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Posted: 10 years ago
I think VH should be as it is described normally. Why do we change things which are non magical. Anyways there are many ideas in people's head and in this the actual story is lost today. Atleast what is there in the Sanskrit MB we should write that, as long as it is not magic. LIke G saving her can be shown in another way but I dont think human staking or Cheerharan should be skipped. It shows reality.

Just my POV.

Anyways, Semanti please, PLEASE post the stars and everything of Yudhi here right now so I can start with my writing. I cant go back in our huge FB chat to find the name of the stars 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CaptainSpark

I think VH should be as it is described normally. Why do we change things which are non magical. Anyways there are many ideas in people's head and in this the actual story is lost today. Atleast what is there in the Sanskrit MB we should write that, as long as it is not magic. LIke G saving her can be shown in another way but I dont think human staking or Cheerharan should be skipped. It shows reality.

Just my POV.

Anyways, Semanti please, PLEASE post the stars and everything of Yudhi here right now so I can start with my writing. I cant go back in our huge FB chat to find the name of the stars 😆



And our DS and VH should not show Dury and Shakuni or even Dhrit is requesting yudhi to stop but the ruthless demon is not listening 😆 just my POV again.
Okay posting here again,
Month - Jaishtha
Day - Shukla Panchami Tithi (the fifth of the lighted fortnight)
Time - noon
Birth star - Jyeshthaa nakshatra. I have seen this line in an astrology website for Jyeshthaa star babies, "he will be very clean in his mind and very sober too. But these good qualities would not be noticed by others as he will not believe in show." I think this matches perfectly with Yudhi.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11



And our DS and VH should not show Dury and Shakuni or even Dhrit is requesting yudhi to stop but the ruthless demon is not listening 😆 just my POV again.
Okay posting here again,
Month - Jaishtha
Day - Shukla Panchami Tithi (the fifth of the lighted fortnight)
Time - noon
Birth star - Jyeshthaa nakshatra. I have seen this line in an astrology website for Jyeshthaa star babies, "he will be very clean in his mind and very sober too. But these good qualities would not be noticed by others as he will not believe in show." I think this matches perfectly with Yudhi.


I am a Jyeshta star baby!! I dont feel all that noble!! Guess i must b the exception that proves the rule!"😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Whether we keep VH or not, Panchali was was assaulted and dragged brutally into the room. She was already going through hell. A few minutes back she was the most respected woman of Aryavarta. And then dragged by her hair along the halls of palace into dice hall.

She would in her life never seen a woman treated like that. So her trauma doesn't become less if we don't show VH.

But if we decide to show it, Krishna can't send her magical clothes. He was fighting a war and he is not God incarnate in our epic

So we need to think of others...but let us do that thinking when we get there. For now yudhi and dury have to be born.

I only need to know if we are doing it. So that I can start thinking what to write for her in my free time. I think all of you would want too. DDSK vyasas and YBANS vyasas, would also need a lot of time to think on it.

