New OS Chaar kadam..do baathein..zindagi bhar ka saath part3 on pg 6 - Page 3

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So sweet n luvly os.. Please continue this os.. N thanks for the pm
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Part-2

So finally ram,Priya ki meeting hogayi aunty ki meherbani se donoke beech pyar se Shaadi tak safar ki chaar kadamomein ekdusre ki prathi ek kadam badaliye,ram releiving every sec he spent with her and their first hug,her touch, his in on cloud nine, he reached home with wide smile on his lips, here Priya waiting for ram msg, she is worried, talking herself 
Priya: ithni derhogayi, abhitak msg kyun nehi ki unhone, sahi salamath pahunchgaye hongey na,just then her mobile rings
Priya: ithni derkyun lagaya aapne, am worried 
Ram: oye stop...stop...take a long breathe now, am reached safely,happily 
Priya : oops sorry... OK then... Bahuth raat hogayi good night
Ram smilingly: Ok. . good night...and thank u so much
Priya confuingly : thank u...? Kisliye
Ram : thank u for coming in to my life,
Priya suppressing blush: am heartily welcomes u ...and bits her tongue, she slaps on head.. In hurry she says good night and keeps the phone
Ram can't believe what he heard: hellooo...hellooo.. Kya kahan tumne hello..hello. Ram looks at phone screen  and shockingly: cut kardiya... Yaar he throwed himself to bed, crushing pillow,
Priya blushing to the core, both went to sleep cuddling so much of happiness
A new day, sun peeping out from the clouds, peeping Sunrays landing on Priya face, she woke up with a beautiful charming smile, 
Priya yawningly opens eyes and took mobile, she has a msg in inbox, she wonders : ithni subah msg...? When she read msg her happiness doubled,  good morning msg from ram
Priya is very happy, she replied to msg
Ram super happy reading Priya msg, he is punching in air in happiness
Here these two would be couple enjoying msgwala love, there their parents busy in engagement preparations, kapoors want engagement rings should buy from their ancestors jewelry shop, so its decided Both families go together for ring purchase but ram,Priya don't know that, Both are fully enjoying this phonewala pyar
So kapoors & sharmas at jewelry shop waiting for ram & Priya , Priya reached there on her scooty she is on phone, giving instructions , ram too reached but she didn't noticed him
Priya: do what I said and pls submit work sheet behalf of me as u know na today... She stopped and blushing, her colleague teasing her
Priya : agar aap logon ka hogaya hotoh kya mein chalu may be everyone waiting for me 
Again they started 
Priya blushingly: haan mujhe meri ram KO dekhne ke liye jald...I her voice became very low coz she saw ram stood there looking at her , quickly she cut the call and smiling forcely, ram glares at her normally,
Ram: hogaya tumhari toh chalein...? Priya felt strange she just nods her head both entered at once inside (that is a automatic censor glass door) both got stucked in between doors , both facing eachother, both stood very closely they can feel each other breath,Priya hair strands falling on her face disturbing ram, ram stucks her hair under her ear, Priya feeling butterflies on tummy, ram feeling same but he controlling starts shouting, now both ram & Priya out 
Ram: manager... Manager... Guy comes to them saying sorry 
Ram again starts shouting : whats this maintenance? Where's ur manager by that time that guy continuously saying sorry Priya felt very bad for that guy but ram very stubborn Priya keeps her hand on ram hand, ram calms down looks at Priya,
Priya : chalein...?
Ram : yeah... Shows his hand towards the way and says after u...
Priya feeling very happy , both families witnessing everything  they are feeling very happy , ram and priya both are searching
Ram : kya dundhrahi ho?
Priya : maa ne mujhe kahan yahan aane ko ab yahan pe koi nehi hai 
Ram : ohh.. tumhe bhi...?
Priya confusedly : tumhe bhi... matlab ka kya...?
Ram : wo nothing mujhe bhi meri mom yahan bulayi
Priya thinking: kyun bulaye hongey humein yahan, aapne mujhe bathaye nehi ki aap yahan aanewale ho...?
Ram : mujhe bhi nehi patha haina just kuch der pehle call karke boldiya jaldi aajao, waise tum bhi nehi inform kiya mujhe 
Priya : mere saath bhi wahi hua jo aapke saath hua... waise yahan kyun bulaye humein...?
