New OS Chaar kadam..do baathein..zindagi bhar ka saath part3 on pg 6

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Posted: 2015-05-25T02:42:51Z
Hello everyone a small OSso story starts with a simple function in. Sharma house, marriage fixed between sharmas only daughter Priya sharma with  kapoors elder son ram kapoor, characters sabko patha haina

 

So everyone gathered at sharmas house for roka rasam, as its a arranged marriage, Priya & ram didn't meet each other properly, they thought their parents give a chance to talk with each other but no, as Priya obedient daughter never said no to their parents and ram also , But these two want speak with each other but so many ppl gathered at home for roka so they didnt get chance, both are stealing glances all throughout the function,they are waiting for chance to talk with each other, ram feeling very recklessly whenever relatives leave him he steps towards Priya who is busy with relatives & friends, but someone comes to him again he busy with , everytime Priya heart beat raising whenever ram takes steps towards her,when someone stops him in middle and he gets busy with them she is disappointed her facial expressions says her feelings, struggle inside the heart, finally somehow ram reached her before ram starts ram frnds neha-vikram comes to them

 

Ram: ahem...ahem.. Priya feeling shy, downcasted her eyes while blushing, Ram thinking himself : " omg... Yaar iski smile...uff... Ye ek smile ke liye mein poori jannat uski kadmom mein rakhunga, other side he thinking beta ram sambhalo pehle uski manmein kya hai wo patha Karo then proceed dil KO sambhalo"  jabtak ram self advicing stop karein neha-vikram taps on his shoulder ram gritting his teeth turns back talking under teeth

Ram: aagaye... Patha nehi kahan se aa tapak padthe log, rus mein bhung daalne

Neha: oye fatty hum koi aapke rus mein bhung daalne nehi aaye... Aunty bularahe hai agar aapki ruswus kuch bhi ho wo hogayi toh chalein , ram shocked

 

Ram shockingly: abhi... I mean abhi bahuth kuch baathein karni haina...looking at Priya, Priya understood his meaning looks at him,

Neha starts teasing : oho... Bahuth kuch baathein ... Kaise baathein jara humein bhi.bolo

Ram irritatingly: arey wahi yaar kya pasand kya nehi...neha & vikram looking at him teasingly Ram realized what he said I...I... Mean wahi yaar engagement ki date kab... kahan.. Just then Krishna kapoor & shipra sharma comes to them

 

Krishna tapping ram shoulder : haan beta humein patha hai wo sab aur wo sab baathein hum decide bhi karliye coming 5th day engagement venue sharma house kyunki sharma ji ki accha hai... So I think ur doubt's cleared now, everyone suppressing laughter, ram glaring angrily everyone

Krishna : toh kya hum ab chalsakthe na... total function gets over but these too didn't get a minute time to talk with eachother

 

Still wo dono Aankhon aankhon mein ishaaron se baathein horahi thi, sab ye dono ki dekhrahethe...ram & priya both are in dreamland totally forgot abt surroundings

rishab rams younger brother,steps towards Priya stands beside her

Rishab : uhu...uhu... Priya startles

Rishab : bhabhi chill..  Its me mein aapki eklautha devar, Priya smiles

Rishab hugs ram : congratulations bhai, perfect match

Ram murmuring: mujhe patha hai she is perfect for me but mujhe ye jaanna hai ki Priya ke liye mein perfect hai ya nehi

 

Rishab : matlab Kya hai bhai,abhitak aapne baath nehi ki...?

Ram : wahi yaar sab ye log he baath ki yaar humein baath karne ka mauka he nehi diye...,jab mauka mila ye duffer neha - vikram tapak pade( ram hits vikram on shoulder)

Rishab frowns : uffo... Mein kuch bolu, I can help u

Ram shouts in excitement: sacchi... Everyone looks at ram

Ram mimes sorry and continues discussion with ram

Rishab : bhai control control I have a plan, rishab says something in ram ears

Ram satisfied with rishab plan he is very excited ,

Ram : maa chalein bahuth derhorahi hai every one shocked hearing ram words Priya confused all of sudden why ram behaving like this

Amarnath kapoor: r u sure beta chalein...? In teasing tone

Ram : haan papa sure ab chalenge nehi toh wapas kaise aayenge

Krishna: wapas kyun aayenge

Ram startled: wo...wo... I mean wahi maa we have to come back for engagement... Uske liye we have to leave na...

