akdha short story- ~ Dreams Came True ~

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Hi all..im here againg with a my crazy story..๐Ÿ˜†actualy I'm confused about this story.. i hate myself because i couldn't write it as i wanted.. but what to do,I'm not a writer na.
๐Ÿคฃ ok..please read all the parts and leave you comments and likes..they mean to me lot.. hey you know I'm very happy beacsuse Akankshaisn't angry with me anymore.. <img src="http://www.freesmileys.org/smileys/smiley-dance004.gif" alt="" /> this crazy story dedicate to
Akanksha,my minne( meeramiss18 ),twinkle( harini1482002), rameshwari11 and priya(laharipriya) and thank you soo much to my all readers..I'm very sorry for the mistakes..Edited by savindi.db - 9 years ago

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Everyone have dreams..may be they are about a proffetion or person.but we must have targets not dreams.beacause if we have targets,we walk towards them.we can get what we wanted.but when it come to dreams we only see them.we don't know if will they cometrue or not but we are dreaming.there is a boy,dreaming about two things knowing that he can't cometrue his dreams,even a one thing.he is dreaming to be an actor,be a superstar.it is his one dream and other is SHE.the love of his life.
He is jalal.he don't have anyone to tackcare of him.he got a Scholarship to XLX univercity for high education.it is a biggest univercity of the contury.he lost his family from a accident which was happened few years back.only he had his uncle but he lost him too before an year.now he is all alone in this world.he don't have any friend.everyone disgust him.beacuse there was a burn mark on his left cheek because of that accident.everyone reject him.everyone laugh at him.everyone used to hurt him.so he didn't talk with anyone in the collage.actualy anyone didn't come to talk with him or be a friend with him.he beared all the words they used for him.he all their words made him more strong.and yeah there is a lover inside this strong man.he love her a lot knowing she is only a dream to him.but what to do,his heart is too sturbbon...
She is the beautiful girl of the collage.also the daughter of a richest businessman in the country.she is a very egoistic girl.all boys are headache to her.
he felt little hungry soo he made his way toward the canteen.he took his purse from the pocket and search for money when he colided with someone.both of them lost their balence and fell on the ground.he fell on the other person.he raised his head to see the person who fell with him.his heart satarted to beat fast.he forgot to breath for a moment.there was she,holding his colar tightly closing her eys tightly.he slowly mumurd
"i..I'm s.sorry"
She wanted to stay like that forever under that strong arms and warm.but he voice made her open her eyes.she slowly opened her eyes.she felt familiar feeling when she looked into his eyes.
He tried to get up before something happend because of now all humiliations like a habbit to him.but unfortunatly he fell again on to her.with this she came to her scene and see his face.she got angry and pushed him with all her strength shouting at him while he fell on the floor.
"What are you think about yourself haan.."she got up and again shouted.
"You wanted to touch me na..thats why you purpously fell on to me.."he gotup and said
"I..I'm sorry..i.i didn't mean to.."he couldnt say further.she slaped him hard and said
"Have you ever seen your face from a mirror haan..ediot..get lost.."saying this she went from there.there he stood holding his cheek looking at the floor.he didn't felt pain of his cheek.but his heart shattered.finaly he listned to those words from her too.his eyes filled with tears.but he controlled them.he could hear others r laughng at him saying diffent thing.he went from there to usual place.It is a alone bulding of the collage.everyday he spent his free time there drawing her beautiful face,thinking about his life.the could tolarate any humilation from anyone but not from her.the strong man who is in inside his didn't want to cry but the lover inside him couldn't hold the tears.
She seems like enjoying her day with her friends but she felt unknown pain inside her heart.but she tried to reject it but failed. next day when jalal goto his class someone punched his stomach.he hold his stomach look up to see the person.there was a group of boys.
"who are you..why are you punched me.."he asked from them.
