Neira Reunion FF : Updated on 20th June - Page 31 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

Wow! I had this big smile on my face while reading this. I love the dialogues you write, they are so lovely, and sometimes very funny alsoπŸ˜†
I liked how you included everyone in this. Them with their kids! Perfect family picture! I also liked how Ragini cheered up Suhani in the last part. Their was sweet sweet romance too😳
All and all, sweet and lovely update! Continue soon:)




Omg.. thanks for liking it dea..
M happy you liked it. 😳
Yes will update soon 😊
Thanks for bearing those silly mistakes...
πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ZainabSidd




Omg.. thanks for liking it dea..
M happy you liked it. 😳
Yes will update soon 😊
Thanks for bearing those silly mistakes...
πŸ˜†



I don't need to bear something I love:) Do continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR



I don't need to bear something I love:) Do continue!



Yuppp soon.
😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Soon will update the next part.
With fullon NeRa romance.
Just both of them 😳
With some moments from their past which will be awesome.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
WOW! Read both he parts and they are amazing. The flow of the story is so smooth. Loved it.
Loved how Ragini told everybody that she loved Suhaani the most.So sweet! Am so glad that she kept the photo albums. 

I am sure it meant the world to Nachiket. 

Please do continue. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: poetic

WOW! Read both he parts and they are amazing. The flow of the story is so smooth. Loved it.

Loved how Ragini told everybody that she loved Suhaani the most.So sweet! Am so glad that she kept the photo albums.

I am sure it meant the world to Nachiket.

Please do continue.



Glad you liked it
😳
I Know m a bad writer but thanks for reading it..
Sure will update soon.
And next update will have only NeRa .. NeRa foreva
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ZainabSidd



Glad you liked it
😳
I Know m a bad writer but thanks for reading it..
Sure will update soon.
And next update will have only NeRa .. NeRa foreva


Arrey Zainab, please don't let anybody tell you that you are not a good writer.

In fact, you are a fabulous writer ! β­οΈ And we love reading your stories.
So bring it on, Champ. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Thanks @ZainabSidd for the Update .. The Suhani part was so touchy.. For once I got emotional.. 
Loved the way you brought in the angle of the Children bonding with their parents over dinner and then the Photo Albums .. 

Suhani part was the best ..

No one gives a damn for the errors/typos till you are able to convey the right emotions and expressions.. No one is perfect .. and it's usual for people to do mistakes.. Why do you get so low with it ?

Please keep writing.. Last part of the story was wonderful .. So next part we get to see Nachiket and Ragini ? πŸ˜³

Do continue soon .. PM me, if possible, when you're done with your next Update..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Zainadsidd,This is just too too good.the idea itself of the whole photo album bringing into the story is great.The bonding of kids with their parents for dinner and post dinner scenes is the real USP of this update.

Suhaani is the real sweetheart among all 5 kids even in the show.Keep writing and waiting for lots of Neira romance in your next update as mentioned by you.

It feels so nice actually to read so many FF and OS in our forum.We have so many talented writers and i think Neira brings the best out of everyone .


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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: poetic



Arrey Zainab, please don't let anybody tell you that you are not a good writer.

In fact, you are a fabulous writer !⭐️And we love reading your stories.
So bring it on, Champ.πŸ˜ƒ




Awww Tysm Sweets..
It means alott.. 😊
Thankss soo much.
will update sooon Dea