Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Prabh ..very emotional Raman is no more 😭.but you young ...this much depth in your writing 👏👏
Prabh you are amazing another level of writing dear. It is not easy to write emotional story cause you have to feel it and when you write you want the people to read also feel it and can understanding the emotional you put them true. This is beautiful story of Ishra Jouney even he had no more the present and past of this story well portray Ishu try to keep everything as much as the same that Raman still alive according to their daily routine. And raman had give her freedom from beginning so she can manage her own life and other. Very well taught of husband. Love all the moment you tell about their past fill with love and happiness and she try to keep it with her till her last breathe . I read the review you made many people cry here.😉. Beautiful beautiful is the words from me. Thank you for writing here dear.👏👏👏
Originally posted by: nividances
Smilesforever: The sari moment was too cute. Off to read part 2.
Originally posted by: nividances
Smilesforever: part 2 was just so poignant. I really liked it.
Originally posted by: nividances
Beinglyristic: Priya? That was so beautiful. Nice job dear!
even though, I didn't point it out; I noticed the blooper!! 😉 😆Originally posted by: smilesforever98
Thank you so much! I simply write what I want to and sometimes the emotions turns out well like this one, other times they don't. I have many OSes I wrote, but never posted because they just didn't make sense and the ones that do are the ones you read. Anyhow I'm glad you liked this one and the IshRa journey shown! I was skepital about all the FBs I wrote and if they would confuse anyone (in fact just realized there was a blooper in my story which no one saw😉), but glad you liked the mix between past and present! And yes Ishita has kept him alive through his memories and every day routine! Thank you so much again for the lovely comment!
thank god 😆
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