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shreyad27

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Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

nice 1 yaar ash luv it 😊

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Anamika2692001
Superb!! 👏

Kya likha hai! Wah! :D

Parth is just confused. No better word to describe him.

Vidushi haunts his mind and soul. He wants her to be there, even if they just bicker.

Love is more complicated than simultaneous linear equations.

Awesome work!!

xoxo
Amreen aka Amul Butter 🤣

Thank you, thank you! 😉

yesh. Confused atma, angry atma, Tai chi atma.

😆

Yesh yesh and yesh. He wants her there.

Love...speak to me of something else!

😳 Thanks again butterly delicious !😆

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Ashlesha

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: shreyad27
nice 1 yaar ash luv it 😊

Glad you enjoyed it Shrrreyaaa!😆

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

May 8

Title: Let the heavens fall.

Pairing: Sanyukta/Randhir

Rating: T

Randhir is broken and she can see it, because he is acting unlike himself.

He's silent, so silent that if she were not so aware to his presence and his absence, she'd not notice him at all.

She can't take it, and it frustrates her.

But it worries her more than it frustrates her. He's always been her sounding board (well, most of the times) so why can't he lean on her and share his pain.

Despite being thrown off by his harsh words, she decides to be persistent, because stubborn is what she is, like he has pointed out countless times.

"Randhir, please, tell me what's wrong, please"

If anything, her soft words just salt his wounds and the greyness in his erupts out like thunder.

Grabbing her hand and twisting it behind her back, he growls in her ear.

Tells her there is no problem, that the only problem there would be are people standing in his way. And he'd crush them

He's rage and storm.

When he lets go it takes her all of her strength to not crumple down into a mess.

Instead, she winces in pain and walks away.

Randhir feels nothing inside, he's all numb and he can't feel.

He can't afford to feel.

There's work to be done.

Responsibilities to be shouldered.

He thanks Jiggy silently for the voice changer app.

Talking to Ragini, impersonating Karan.

It's the hardest thing he's ever done.

He's choking back sobs, trying not to stutter or stumble over his words.

In reassuring her he knows he's doing something he shouldn't.

He of all people knows it is wrong to give someone false hope that will be snatched away.

Yet, this is all he can do right now, he promised Karan he'd take care of Ragini.

It's duty that binds him.

And the chains are starting to wrap tighter around him.

Just like the web of lies he's spinning.

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Anamika2692001

@Anamika2692001

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Yet again...poignant, beautiful and impeccably penned down.

I love Sanyu's concern for Randhir. I love her persistence and stubbornness too. She really cares for RD. :)

Randhir...he is a gem. He doesn't deserve all this. Selfish parents, then the death of Jiggy and now Karan. His loved ones just leave. It's not surprising that he has become numb with all the pain.

In today's episode, he will share his pain with Sanyu and cry his heart out. That is good. I know she will be there for him.

Randhir...I can't see him like this. 😔

Once again...beautiful and fantastic work!! 👏

xoxo
Amreen aka Amul Butter aka Stalker 🤣

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Omg 7 updtes
Read it in one go

I wonder where I was after reading first update
I missed seven amzng updates

Bt anyways its never too late

Oh god the way u expresses emtnl stuff hatts off
Really loved all of them

Spcl I like varya one
I misses vd sir n Maya a lot their sizzling chemistry

Then last one how badly rd is broken
Not sharing his pain

U penned it beautifully

Update next soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Anamika2692001
Yet again...poignant, beautiful and impeccably penned down.

I love Sanyu's concern for Randhir. I love her persistence and stubbornness too. She really cares for RD. :)

Randhir...he is a gem. He doesn't deserve all this. Selfish parents, then the death of Jiggy and now Karan. His loved ones just leave. It's not surprising that he has become numb with all the pain.

In today's episode, he will share his pain with Sanyu and cry his heart out. That is good. I know she will be there for him.

Randhir...I can't see him like this. 😔

Once again...beautiful and fantastic work!! 👏

xoxo
Amreen aka Amul Butter aka Stalker 🤣

Thank you so much Butterly!

You know I have a hard time watching RD suffer!

It hurt me, poor baby, but it made me angry too.

I wish he would talk to someone!

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Ashlesha

@SheWantsFanfic

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Omg 7 updtes
Read it in one go

I wonder where I was after reading first update
I missed seven amzng updates

Bt anyways its never too late

Oh god the way u expresses emtnl stuff hatts off
Really loved all of them

Spcl I like varya one
I misses vd sir n Maya a lot their sizzling chemistry

Then last one how badly rd is broken
Not sharing his pain

U penned it beautifully

Update next soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

Thanks a lot.

I felt Maya should learn about VD's death

I've always been a bit of a Kabir Maya Shipper lol

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Ashlesha

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IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

May 9

Title: Wise Fool

Pairing: Vidushi/Parth

Rating: T

Love the one who hates you

He's talking with some random girl from some random class.

She is hanging on Parth's everyword, her face and eyes open, taking Parth's smile in

'We should spend more time together' she squeaks.

The moment Vidushi lays her eyes on that scene is the moment she knows all is lost.

Vidushi's nostrils flares, but she schools herself and forces herself to look at Sahil.

Clueless, Sweet Sahil.

Harmless really.

Nothing like Parth.

She knows Parth feels no jealousy, yet the instinct to try and make him feel something, anything takes over all logic.

Before she knows it, she's opened her mouth and the words are out

"Waise, you know Sahil, you are so charming"

Hate the one who loves you

Her voice sounds silly and girlish, high pitched and foolish.

But then, that's what she feels like.

A child who has had attention snatched away from her.

And the only way to get it back is to make some noise.

So that's what she does.

Sahil is flattered, bashful and adorable, like a fluffy puppy.

His voice is soft and astonished, asking her to go with him for a movie.

But all Vidushi sees is Parth.

And Parth sees anything but Vidushi.

It's almost poetic really.

Which is the real crime?

Vidushi has no words to say to Sahil.

But many to say to the girl Parth just asked out for a date.

But the cow's friend also had a lot to say to Vidushi.

Ex Girl Friend.

Dump jo kiya tha Parth ne.

Now she's just like yesterday's stale food. Or a broken toy. Or a tattered book.

Thrown aside once it is no longer fit to serve it's purpose.

Vidushi frowns.

And walks away.

She should know better.

She has been through something like this before hasn't she?

Varun. Parth. Varun. Parth

What does it matter?

She should be wiser, learn from her past mistakes.

She should have known he was trouble.

But she didn't.

Her name mocks her sometimes.

Vidushi, The Wise one.

Yes, Vidushi. The Wise Fool.

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shreyad27

@shreyad27

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

nice ash lyk it 😊 but jab vidushi ne sahil ko charming bola tab parth ne unhe ek baar dekha tujhe kya lagta hai usse thodisi jealousy hui q ki i thought so??

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