My vacations are ending in June, so I wanted to finish as much background research as possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please leave me out of it. I'll b happy to accept whatever words u all put in my mouth but I do not want a POV for the DS or VH. Sutaputra's will be one POV too many!! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I still can't decide whether I should add my part in DS or not 😆 I'm sure it is going to break my heart after narrating that painful POV. But I will have to do it for my FF too so may be by then I will be able to write something here as well. And most serious problem is, others will not agree with my portrayal. My understanding is different for DS. I can post citations too to support my theory. Still I can feel some risk in writing that, specially after yesterday's discussions 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was Shukla Panchami Tithi in the month of Jaishtha. Pritha's head lay comfortably on her window seal. It was time. It was time, once again she thought. Slowly she looked at her baby bump once again. She wasnt bearing her own husband's son, once again. It was her first son to the Kuru clan, through Niyoga. Pritha now understood that her husband's inabaility is the reason why she lay here in a straw hut instead of the royal Kuru palace. "Wrong choice" she sighed, remembering her Swayamvar day. Pritha was very, very worried. She rubbed her nails restlessly, The pain could begin any moment, the Queen thought. "Didi.." suddenly a voice stunned the thoughtful Pritha.
She turned around to face the Madra Princess, and second Queen of Pandu, Pritha's husband. "Madri, uh, I am fine." Pritha said, trying to convey she needed alone time. "I know you are." Madri smiled and sat next to Pritha. "But still, you are my only companion to talk to except Aaryaputra. Isn't it?" she laughed at her own words. Madri's arrival was quite unpredictable for Pritha. It was one night, she was waiting for morning to arrive for her husband to return. But instead of her husband, a messanger only conveyed to her that King Pandu would be returning with his newly wedded wife, Madri.
She was a young princess, lively and vibrant with gorgeous looks. Pritha had faintly welcomed her, and somewhere in the corner of her mind she felt slightly bad for her, knowing the truth of her husband. Time flew, and now here she was, in the room of a straw hut, waiting to give birth to the heir of the Kuru throne. "I came here to give you some goo--, err news, Didi." Madri said cheekily. Pritha waved her hand asking Madri to continue. "Queen Gandhari has still not given birth to her firstborn in Hastinapur. They say it may be dangerous now. The Queen is frustrated. So is King Dhritarashtra. What if it is a miscarriage?" Madri said. Pritha nodded her head. "I really dont know." she answered. "But it is quite unfortunate. I hope everything is fine." Pritha although saying so did not believe these words. Nothing is ever fine. With experience she knew this. It is just destiny, the game of desire and the rise and fall of the players. In this, there is nothing fine or bad. Either you play, or you quit. But Pritha neither had the will, nor the strength to say all this now. She rubbed her nails with each other and waited. Slowly, she felt the pain.
It was the day. She felt. Madri ran out quickly. Pritha stared at her ownself lying to give birth to yet another child. For the world, he will be known as the first son of Pritha. "Partha." Pritha said to herself faintly.


"Pritha! You have given birth to my first son! You have!" Madri gave Pritha a glass of water, as Pandu held the baby in his arms, exclaiming. Surprisingly, the baby was quiet. He wasnt asleep, but quiet. He moved his arms and legs, and blinked his eyes. Pritha held out her hands to take the baby, and within moments, she tightly held him closest to herself possible. She left the little hands of the newborn on her face and cheeks. The boy was fair, healthy and had brown eyes. Strangely he represented none Pritha could think of. He was as though a new ray on sunshine in the dark days of the Kurus. It was dot noon outside. The strong rays of the sun fell on the baby. He restlessly moved his hands and feet. Pritha lay him down on her lap. After a long, long time, Pritha felt happy. Somewhere, her hopes rised. She took care not to rise them much even in the moment of holding her first true eldest son. As she looked at the child, patting him, and singing a lullaby to make him fall asleep, she remembered the day she left back long ago.. The day when it was dark at night. Dawn was about to arrive, and she gave birth to another son, the unnamed one. Who knew where he was, no one. Pritha could not enquire anyone either. The baby made a noise as few drops of tears fell on his face. Pritha quickly wiped them off, and held her son close. "Pritha.." said Pandu, but before he could ask anythign Pritha said, "They are just tears of relief."
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Urmila11

I still can't decide whether I should add my part in DS or not 😆 I'm sure it is going to break my heart after narrating that painful POV. But I will have to do it for my FF too so may be by then I will be able to write something here as well. And most serious problem is, others will not agree with my portrayal. My understanding is different for DS. I can post citations too to support my theory. Still I can feel some risk in writing that, specially after yesterday's discussions 😆

The main advantage of a multi POV is that everyone gets to say their piece. Yudi is one of the most imp people in that scene. He has to say his part. And as long as you can cite, there is no reason to worry how others might feel. You can state how Yudi was feeling. Others need not see it the same way. That is only natural.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful Brishti!! 👏So now it's official! Yudi is born! 😆. Pritha's feelings were too painful.😭. One can feel it and her joy too. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
@Geetha di, I hope everybody will feel like you 😊 but it's just a hope, as I can still feel that all rules and neutral thinkings get just lost when it comes to Yudhi. None wants to see what he feels. How dare that gambler can have any 'feelings'? How dare he deserve our sympathy? 😆 Logic does not work in his case. Anyway, I will wait for other's opinions in this regard. If everybody wants that Yudhi should keep his mouth shut, then I will not write anything.

@Brishti, this is lovely 👏 Kunti's feelings are very well written.

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