Manan SS- Cant wait ( pt 5 on pg 16)

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Character Sketch

Every one is same as in the show.. but this story is having leap of 2 years.
Nandani Murthy- 19 years old. classical singer. doing internship in SPACE.
Navya Naveli- 20 years old. have a kid Arav. bollywood playback singer.
Fab 5- cracked 4 super hit albums.
Manik Malhotra- going to turn 21 soon. handles Malhotra Industries with Nyonika & His father.
Aliya- 19 years old.
Cabir-21 years old. is RJ.
Mukti- 20 years old. She is also part of some NGO which is aimed towards halting and curing the Cancer.
Dhruv- 20 years old. manages his band that is Fab 5 with Aliya. n both also handles Aliya's family business.

seven of them are 3rd year students of SPACE.
Ams still dont like manan relationship, but she is ok with it bcoz of nandani's happiness.
Rishab is recovering.. n hav huge crush on mukti.
and Navya's baby Arav is 2 years old and he thinks nandu is his gf n he hates manik bcz he is always around nandu.
Manik too dont like Arav because of the same reason.

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Manik's POV
Its been almost 3 years when I first time met Nandani.. my girl.. my own star..
She was so small, cute, innocent.. n now she looks more younger n damn more sexy..
Last year I proposed her officially to be my girl and she said yess.. no HELL YES
N now day after tomorrow is my birthday n Im going to give a big surprise to nandu yes.. 
n idk how she gonna react to that so Im damn nervous too.. yeah u heard it.. The Manik Malhotra is nervous..

Nandani's POV
Manik has just came from his tour n he havent even properly spend time with me.. idk y he is ignoring me.
n from last week i can see how much he is excited for his coming birthday..
last year we i mean me, navya n fab 4 surprised him for his 20th birthday.. 
Flash back-{
The room was decorated with party things. There were drinks, snacks and all sorts of fancy stuff. Everyone had confetti poppers in their hands.
Fab 5 with Navya and her lil kiddo arav were all present, except Nandani.
Right on cue, Nandani entered quickly. She greeted everyone with haste and sighed. 
"Cabir where's the cake?" Nandani asked, as Cabir giggled. "There it is, Nandu." Nabdani smiled.
"Manik is coming this way, turn the lights off, please." Everyone nodded, as Dhruv turned the lights off.
Manik entered and noticed that everything was dark. He inwardly sighed. 
'Please don't tell me' his thoughts were cut off when the lights turned on, accompanied by joyous screaming.
"SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY MONSTER!" Manik just stood their motionless, as the sound of confetti poppers were heard. Right on cue, confetti fell on everyone's heads.
Nandani walked up to him.
He became so happy that he just came n kiss Nandu on her lips for long time in front of everyone.Now Nandani just stood their motionless.
others just turn towords other side coz of nandani. because they knew that their nandu is very shy, but manik is shameless guy.
Cabir n mukti started coughing .
Aliya: Guys pahle Birthday celebrate kar lete hai. phir u can continue. No one will stop u.
Navya : ha yaar.. Arav bi yahi hai.
but manik is manik so he didnt bother to stop.
Manik was just kissing her but he stopped when Arav started crying.
"I thought you had forgotten..." Manik trailed of, embarrassed.
"How could I forget?" Nandani smirked and kissed him on the cheek, forgetting everyone's presence.
Manik was shocked that she was so bold, while Nandani just blushed. everyone laughed, excluding Arav, Nandani and Manik.
"wwell let Manik c-cut the cake, yeah the c-cake." Nandani stuttered out, clearly still embarrassed. Manik just smirked and cut the cake.
}-Flashback.



If u guys liked it then plz comment ur views good bad both..
n plz suggest me how can i proceed this story... love u all

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Originally posted by: 8seetha

I have to tell truth?


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Nice start..
Do continue soon..

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It's was awesome I can imagine the kiss u penned it very nicely. Waiting for the dear. Loved it. Tc. Bye
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waiting for nextEdited by 8seetha - 9 years ago
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I really "cant wait" for the next chapter 😃
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awww...liked it...just blushing while reading
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loved the jhatka kiss..plz cont soon..
this was awesome
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i really liked this. it was written well, and so cute.
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WHAT A START MAN... AWESOME,, LOVED IT..
DO CONTINUE SOON. NEED LONGER UPDATE PLZZZ