 

Everyone at a time says: ohooo... Teasing both ram & Priya , Priya controlling her blush,

Finally everything went on good note every one left to their respective homes

Here ram moving here & there he is tensed rishab enters in room

Rishab throws himself on bed... : Kya hua bhai why u so tensed

Ram irritatingly: aur nehi toh kya yaar its already dinner time still we didn't get any call u sure ur plan works?

Rishab : bhai just chill abhibhi din bahuth hai so relax

Here in sharma house everyone happy abt Priya marriage

Everyone teasing Priya on dinner table, Priya can't control her blush she left the place blushingly

Priya eyes falls on something, she is tensed hurriedly went to shipra

Priya : maa.. Maa... Ye dekho.. Ab Kya karenge

Sudhir: Priya beta... ithni tension kyun lerahi ho  mein unko call karungi and then they will come and take this... OK

 

Priya felt Lil happy thinking: kaash ye lene ram aajaye,Priya lips curved unknowingly shipra noticed this

Shipra winks to sudhir: shudheeer lagtha hai kisiki man mein laddu phutrahi hai , Priya comes out of dreamland and looks at her mom with blushy smile

Priya : Ky...Kya...Kya... Maa aap bhi harwaqt... Shipra hugs Priya

Shipra : really Priya am very happy for u , waise ek baath bolo ye sab aap dono ki plan toh nehi na... Ek dusre se Milne ke liye winks at Priya

 

Priya : maaa... Aisa kuch nehi hai

Meanwhile sudhir ji called kapoors and informed them

Ram & rishab heard their convo standing outside the room Krishna ji noticed them and.understood that all these are planned,smiled, she acted normally as she don't know anything

Krishna to amarnath : jee abhi sharma ji ka phone aaya kehrahe hai Jo.ram ke liye unhone shagun mein diye sab saamaan wahi rehgaye... Abhi leke aana acchi hogi kisko bheju

Amarnath : vikram ya rishab KO bhejo...

 

Krishna signals amarnath indicating ram & rishad hearing their convo

Amarnath: Krishna ek min hum dono chalthe haina samdhanji se aur Priya se bhi baathein hojayegi

Ram murmuring irritatingly : jaao sab jaake Milo Priya se sab baath Karo mujhse baath math karne do koi samjhtha he nehi mujhe huh... Rishab laughs at rams antics

 

Ram Lil angrily : kyun tumhe hasi kyun aarahi hai tumhe patha bhi hai mere Kya halath... U never understand goes from there angrily rishab wants to stop him

Rishab: bhai... Bhai... Just then Krishna holds rishab ear rishab wincing in pain

Rishab: maa...maa... What happen? Why u holding my ear

Krishna : tumhe sacchi patha nehi mein kyun tumhari khaan kheech rahi hu ..  Haa...

 

  Ab bolo ye sab aap dono ki planning thi na taaki wo dono ek dusre se milsake

Rishab : maa please bahuth dard horahi hai leave na ... Haan ye meri he planning.. Pls now leave pls Krishna freed his ear

Krishna : mujhe patha tha ye shaithaani tumhara he hogi

Rishab : maa aur Kya karthe aaplog unndono akele baath nehi ki and bhai ka ye haalath dekhnehi saktha isliye I did this

Both Krishna & amarnath smiles : ab jaake wo majnu KO bulao apni laila se Milne jaana haina... Rishab overjoyed hugs them

 

Rishab : sacchi maa... Aap dono nehi jaa rahe ho...

Krishna : arey sacchi wo.sab aap dono KO pareshaan karne ke liye kahan just kidding

Rishab : maa...papa this is not fair... OK now I'll go tell this news to bhai he will be happy

So ram starts to.Priya house after a while he reached he is outside waiting someone will come & open the door actually he hope that Priya will open the door

 

But shipra ji opened: aao ram beta... Abhi Krishna ji ka pH aaya tha jaldi ghar bhejne KO kehrahi thi.. Ram eyes searching all over house shipra ji noticed

Shipra ji : kuch dhundrahe ho beta...