"its no used to know about us.."saying this they punche him again."this is our area.dont try take our place..you did a mistake yesterday.."they said more more things and punched him.jodha who was about to come out from the class stoped watching at all the scene.unkownly hot tears falling from her eyes.she didnt know what have happened to her but felt his pain as her.their eyea met.she looked down.he remained silence without react looking at her.she couldnt see any more.she ran from their and sent some friends to settle the situation.she secretly watched jalal went from there.her cheek completly wet with tears.she didnt knew why she behave like this.
two week passed she waited for him but he didn't come to collage.she wanted to know about him.she worried about him.she couldn't asked from anyone about him as he didn't have any friend.she felt bad for him.day and night she cold do only onething,only think about him.she search him every hospital and all over town but she didn't find anything about him.she parked her car for go to a shop.she was about to cross the lane when someone pulled her by her hand same time a vehicel passed from there speedly.then she realized that someone have saved her from a accident.not someone,her heart recognized the touch.she immediatly looked at him.her heart jumped with a joy.she felt that she found the water for her thirsty.she was about to thank him but before he said looking away from her then she can't see his left cheek.
"I'm sorry..i didn't mean to touch you this time too"saying this he went from there.her eyes wet with tears.she called him.but he didn't react.then she followed him.but she missed him.that day she couldn't sleep.she could only think about him.she is confused abot herself.she couldn't understant her feelings.but soon she realised her feelings toward him.she realised that she love him.she smiled alone.she can't wait to see his innocent face.he is the innocent man she ever met.she couldn't even imagine a life without even a friend.then how can he live alone like that.
"I'll give him everything he want...i never let anyone to harm or hurt him..."she promised to herself.
"I'm sorry for everything jalal..I'm sorry..i can't take my words again but..i can erase them from you forever from my love..i love you soo much jalal..please forgive me everything..I'll show to the whole worlld that MY JALAL is the handsome boy in this world.."she promissed to herself.she cryied while hidding her face on the pillow and fell to a deep sleep thinking about her jalal.
in the morning she dressed up for him.she is waiting for him when she saw he is coming.her face lited up as she saw him.she went toward him and stood on his way.he didn't see her as he walk looking down.he colided with her but this time they didn't fell.he shokingly looked at her and then looked around.she sweetly smiled at his innocents.
"I..I'm sorry..i.."he couldn't say further.
"its ok..no need to say sorry..and I'm the one who came to your way.."she softly said looking into his eyes with love filled eyes.he gave her a faint smile
"o.ok..excuse me.."saying this he was about to go from there.but before she hold by his elbow.his heart started to beat fast with her touch.
"hey..please..i want to talk with you.."she softly said.
"y..yeah tell me.."he said while looking away to hid his cheek.this made her eyes wet with tears.she didn't removed her hands from his elbow.she fight with herself to hide her sheken voice.
"actualy..i want to thank to you for save my life and most impontatly, to say sorry for everything..i know,it isn't enuogh to my fault..i..i regret about my words which i said that day..I'm sorry..please forgive me..i.."she was about to say more but before he said"no..its ok..its not my first time..these things like my daily routine..i don't care about them.."saying this he innocently smiled with her.she couldn't control her tears.they fell down from her eyes.she wanted to hug him tightly,to kiss his innocent face.he saw tears in her eyes and got worried and said
"i.I'm sorry..if i hurt you.."
she hold his hand and said"no jalal..I'm the one who hurt you.."her eyes shined with tears.he don't know what to do.he badly wanted to wipe her tears from her beautiful eyes which he love crazily
"no..i told na..its ok..I'm going..otherwise your friends will see you with me..it will not good for you..."he said but she didn't remove her hand.she tight the grip and said "no..me too come with you and i don't care about friends.."
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he bit shocked and looked into her eyes which were filled immence love for him.he immediatly looked sway and said "no don't say like that..you will realised thire value when they are not with you..I'm going..don't come with me..otherwise it will not good to you.."saiying he went from there.his every words said nothing but his pain.she cried lookig at him.she cursed to herself for his pain.she cursed to wholeworld to his pain.she didn't attened to her classes.she spent her all the day thinking about him,about his pain.in afternoon she desided to meet him.so she went his class room but he wasn't there.she searched for him every where but he wasn't anywhere.after some time she came to know thant he is his usuall place.she went there.there was he all alone sitting on the floor leaning his head againts to the wall.she slowly went and sat close to him.he is sleeping.she stroked his hair lovingly looking at him."he is soo cute while spleeping"she thought to herself.she continusly gazing at him when she felt movement of his.she immediatly took her hand from his hair.he woke up and rubbed his eyes.he looked aroun and found she is there sitting very close to him smiling with him.he surprised he sat properly on floor and looked at her.