(Priya relaxes herself on the couch, ram too takes his place)
Ram slightly slaps on her forehead : buddhu... samajhme nehi aayi tumhe, engagement rings ke liye , ye hamari khandani jeweler hai 
Priya: Ohh .. ok, she became very silent, ram too, ram slowly moving close to her 
Priya frightened: ye kya karrahe ho...? She moves away 
Ram encircles his hand over her shoulder : kuch nehi jabtak wo log yahan aaye tabtak hum humari baath aagey badayenge...winks at her, priya blushing comes out from his grip
Priya removing his hand : very impressive mr.kapoor, but not now inn sabke liye bahuth time hai so behave urself, chup chaap jaake uss corner pe baithiye, ram reluctantly moves aside
Just then manager comes to them
Manager: sir aap yahan kapoor sir toh upar hai aapke liye wait karrahe hai sab, hearing this both ram & Priya shocked,
Both at once: kahan hai sab...?
Vikram : jara upar left side pe dekho , ram& Priya turns, they are astounded, vikram & neha steps down comes to them, neha moves towards priya hugs her, 
Vikram : chalein sab wait karrahe hai , ram & priya took blessings from elders
Neha :  bahuth derkardi aane mein ...? (Teasingly )
Vikram teasingly : kya neha tum bhi... ithni badi shop mein humein doondhmein dikhath toh hogi na...? pehle door pe atak gaye uske baad couch pe chipgaye ... humein dundhne ki time kahan yaar samjha karo tum bhi na bewuda sawaal karthi ho
Neha : yeah vikram sorry ram sorry priya, every one laughs
Amaranth kapoor: chalein ab rings selection shuru karein...? Everyone steps towards rings section first priya ring selection, priya didn't like any ring there,ram read priya face expressions, ram excuses himself from there everyone taunting him but he left, they did total shopping but priya ring didn't done she didn't like any thing there she is upset feeling very bad
Priya : papa (Amarnath kapoor), pls aapko jo pasand hai wo ring lelijiyega...
Krishna kapoor: aise kaise beta... ye engagement ring hai poori life time aapke haath mein hogi wo aapko pasand hona chahiye
Priya: maa... yahan sab ithni mote mote rings hai mujhe simple sa chahiye , priya almost in tears
KK keeps her hand on priya head : beta koi baath nehi I understand hum kahi aur lelenge na don't feel bad..
Priya : but maa ye aapka tradition haina shaadi ki saari jewellery yehi se aana hai?
Amarnath & Krishna smiles at her innocence: arey beta koi baath nehi...
At that time ram comes there he is tensed seeing priya in tears, he runs to her side but stands on mid way
Ram : kya hua kyun rorahi hai priya...?
Neha : arey kuch nehi yahan koi bhi ring priya ko pasand nehi aayi madam feeling very bad
Ram : uffo... priya tum bhi na... 
KK: priya ka chodo tumhara ring ka kya hai ...? Kahan gayab hogaye tum
Ram : maa mera aur priya ka ring selection hogaya aap sab log chintha math karo engagement wale din sabko dikhaunga 
Everyone shocked, 
Kapoor : ram ye kya kehrahe ho priya ka toh kuch pasand nehi aayi, tumhara abhitak shuru he nehi ki tum kehrahe ho sab hogaya...? Whats this
Ram : papa relax yes sab hogaya priya ka bhi aur mera bhi ring selection 
Kk : but beta ring priya ko bhi pasand hona chahiye na...?
Ram looking at priya : maa trust me... priya ko wo ring jarur pasand aayegi  trust me,
Neha & Vikram teasingly : ohhh...ram elbows vikram, these three buddies enjoying with each other
 Priya just looking at him without blinking,neha comes to her
Neha : nice na... kithna accha ladka haina u madly in love with him
Priya not in sense, she is drooling over ram, she answering unconsciously: yeah he is just awesome..yes am in...l... she didn't completes the sentence realize that what she gonna tell, quickly turns towards neha and hides her face in palms
Neha just her tightly : am very happy for both of u , thoda bachake  rakho madam ye blush mere dosth ghayal karne ko 
Priya : stop it neha... ab bas bhi karo na ... After some time everyone out from shop, priya & ram wants to spend time with each other , ram wants to take her out, kapoors left in their car, sharmas ready to go in their vehicle, ram hesitatingly goes to Sharma couple
Ram : papa.. 
