FF___JAB TUNE JHOOT BOLA___Chapter-28 on pg 126 TEASER Pg 137 - Page 91

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

OMG!!!!! ! Update was so sweet and romantic ☺️...I loved the way he asked her that he want to slerp in her arms.....And ruhi bachha deserves a hug πŸ€—...for making dubbu jealous... πŸ˜†...This one is one of my fav part...Looking forward for next...Continue soon...Thanks for pm...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishu27

Hey gayu, great update asusual.. Wonderful lovely update da.. Loved it a lot.. Superb darling.. Pls kill that subbu soon.. Want ishra honeymoon.. Pls


Thank you so much yaar πŸ˜ƒ
Honeymoon πŸ€”
Let me think πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rk654

enjoyed very much this part...πŸ‘πŸΌ

super cool update...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

OMG gaya superb!!!

Ruhi hihi lola she is too evil and cute!!
raman and ishu's moments were awesome.. especially raman's wish..
and the pre cap i know its subbu telling ishita that he loves her
ahrrr i hate it!!!

update jaldi.. too greedy and update a teaser before it too please


Thanks dear 😊
Precap... πŸ˜‰
Surprise 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: divazfankau

awsome updated
I just loved mhika n ruhi
joulesy plan continue soon


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Originally posted by: rufana10


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nice and romantic update😳
poor ishra...bathroom is now their only secret place😳
smart ruhi...she very well knows how to make subbu dubbu jealousπŸ˜ƒ
i was imagining subbu's face during ruhi-mihika convoπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
ishra and their romance☺️☺️
loved this updateπŸ‘πŸΌ
update soon


Thanks dear   πŸ˜ƒ
Yeah...at least they have bathroom πŸ˜† 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Mera song phir se select ni hua huh...
I am not going to suggest in future (I amtoo good in breakingaise promises :D)
What an irony last time for manmarzian I told the saanso ko song it wasn't selected.. Now I thought yeh nahi Chun hoga to nahi dia n it is selected :P
Anyway
I told you mihika is karamchand jaasoos.. See up early :P
Ohh.. Toh Ruhi is as actually there to stop them doing ahem ahem lol.
Subbu jal k raakh Hua kya???
I loved his wish that was so cute


Sorry sweetu... 😳 (for the song)
Mihika karamchand jaasoos πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Thanks for enjoying πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Kutties πŸ˜ƒ

It's fun posting Teasers πŸ˜†

So here goes another one

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TEASER


When she tried to part from him her mangalsutra ravelled to his shirt button. She worriedly tried to unravel it carefully while he looked at her enticing beauty. She tried her best not to touch him. However, the small chain made it difficult for her to maintain the distance. That was when Raman entered the scene and halted in his track. He could see Ishita's back. From that view anyone would think that she is kissing his chest. Subbu looked diabolically at an aweatruck Raman. He ran his hands behind her back withoit touching her. He drew her perfect contour in a devilish way as if showing Raman that how close she is with him. Raman didn't move from his track but waited for her to turn gritting his teeth.


Ishita after some patient tries, successfully unknotted her mangalsutra and turned towards the door. Raman looked on at her messed up countenance. Her vermilion smeared on her forehead because of touching Subbu's chest. Her facial expressions voiced out that she didn't expect him to see it. She walked up to him but he stopped her making her shudder.


Ishita: "Raman...?"



PS. Do you want the update this evening πŸ˜‰



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Edited by Gaya3sb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nahi phir se teaser πŸ˜­ 
I want update πŸ˜‰

Gaye Baha'is pane mai πŸ˜•
Edited by 12Singmeenu - 8 years ago