"You..here..?how did you know that im here..?"she smiled at him and said
"Arre..soo many quections..yeah I'm here..someone told me the you are here.."
"Ohk..can i asked the reason for you to come here?
"Hmmm..I'm here to take my luch with you..come on..let's eat.."saying she took her lunch packet from her bag while he shockingly looking at her.she saw it and giggled and said
"Arre..i didn't say that I'm going to eat you..come on.."he looked down and said "no..you eat..I'm not hugury.."She gazed at him for a moment and opened the lunch packet while he is still looking down.she prepaired the first bite and moved it toward his mouth while he looking at her surprisingly.she singneled him to eat it but he rejected.she forcbly feed him and smiled at him.after years someone feed him after her mother.his eyes wet with tears.but he controlled them.she fed him sharing her details with him while he slowly eating listning to her without saying anything.after having lunch with him she went to wash her hands from her water bottle.finaly he couldn't hold his tears.they fell from his eyes.he wiped his tears but it noticed by jodha.she rushed to him and asked while stroking his hair"jalal..what happend..are you crying.."he didn't say anything.she got more worried and asked it again and again.finaly he spoke with much difficulty.
"you are the one who feed me after my mother..when i was a kid i lost my family from an accident..i hadn't anyone than my uncle..but he too dead in last year..i don't have anyone for anything..even a friend..everyone disgust me..even don't look at me..but..but why are you behaving like this with me..why you changed like this..your sympathy.."he couldn't say further.he felt her soft lips on his.he forgot to breath.she broke the kiss and said "its not the sympathy..its the love..i love you..l love you jalal.."she hid her face in his chest and cried.she couldn't listnen to his painfull story."please..don't think that you are alone in this world..I'm with you till my last breath jalal.."she cupped his face and looked into his eyes which were looking at her stunningly.she afectionatly kissed his forehead and assured him blinking her eyes and smiled through her tears.
he couldn't belive anything.he thought that it is a dream but no,its reallity.his heart jump with joy.the words which he dreamed to hear from her,today he could listnen to them.but he suddely stood up and ran from there without saying anything.she confusdly looking at him.she ran behind him but she again missed him.she couldn't understand his behaviour.she searched him everywhere but couldn't find him.next day she was eagerly waiting for him but he didn't come.she went to his class to meet him but when she went he wasn't in the class.a week passed like this.she tried to meet him but couldn't meet him.
today she came very early to catch him.there weren't anyother students.she saw he coming her heart filled with joy.she wanted to run to him and feel his warm by hugging him.she went toward him..she bloked his way and asked "what happend to you jalal..why are you behaving like this.."her voice began to shake.his behaviour hurt her lot.he didn't answer and tried to go but she held his hand tightly."i know..you can't forget my words..i also can't forget them..I'm burning alive when i remind them..i can't take them again..but.but please..please give me a chance..a chance to remove them f.from your heart..please..please jalal..don't t.try to go away from me..please..don't.."she said between her sobs and cried hugging his hand near her heart.he wiped her tear and lovingly said"please jodha..don't cry..please.."she hugged him tightly while he wiping his tears and spoke much difficulty
"Jodha..please listnen to me.."then she slowly looked at him.he lawerd his head and said"jodha..please try to understand..we..we can't be.."he couldn't say further she inturupt"what are you trying say jalal..i don't want to listnen to you.."she said in a little angry tone knowing that what he is trying to explain.he took a long breath and said "please jodha..we are not kids..we can understand anything.."he pused for moment to look at her.he could see that she don't care about his words.but he again started"see,you are a prinsess..and i,I'm just a"he stoped.she kissed hard on his lips to stop him.after kissing she lovingly looked into his eyes and said"if I'm a princess,then you are my prince..understood?" he felt like he is in a dream.but he couldn't be selfish.he turned away from her and said "please understand jodha..we are distance to eachother..and i can't give you a luxury life like you spend..and you have to fulfil your parent's whishes too.."his words made her angry.
