When time stopped for me.

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Posted: 8 years ago


She said I should wait for her.

That I was the one with whom she belonged.

I waited.

Days...Months...Years...

And then one day she came.

They told me they had seen her at the temple grounds.

I ran...

There she sat at the steps, laughing merrily.

...Looking prettier than ever.

I stood enchanted.

As did the flowers, breeze and the temple chimes.

Stars would be jealous of the twinkle in her eyes.

Moonlight, her soft glow would put to shame.

And then she rose.

...Walked towards me.

Her pearly smile mesmerised me.

And then...

She walked past me.

Eased into the arms another offered.

As if...

That was where she belonged.

I raised my hands to stop her.

But her gown so white, my hands so grubby.

Her Past, I was just that.

Her gift to me- Numbness, I will carry for life.

The voices died down.

The market was empty.

She was long gone.

And time stopped for me.

Call it not a Betrayal.

Or a Folly.

She has chosen Life,

I have chosen her.

She moves on.

Her Grace fills me.

For I am the one for whom time has stopped.

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Posted: 8 years ago
A lighter version of heart break for tomorrow.😭
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I am crying, Chicky! I am crying already. πŸ˜­

This is devastatingly gorgeous!

I raised my hands to stop her.

But her gown so white, my hands so grubby.

Her Past, I was just that.

Her gift to me- Numbness, I will carry for life.

THIS. πŸ˜­

I can't give review, this is too heartbreaking. I am at loss of words, again! You pen the deepest of the feelings, it makes me cry.

He saw her smiling, but it was not for him. OH GOD. πŸ˜­

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Posted: 8 years ago
Soup beautifully written, πŸ˜­
Those 30 sec of precap were such a beauty man, 

I was crying with him. He portrayed so many emotions to perfection even in that 30 sec scene πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ that happiness, that releif.  That surprise. That we saw today, 

But the disbeleif, disappointmemt. Shock, pain n agony is to follow next πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

Tomorrow's epi is gonna be something else , cant wait fr it man πŸ˜­
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chicksoup

A lighter version of heart break for tomorrow.😭

 
A lighter version yet so very moving, sensitive and heartbreaking Cry. 
 
So that means tomorrow we will all cry buckets!?CryCry
 
A beautiful post CS!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful Soup! ! 

Such a feeling that precap gave us. .. 

Res.. I'll be back
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil

😭😭

I am crying, Chicky! I am crying already. πŸ˜­

This is devastatingly gorgeous!

I raised my hands to stop her.

But her gown so white, my hands so grubby.

Her Past, I was just that.

Her gift to me- Numbness, I will carry for life.

THIS. πŸ˜­

I can't give review, this is too heartbreaking. I am at loss of words, again! You pen the deepest of the feelings, it makes me cry.

He saw her smiling, but it was not for him. OH GOD. πŸ˜­


😭 Not sure how I will watch it, Prags.
This heart break is going to be the worst in QH ever.
Yes. 
She smiled...
And it was not for him.
That promo looks more and more beautiful each time I see it.😳

The way he stoops down and asks those kids...

P E R F E C T I O N! β€οΈ

KV! 
It is all about Ahil.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
Res πŸ˜­


Gosh Soup πŸ₯Ί This was so heartbreaking! I am almost scared to see Aahil tomorrow! πŸ˜­

I raised my hands to stop her.

But her gown so white, my hands so grubby.

Her Past, I was just that.

Her gift to me- Numbness, I will carry for life.


If this the lighter version then the actual scene will be so much more heart-wrenching! The words you have written are just so beautiful! It made me imagine the promo n precap all over again! The precap... the way he cried! You said it Soup, no other hero makes me cry with them except Aahil! His pain seems so real! You almost want to reach forward and ease it away! He truly doesn't deserve this heartbreak! We know that they will reunite! That the soul connection will bring Sanam closer to him each time! That she wont be able to prevent her attraction for this stranger! We know, Aahil doesn't! For him, time will come to a standstill! It will be like freakish nightmare coming true!!

The way he cried in the precap was so innocent! And the way he smiled between those tears πŸ˜­πŸ˜­  You could see relief and happiness reflecting in his eyes mixed with all the pain wanting to come out! He looked like he wanted to rush forward, wrap her in his arms and just cry away all the pain! πŸ˜­ He wanted to feel safe again 😭 Her smile reassured him but then it will also give him the biggest blow yet! KV nails it each and every time!  This man is just so special β€οΈ  Soup, this post was so touching πŸ€—Thanks for writing it!! 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: micshy

Soup beautifully written, πŸ˜­

Those 30 sec of precap were such a beauty man, 

I was crying with him. He portrayed so many emotions to perfection even in that 30 sec scene πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ that happiness, that releif.  That surprise. That we saw today, 

But the disbeleif, disappointmemt. Shock, pain n agony is to follow next πŸ˜­πŸ˜­πŸ˜­

Tomorrow's epi is gonna be something else , cant wait fr it man πŸ˜­


😭 Mic,

I couldn't do justice to the precap...I am too numb, to tell the truth.
I usually feel the girl's pain- Be it Khushi or Zoya or Arzoo.
Ahil- The only hero who can make me cry.😭
Poor baby!

I remember Sanam's scene by the IM gate when she returned...
And Ahil's coldness to her.
He is being redeemed...
But this is the worst type of punishment.
He doesn't deserve it.

😭


 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sahil333

 
A lighter version yet so very moving, sensitive and heartbreaking 😭. 
 
So that means tomorrow we will all cry buckets!?😭😭
 
A beautiful post CS!


Thank U.

😭 I think we will be crying buckets this whole weekend.😭