't remember him...?
why name sarah..?
why there is - in maan (ma-an) name ..?
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Very nice..
Thanx for d pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Brilliant Start

Dev and Maan are brothers but it seems like Dev and his gang have threaded on the wrong path but why would they kill an entire family and now also they want to kill the daughter , Maan calls her Geet but her name is Sarah and even when Maan told Dev not to kill her he was determined so Maan had to take her and escape bring her to his home but she is indeed scared knowing this stranger has saved her yet his brother killed her family and is after her .
in the morning again Sarah wants to leave and Maan convince her to stay so he can attend her wounds and she can dress up but now it also seems that either she is grateful and also trust him

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Posted: 8 years ago
#59
congrats for new os
awesome start
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

wow another yummy fav of my maaneet from u..very interesting dear..

Edited by Desigirls12 - 8 years ago