Hi...of course want to read it ! I have already started biting my nails...especially after no appearance by "dhruv ke Papa" on Paro's bday. Nice family bonding too.
OMG Welcome back Rithu darling ...Suddenly my sleep drifted and as usual wandered around IF and shocked to see you and your TS as a surprise๐ฒ...Maybe my telepathy told you are back๐...Hope your vacation were joyous like this story...a much needed rejuvenation after the tiring works.
The story is Rithu's patented writing style with whole of Ranawat family dressing up our Paro for a special occasion and their bonding is always a bliss to read..๐ณ
I know you can't hurt Parud in your stories so am waiting what mischief our Majorsaab oops ColonelSaab is upto!!๐
Once again welcome back dear..this place and me missed your presence immensely๐ค
Originally posted by: bluemoon255
you stopped there๐ฒ
welcome back Rithu๐คlovely start.this is what we wanted to see na, a happy paro and her loving family, all together and happy.awesome job baisa.
Arreyy what a cliff hanger. Looking forward to Part 2 for sure.
Honestly I love the backstory for Dhruv Ke Papa.. brilliant touch. Originality is something I always admire. ๐Welcome back dear! ๐ณ
Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30
<font size="3">Hey nice to have you back,Rithu...an outstanding chapter...it seems this chapter was the 'calm before the storm'...something has, for sure happened & Rudra not being there on Pato's birthday is an example of that...but I am not least bit worried because I know you will never let anything happen to Rudra .
Oh so Dhruv had been bragging about his dad...how sweeettt...that scene made me smile, a big one... Other things I loved were (1) Rudra is Lt. Colnol (2) that excercise equipment is gone from their bedroom (3) " Dhruv ke papa" , the new name for Rudra (4) Children's equation with Maithli (5) you taking us back in the golden moments of RR with Paro remembering & reliving those.
Great story on the cards, looking forward to it. </font>
P.S Another highlight of this story was that Ranawat's have moved to their old haveli...I am so glad that you thought of this & incorporated it in the story.
Originally posted by: aaliah3108
hey! Welcome back dear Rithu !
I loved ur story ...please continue and your version of a happy peaceful family for Parud is so beautiful !It could have easily been this way ...there I go again !! sorry sorry ...mafi yaar mafi.Loved the story and u stopped at a cliffhanger ...gosh !!! Please update soon dear.
Originally posted by: firsttimehere
Hi Rithu ๐ Welcome back ๐
Glad to know you had a nice vacation..Nice story Rithu this was- loved it . I am hoping Rudra is all fine and will appear in part 2 ๐Will be waiting for that .Please update soon๐
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