Ram startled : nehi...kuch nehi... Bas wo...wo...shagun ke saaman deditoh mein nikaltha hu

Shipra ji understood : aise kaise beta sudheer ji se milke jaao... Baitho tabtak mein aapke liye chai leke aathi hu

 

... Ram without wasting a sec he took his place shipra laughingly enters into kitchen

 Ram becoming very impatient thinking: yaar kahan ye Priya ithnider hogayi mein yahan wait karraha hu... Ek baar bhi bahar nehi aayi sogayi Kya? Chalo poochletha hu sasuma se

Ram : maa... Ghar mein koi aur nehi dikhrahe sab kahan Gaye

Shipra wantedly : sab matlab Kya beta ghar mein sirf mein, sharma ji aur

Ram cuts her in middle : wahi maa kahan hai wo

 

Shipra smilingly: wo sharma ji ... Sharma ji neeche garden mein Gaye walk ke liye aathe he hongey

Ram disappointed he didn't get any information, shipra continuous: priya... Priya toh so... Uffo ye sugar tin bhi na ithni peeche kaise chali gayi just then door bell rings

Shipra : ram beta pls don't mind door open karsakthe ho sharma ji aaye hongey

Ram: jee maa... Ram murmuring Priya sogayi hogi waise bhi aaj bahuth thakgayi hogi subah roka huyi uske baad relatives mera timing he galath hai.. Ram opens the door and his lips curved in to big grin

Sudhir & Priya laughing discussing abt a funny incident without noticing ram

Priya thinking shipra ji opened door without looking at him: maa patha hai..ram mesmerized in her beauty

Priya stopped , ram looking at her without blinking, sudhir & shipra witnessing

Shipra : ahem... Ahem... Priya & ram back to reality Kya saari baathein yehi karogi Kya

Ram takes blessings from sudhir

 

Sudhir : aao beta... All moves towards hall, shipra ji honewale damaad KO chai waai kuch pilayi ki nehi,

Shipra : sharma ji chai bangayi hai abhi laarahi hu chai ke saath garma garam pakode bhi tayyar, Priya jara aana, Priya goes to help her mom

Sudhir & ram busy in their talks ram stealing glances in between , Priya can sense that, shipra ji teasing her in kitchen she is blushing to the core, ram noticing this and enjoying Priya blushing face

After a while Priya & shipra came with pakoda & chai in tray, sudhir ji tutpade pakode pe but ram toh Priya KO Dekhne mein busy, priya stood their confusedly where to sit ,there only 4 chairs, one chair is empty but its beside ram, she wants to sit there but she is hesitating, shipra: Priya wahan baitho kyun khade ho , jaake baitho ram ke pass , ram face brightened with broad smile

 

Priya blushingly sits there, Priya feeling goosebumps his arm touching with her arm, Priya shivering , ram sensed that she is uncomfortable, he moved his chair Lil bit away giving space ,

After sometime, its time for ram to leave, he wants to talk with Priya alone,

Sudhir : Priya beta ram KO car thak drop karke aao, Priya just nods her head

Ram bids bye to shipra & sudhir, took blessings

Now ram & Priya are alone they are in lift ,

Ram : so... How r u feeling Priya ...looking at her

Priya : mein...mein.. Theek hu..

Before ram continue his talk lift opened, and his car parked there itself, unwillingly ram said bye ram gets in the car he ignited but didn't move, Priya gets worried rushes towards car

Ram sat there holding steering, priya releived that ram is fine she closed her eyes ram looks at Priya

Ram : thodi aur time spend karsakthe ?

Priya blushingly nods her head negatively: bahuth der horahi hai ghar mein sab pareshan hothey hongey so pls...

Ram reluctantly : yeah... OK then byeee

 

Just then some one calls Priya , Priya turns back

Priya to ram : aap jayiye pls inform me once u reach home bye take care, Priya sensed that ram very curious to know who called her Priya : don't worry she is my neighbour aunty

Ram smiled at her : OK then bye

Priya to aunty : jee aunty ji bolo,

Aunty: beta pls Kya mere liye ye list mein saaman leke aasakthe ho...