"i don't care about anything..i want you jalal..only you..i love you..i want to live with you till my last breath..don't you love me haan..sometime you will say "no "to me..but i know you love me..i saw it in your eyes in that day when you fell onto me..and also...i saw your drawing book.."she said little angry tone.hearing about his drawing book he suprisingly turned toward her and asked"my drawing book..whe..when did you see it.."seeing his innocent face her anger gone away.
"when you ran away from me...you had left it on the floor.."her eyes filled with immence love for him.she went closer to him and said"by the way..i didn't knew that my prince is a talanted artist.."she paused and bit her lip then added "..and poet too" she mischievously smiled seeing his embressed face.then she asked looking into his eyes"i like to hear those magical words from your voice.."then he too looked into her eyes.he didn't know what to do.he was shock,happy,hesitant,scared in same time."am i dreaming.."he again and again asked from himself.he shocked because the girl whom he scretly mesmerized everyday,whom he dreamed to make her his own,whom he saw everyday in his dream,whom his sturbborn heart love crazily,now infront of him saying that she loves him.he is happy beacause that his dream girl too loves him.but he must think about her life than his.his chain of thought broke by her voice"jalal..what are you thinking..don't you say it to me?.."she asked while resting her head on his sholder.he took a long brath and said"jodha..please understand..please think from your mind..accept the reality..see,I'm not the one for you..you have a bright future..don't spoil it for me..everyone will laugh at you..then you will regret about your desision..you don't know that how heartless this world..you will not able to tolerate them.."hearin his words she slowly raised her head and gazed at him with teary eyes for a moment and said"then why should i care about that heartless thing when i have an innocent soul of you..why are find the reasons to stop me jalal..you know that your argument are not valid for this..but why are you behaving like this..Why you always think low about yourself haan.."she asked.her voice is shaken.
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yeah she is right.why he is find the reasons to top her knowing that they aren't valid for love and when he truely loves her.he remained silent whithout look at her.she shake him asking the reason to his behaviour.finaly he spoke"because i hate myself..i disgust myself..i hate my face..i disgust my face..because of this face..i had to bear soo many humiliations..i could tolarate them from others but..not from you..that's why i hate myself..that's why.."he couldn't say further.she covered his mouth from her palm nodding her head say to 'no'.he could see the tears are falling from her eyes like a waterfall.he recall his words.then he realized that he have said about his pain which he tried to hid from her.he felt guilt seeing her tears.on the otherhand she knew that she must treat to wound of his heart.she have alredy vowed her life for him.she caressed his cheek and said"jalal..i wish if i can go to past..but unfortunatly i can't..if can't forget them then don't forget..but atleast don't remind them..i promise you,I'll give you everything you want..you are the most important person of my life..i love you more than anything..beacause of you,i got a new life..please let me live in my new life with you.."she paused for a moment.she could see a tear drop on corner of his eyes.she kissed them and said"i can't see the tears on your eyes..you must be strong.."then she stroked his hair and lovingly said"you know..you are the innocent man i ever met..i love your innocents..i love your beautiful heart..i love your everything..don't hate yourself,never ok..also you are the handsome boy i ever saw..don't disgust yourself,never..I'll show to this wholeworld that MY JALAL is the handsome boy in the world..not only that,I'll show them that you are the best actor of bollywood..."saying this she lovingly smiled at him watching his reaction after hear about his other dream.before he could asked anything she said"don't you remember that i saw your drawing book.."saying she again smile with him.a shy smiled flashed on his lips knowing that she have read his heart secret from his drawing book.seeing his smile her heart filled with immence joy.she can do anything for his happiness.she couldn't stop herself from kissing him.she kissed on corner of his upper lip while he shyly smile.then she said"you know,i love your this innocent smile.."then they shared an eyelock for a moment.
"let's go to OUR place..i want give something to you.."she said breking their eyelock while wrapping her arms around his arms.then they walked to THEIR place talking about many things.actualy SHE is the one who talk and HE is the one who anwer to her quections.He didn't think even frm his dream that this day will come to his life.he wanted to scream and say how much he is happy.he felt that he is in another world when she is with him.when she kiss him he felt soft which he never expirience before.now he felt that he is alive.They reached to their place which is alone building.they sat on the floor."close your eyes.."she said while open her bag.he closed his eyes whithout asking anything.she took his palm and handed a box which is rapping as a gift.he opend his eyes when she said"ok..now open your eyes and see what is in the box.."then he slowly unpakdd the box and opened it.he immediatly looked at her with wide eyes when he opened it.there was a Sony xperia z4 mobile phone inside it.he couldn't belive his eyes.he didn't even think thank he could even touch this phone.