Sharma ji : haan beta... ram very hesitating
Sharmaji : bolo beta kuch kehna hai kya
Ram : haan papa... wo.. wo...(Ram closed his eyes and in one gulp he said) I want to take priya out for some time ,ram opened his eyes: papa pls pls pls aaj se three days mein bahar jaaraha hu engagement wale din wapas aaunga, am gonna miss her badly so I want to take her out for some time
Sudhir & shipra laughs : yes baba aap lejaao spend some quality time but...
Ram : I Know papa jyada dernehi lagaunga, priya ko sahi salamath ghar pahunchaunga 
Sudhir : ok beta...
Ram hugs him : thank u thank u so much papa love u, sudhir & shipra laughing at his childish antics
Ram goes to priya: so madam "would you do me the honor of accompanying me?"
Priya overwhelmed by his behavior, she just nod her head
Ram & Priya in car, the roads are very calm & clear no traffic sounds nothing both are enjoying this journey listening soft music, priya opened the window enjoying the cold breeze...something stuck her brain she quickly turns to him
Priya : hum kahan jaarahe hai?
Ram just smiles, priya : aap haskyun rahe ho...? Bolo na kahan jaarahe hai hum
Ram : toh aur kya karun, aadha ghanta hogaya humdono ko car mein baithke ab poochrahi ho tum kahan jaarahe hai...? Buddhu ho tum
Priya became silent, ram sensed that she felt bad, he know how to handle her , he stops the car,asks her to get down still she upset on him, 
Priya : wow mr.kapoor, thank u so much
Ram : oye hello ye thanks kyun, mein tumhein mars thodi na leke aaya hu bas beach he toh hai...
Priya she enjoying cold breeze : arey aap mere saath hotoh mars mein kya kahin bhi aajaungi wo place mere liye wow place he hogi... ram feeling very happy hearing these words from her, she didn't realize that she expressed what he matters to her,ram stands there looking at her, priya turns back, she notice that ram stood very far away from her, she runs to him 
Priya breathing heavily : aap yahan kya karrahe ho.. chaliye na... no reaction from ram, he just enjoying her beauty, priya shooks him holding his hands, priya hair dancing coming on to her face, she is struggling to put them back, ram holds her hands, he stucks her hair back in slow pace, both are looking in to each other eyes without blinking, priya comes back to reality, moves back, ram too came back to reality
Ram : bahuth bhook lagraha hai kuch khayenge yahan paas mein ek restaurant hai pehle kuch khaake then we will come back here , priya still blushing, she just nods her head
Ram to make her comfortable starts convo : priya can I ask u something?
Priya : aapko permission ki jarurat nehi ... aap kuch bhi poochsakthe ho.. just ask me
Ram : u trust me ? tumhe pooche bina mein akela engagement rings select kiya , I just hope wo tumhe pasand aaye, priya stops, ram too stops,priya holds his hand 
Priya : I trust u more than myself, mujhe wo ring bahuth bahuth pasand aayegi kyunki wo aapki pasand hai, wo ring mere liye bahuth spl hogi life time ke liye , ram feeling very proud, ram smiles
Ram : toh chalein...bahuth bhook lagraha hai.. priya too smiles
Priya : yeah sure , priya try to remove her hand, but ram holds her back looking at her pleasingly, priya bends her head in shy, ram gives winning smile both reach restaurant, finished food and back to beach to enjoy nature
Both are strolling in the beach holding eachother hands, priya leaning on his shoulder, both are discussing abt their past journey and future, both had a great time its time to go back to home, ram don't want to let go her,priya too feeling some irk in her heart, both reached their car, ram looking here and there,
Ram : three days bahar jaaraha hu..? engagement wale din he wapas aaunga...?
Priya almost in tears: her voice stammering pho...pho...phone pe bhi baath nehi hosaktha?
Ram : ill try priya, bahuth important kaam hai time nehi milegi..., priya throws herself in to his arms , she is in tears, ram hugs back her tightly,both gonna miss very badly eachother...
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Awww very cute n romantic pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
so sweeet update.
so ram is going out for three days for work.
hmmm ye din kaise katenge raya ko ek duasare k bagair..
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pl continue.