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I know everyone must be yeh ladki kahan chali gayi - kahan pehle regular and fast update milte the aur ab - yeh toh gayab ho gayi and short updates de rahi hai... I'm really sorry but I was on Mosi duty!!! My two adorable and shaitaan nephews were home for the friday off and Mosi ka band baja diya un logon ne (woh thursday afternoon se aaye huye the mere pass) - we played, went for movies and mujhe khoob nachaya dono ne... I love them par meri story suffer kar gayi...

Chalo am giving an update now and will also post one later in the night as well

Chapter 39

Shakti went after to Jagmal to exact revenge for the all the wrong he had done when he was joined by Patta, Kunwar Balwant, Maan Singh, Som and Veeni Das- Chakrapani was accompanying Kunwar Pratap while they trapped Jagmal

Som: But how would we know which path he is using to reach Bhabisa?

Patta: Jagmal is deranged but he is also a lazy fellow so he would use a path that offers the least resistance to him

KB: which means he will use the side trail path of the forest Daata created for the ladies to use to visit the river

Everyone smiles while Shakti contemplates a plan

Shakti: We trap him like the insect he his and today he will be crushed like one as well. Jagmal has done enough damage and today justice will be delivered

They all walk towards a small field that came towards the middle of the forest trail - the field was all sand and sand dunes covered rocks that functioned as resting place for the vultures who would drag their meals there and enjoy them under the sun- sometimes they fought the others for carcasses

Jagmal was using the path trying to figure out a way to enter the palace when he saw two women approaching - both had their heads covered with long veils and sounded unusual but when they talked about Ajabde being all alone by herself in the chambers he could not stop himself

JM: Stop right there

Both the women come to a halt and turn towards the person who stopped them - Jagmal looked at the women from head to toe with danger bells ringing in his head as he approached the women

JM: I need to get into the palace. Which is the way that leads to it apart from the main entrance?

Woman 1(nasally high pitched voice): Hukum there is no other way. You know Raoji increased the security so all alternate routes have been closed

Woman 2: Yes (in man's voice) woman 1 kicks her a little then comes a very shallow voice: true but there is the field way

JM: Field way?

Woman 2: Ji walk 40 straight steps then take a sharp left and follow the tree line till you start seeing the peak of the palace then turn right and follow the peak for another 40 steps and you will see an open field and all you have to do is cross that field to reach the palace

JM (thoughts):  40 straight then sharp left see a peak then right and follow the peak till open field and once I cross the open field then no one will come between me and my victory

He turns around to find the women gone and he goes off on the path they told him

Patta and Veeni take off their women disguises

Patta: How do women manage to wear such heavy dresses? I was suffocating the entire time

Veeni: True brother - the pains they bear in order to look good

Patta: We should head to the field as I'm interested in seeing that Jagmal in pain

Veeni: Me too


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Sorry yaar...am gonna update later as well - will PM you when I do that one
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AS promised here is the final update for this story...Thank you for patiently waiting for this one and I will try my best from next time to give you guys regular updates

Chapter 40

Jagmal wandered like a lunatic on the path dreaming of his victory and Pratap's defeat unaware that he had been going in circles for the most of the time but as his eyes fell on the flag flying high on one of the security check-posts recently constructed he thought of it to be the peak and dashed off straight towards it. The field was circular and laid in the middle so Jagmal ended in the field while chasing after the flag

Shakti had created a special opening for Jagmal where Balwant had tied rope between two trees that stood at the entrance while Shakti spread pieces of pebbles and glass which he covered with dry grass. Som was sitting on top of one of the trees hidden as he was to make animal noises to distract Jagmal while Maan Singh would make sure Jagmal went in direction of the special opening only (even if he had to physically push him in that direction)

Jagmal didn't need any pushing as his over-worked brain did not allow him to think or check his surroundings so when Som made the roar he ran towards the opening thinking that if he was in the open he would be safe but he didn't see the tied rope and fell on the shards of glasses as well as pebbles hurting himself all over. His shoes fell off as a result of the fall and so when he tried standing up to move away from the spot the glasses embedded themselves in his feet making him hop on leg after the other like a dancing clown