"I.is it for me.."he asked shockingly.she nodded her heaad saying "yes"while smile with him.he shaked his head and said"wh.why did you spent soo much money like this for me..""jalal..i have already told you..nothing is important me otherthan you.."she said caressing his cheek looking into his eyes.then she add with smile"see,how is it..i have heared that boys are very interesting about this na..so check it..hurry up.."her voice filled with excitement.its not for to see the phone but to see his happiness.then she saw his eyes shining with tears.she kissed his cheek and said angain"check it baby..".he slowly took the phone in to his hand.she could see his hand is shekan.she rested her head on his sholder while he enjoying with his new phone.yet,he couldn't belive anything.how much he liked to buy this phone.but he don't have money to spoil for things like this.He looked at her who is resting her head peacefuly on his sholder.he kissed her head sending shivers down her spine.then said"thank you jodha..thank you very.."he couldn't say further.she coverd his mouth from palm and said"don't thank to me jalal..I'm the one who must thank to you..because of you,i found a new life and meaning of the life..so don't say it again ok.."saying she kissed his chin and again rested her head on his sholder.then he said"then you too don't thank to me ok.."hearing this she chuckeled and said "ok my prince"Both of them enjoyed with eachother.they didn't attend to the classess.they shared their deatails with eachother.they took their lunch with eachother while she fedd him.while spending more time with eachother suddenly something remind him and he checked the time.its already late.so he said"jodha..i have to go now.."saying he stoodup.he could see jodha's upset face after haring it.she too stood up and asked"but jalal..why.."then he looked down.how can he tell her about his part time job."i..i want go to my j.job.."hearing this she surprised and asked about it.he hestantly said"its a..its a part time job jodha..for my pocket money.."Hearing it she crossed her hand and said"jalal..now you don't need to do any job for money..after your graduate you will be the boss of my company..i told you na..that I'll give you everythings you wants..so you don't need to do part time job anymore.ok.."then she turned to pack her bag and asked while doing her work"ok..tell me what kind of job you did.."she didn't get any reply so she again asked.then replyed in a law tone"i.I'm a worker of a hardware store.."hearing it her heart ached.her eyes again filled with hot tears.he had to carry heavy things daily to find his pocket money while she spoile bundel of money with her friends.she stood up and slowly went to him.she hugged him very tightly with love.She closed her eyes and said in a shaken voice"you have suffered lot jaan..now its enough..from now,you will stay with me in my flat..that's it ok.."hearing it he schocked and said"what..no jodha...i cant do it..it will not good for you.."he couldnt say further she inturupt."please..don't argue with me..let's go now.."saying she broke the hug.her cheek were completly wet with tears.he knew that she will cry and that's why he was hestiant to say about his job.He lovingly said while caressing her head"my princess..i know,you love me a lot..but its not good idea..it will affect to you..specialy stay with a outsider in a same roof..how will your parents react about it..soo my princess,i can't do it.."After listnen to him she slowly encirceled her hand around his neck and said while brushing her nose with his"fistly i want to say that you are not an outsider..you are my love,my life,my everything and my future husband..did you get it.."he slowly nodded his head to say"yes".seeing it a satisfied smile flashed on her lips.then she said"ok..secondly,i don't care about anyone who don't care about me..this is my life and nobody can't come to my way..may be I'm selfish..but yes,i will be selfish when it come about you..you are only mine and nobody can't change it..did you get it too?"he slowly noded his head.she smiled with him and say"ok..then let's go.."
they went to his boarding room to take his stuffs.actualy its like a storeroom.her eyes wet with tears again thinking how much he have suffered.He lived in a room like a storeroom beacause he didn't have money to pay for good boarding room while she enjoying her life in a luxury building.she promissed to herself to give all the happiness which he didn't have.