Priya : aunty pls aap pls math kaho mein leke aaungi aap ghar jaake aaram Karo, just pls maa KO inform kardijiye wo pareshan hongey pls

Aunty: thank u beta, keeps her hand on Priya head and leaves the place

Priya left to purchase things for aunty,Priya walking on road suddenly a car comes and stops beside her When glass down there he is ram

 

Priya confused,smiled: aap yahan...aap Gaye nehi u getting late, ram smiles and gets down the car and steps towards Priya stands in front of her

Ram extends hand : Kya mein aasaktha hu aapke saath

Priya : bahuth dur hai ye shop... Ram takes out car keys but again keeps back

Priya felt Lil confused frowned

Ram smiles: so chalein shows his hand towards road... Priya smiles

Priya : bahuth dur chalna hai... Aapko walk ki adat nehi hogi so pls

Ram : tumhare saath zindagi bhar chalna hai toh kya ye chaar kadam saath nehi chalsaktha, aur I want to walk with u I want to spend more time with pls yaar kuch bhi baath nehi hopayi so shall we

 

Priya felt so proud & happy, both start their walk, both talking abt random things, ram want to make her feel comfortable so he just asking abt her childhood & her like & dislikes

Ram : so... Pls continue

Priya : continue?

Ram : tum kuch bolrahi thi wahan lift mein but honehi paayi..

Priya blushing: wo... Wo... Suddenly she noticed that they reached shop...Lo aagayi shop

Ram disappointedly  kicks a stone : Kya yaar ye shop KO bhi ithni jaldi milna tha huh...

Priya laughs at his antics: Aapka hogaye ho toh chalein... Late horahe hai shop close hojayegi

Ram reluctantly : does namasthe chalo aaj kuch nehi hoga

 

30 mins they finished shopping, bill done they are back to.home, again random talks ram wants to ask her is she OK with marriage but couldn't, in their talks they reached again they bye bye game start

Priya : so then...

Ram : then... Nothing OK I'll make move, Priya turns to move ram can't take it more so he turns and holds Priya hand, Priya taken aback by his action

Ram : Priya pls bolo na u like me u happy with this marriage,

Priya didn't turned back she is feeling shy : Aapko Kya lagthi hai

Ram : yaar u are comfortable with me I know but... I want to know the way I like u u too like me or not, the way I feel for u u too feel same for me...?

 

Priya turns slowly: am very happy with this marriage , and i know I will be very happy with u all through my life, ram super happy hearing this he couldn't control hugs Priya tightly initially Priya shocked by rams this sudden action but she felt very safe in his arms, her hands tightened in slow pace on rams back, ram rubbing her shoulder, Priya nudging her face on ram chest, ram feeling very happy finally he got answers both are lost in each other arms rams phone ringtone gets back them from their love land both startled,

Ram : haan rishab... Reluctantly Yeah coming... Ram cuts the call and looks at Priya, she downcasted her eyes with shy, ram lifts her face with his finger, Priya shyly pushes ram and tries to run, ram holds her hand again

Priya shyly : please...

Ram grinningly: just look at me once, Priya turns

 

Ram pulls her very close to his heart , looking in to her eyes: I...love... You... I wanna grow old with u, gives a peck on her forehead Priya closed eyes

Both ram & Priya out of each other arms ram took Priya face in his palms, swiping her tears nodding his head negatively, ram bends towards her cheeks Priya pushes him and runs but ram calls her

Ram : Priya..., Priya stops her heartbeat skipped a bit but didn't turned

Ram : u didn't said yet am waiting

Priya takes baby steps towards ram she took something for shopping bag and gives to ram

Ram shockingly: chocolate...?

Priya : khush hai toh kuch meetha hojaye saying this she playfully slaps his cheek

Edited by joemahika - 2015-06-30T11:25:15Z
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Posted: 2015-05-25T03:37:29Z
Very cute and romantic with realistic picture of would be married couple of Raya. Keep writing good stuff on them.
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:24:49Z
Wiw... So sweet and cute story...
Simply loved it...
Please do write more...
Thanks for PMTongueTongue
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:31:57Z
wow...so cute so pure so innocent is raya's love...
i want u to continue this story till raya marriage..plzz can u write it.
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:43:14Z
Originally posted by iluvusakshi


wow...so cute so pure so innocent is raya's love...
i want u to continue this story till raya marriage..plzz can u write it.

First of all thank u so much for liking & comments... Yeah I will continue this os... I planned to end this OS with ram & Priya wedding 
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:44:48Z
Originally posted by devajaan


rmtnc os...lv it.

Thank u ...
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:46:11Z
Originally posted by aanchaltulshan


Very cute and romantic with realistic picture of would be married couple of Raya. Keep writing good stuff on them.

Thank u aanchu... 
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Posted: 2015-05-25T04:47:19Z
Originally posted by rags06


Wiw... So sweet and cute story...
Simply loved it...
Please do write more...
Thanks for PMTongueTongue

Thank u rags06...
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