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When he pack his stuffs his eyes caught something like a small box.he took it and opened it.a beautiful smile flashed on his lips.he recall aall the events which happended from few weeks ago.then she looked at her who is lost in her thoughts.she slowly went toward her hand hold her hand breaking her chain of thoughts.she smiled with him.he made her sit on the bed and he kneeled down infront of her.then he handed the box on her and softly said"this is for you.."a huge smile flashed on her lips when she opened the box.there was beautiful anklets with differents desings."Jalal..its beautiful.."she softly whisperd taking them to her palm."do you like them..?he asked looking at her beautiful eyes which are shining with happiness." I loved them baby.."she said caressing his cheek.She could see his smile from his eyes.he took her hand to his and say looking in to her eyes"i never thought that i will be able to give them to you like this when i buy them..i brought them whenever i brought something to me..i couldn't stop myself buying them to you..i can't belive but that day have came to my life which i dreamed every night.."she couldn't hold her tears.she immediatly hugged him and pressed her lips hardly on his forehead for.then her sheken voice escap from her mouth."you know baby..this is the best gift of my life..i love you soo much baby..i love you.."they hugged tightly with immence love for each other.Few days passed.they spent aall the time with eachother.she arrannged everythings for a plastic surgery for him.when they eat she feed him always.they went for shopping together.once he choose an anarkali suit for her saying"this is perfectly match to you princess.."when he said it he didn't see the prize of it.she excitedly turned to to see the anarkali which is choosen by him.its very beautiful anarkaili.she was about to take it from him same time he saw the prize of it.his eyes widdened seeing the prize.then he said"no princess..i think it have something wrong.."saying this he was about to place it again but she stopped.she understood all the things and smiled at his innocents.she couldn't stop herself from kissing his cheek.she softly kissed his cheek and chukuled seing his embarrassed face.after few days they went to USA for his surgery.after the surgery she tookcare of him according to the medical instructions.few weeks passed like this.now its time to show her prince to his hadsome face.she covered his eyes carefuly and went toward the mirror.she slowly removed her hands from his eyes and whisperd to his ears "now open your eyes baby.."hearing it he slowly opened his eyes.he gazed at himself for sometime from the mirror while she hugging him from back resting her face on his sholder smiling at him with love filled eyes.he couldn't belive his eyes.his eyes wet with tears.this all beacause of his angel.actualy she is an angel who came to make his life beautiful.she affetionatly kissed his cheeks and softly asked"hows my prince look..." he smiled with her thruogh his tears.she too lovingly smiled with him and said"see,i told you na that MY JALAL is the handsome boy of the world.."He couldn't hold his emotions anymore.he turned and hugged her very tightly and cried hiding his face in her chest and thanked to her between his sobs.she too smiled through her tears caressed his back continustly lovingly kissing his hair and running her fingers in his hair to comfort him.this time she didn't stop him from crying.He broke the hug and looked in to her eyes.he cupped her face and said"i love you jodha..i love you soo much..you are my angel my princess..i love you.."saying he hadly kissed her forehead.then softly kissed her all over the face.she hugged him tightly and said "i love you too MY JALAL..my prince.."

Now that poor boy is a biggest businessman.yeah,he dreamed to be an actor.but he forgot about that dream for her.for his angel.its a his own desision.he don't want any other women around him even infront of a camera.according to her grandfather's last will,after turned to 25,jodha is the owner of all the properties.Then she maid him The chairman of her company after his graduate.now he have his own businesses around the world.this all because of his angel,his princess and her true love.she is his everythings.he protect her as a daiomend.he married her as the biggest businessman jalaluddin mohmed.now they have a two years old son.His life is beautiful and completed because of his ladylove.his all dreams have cametrue because of true love...
~ the end ~Edited by savindi.db - 9 years ago
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Beautiful update dear...loved it a lot...u r truly an amazing writer...
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very interesting and beautiful story..๐Ÿ˜Š I got quite emotional while reading this..  very nicely written down by you..  ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
thanks for the pm dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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it's too big ๐Ÿ˜†
nice story di
thanks for the pm :-)
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Only one word beautiful
Its hearttaking story thsks for it dear plz continue i want more you know na ๐Ÿ‘
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Beautiful heart touching story sweety๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜›
I just loved it dear jodha gave jalal everything really she is an angel. And thnks 4 the dedication baby love u sooo much๐Ÿ˜›
keep writing more and more u hav done a fab job dear๐Ÿ˜›