Pratap and Chakri arrived on the scene and saw Jagmal jumping up and down. Before Chakrapani could even blink, Pratap called out Jagmal's name making the deranged prince look at him with wide eyes and mouth open

Pratap: You have crossed all limits Jagmal and its time you meet your end

Jagmal: Will you look at that Sakha Veer has come to end me I feel so privileged. You know my Dada Bhai - no not Bahi but rather my enemy would have a strong opinion about it

Pratap who had been disguised as Sakha Veer kept on looking at the lunatic who continued

JM: You know I killed his Kakasa and wounded Rawatji - his mentor real bad with a gun shot and killed innocents as well but that is nothing - I'm here to kidnap Rajkumari Ajabde who happens to be his beloved but poor him won't even get a chance to say goodbye as I intend on killing her after I marry her and use her - see once I have her he will be destroyed and once he is gone I won't need her anymore so I'll discard her like the toys I used to throw away as a child

All the men got enraged hearing the lunatic talk especially her brothers who wanted to throttle Jagmal and even Pratap had heard enough

Pratap: I promise you Jagmal I won't have any problems with Sakha Veer killing you (he removes his scarf and as his face gets revealed Jagmal gets scared)

JM: This can't be - you can't be Sakha Veer. If you are Sakha Veer then that means it was you who killed Surtan Singh and stopped me at Bundi and you also killed all the other royals

Pratap: Yes it was me who killed all those men who did nothing but harm our Praja as I took a vow to protect my people and motherland from evil men like you

JM: Evil? I'm no evil Pratap I'm just a guy with ambitions which you clearly lack

Pratap: I have no ambitions of destroying my kingdom. Pick up your sword and fight me like a man

JM: Today I will fight and before I'll kill you I will make you suffer - I will take away Ajabde right in front of your eyes while you'll bleed to death

Pratap walks towards him as the wind starts blowing and the sky gets filled with vultures making their noises

JM picks his sword and takes a step but the glass embedded in them hurts which slows him down but he in his crazy state just rushes forward embedding the shard deeper into his feet with blood oozing out of them leaving their mark on the ground. Pratap dodges his attack easily and gives him hard kick on the chest making him fall backwards - as JM falls on the ground he throws sand into Pratap's eyes blinding him for a few seconds in which he pushes him on the ground and punches him making his sword fall out of his hands - Pratap holds his hand and throws him back off - he gets up and picks him by the neck proceeds to punch him the gut consecutively making blood come out of Jagmal's mouth and then with one final punch he makes him fall hard on the ground

JM (spits blood out and smiles): Is that it Dada Bhai are you done with me? won't you finish the job?

Pratap stares at him impassively when the others join him

JM: So we have an audience and look my other big brother is also here. So are two going to fight who gets the honour of killing me or will the two pipsqueaks will do the job (looks at Patta and Balwant)

Everyone look at Pratap who holds a steady gaze

JM (in a taunting manner): are you afraid of killing me? No that can't be it after all you are the bravest warrior of the Rajputana and now I also know that you are the saviour of the people - Sakha Veer so what happened

Shakti: finish him now Dada Bhai or give me the permission to do it

JM: yes yes tell your younger brother to kill me

Pratap: No one is killing you Jagmal

Shakti and the others: What?

Chakrapani understands and speaks up: Killing him would be dishonour for your swords as he is defenceless

Shakti: But we cannot leave him alive

Patta: Exactly he is also not mentally stable and if he somehow survives then we'll have a greater problem

Balwant: He won't live and then he looks at the sky

JM (irritated): Hey why are you all standing there like statues? I'm here waiting you know. Do you want to know my last wish?

Pratap: No one present here is going to kill you but I assure you that you will die today but not at our hands - we won't dishonour ourselves by killing you

JM: So you won't kill me but I would still die

Shakti: Your death will come flying from the sky Jagmal - you will bear the pain you gave others

Patta: A man like you does not deserve an honourable death

Balwant: Look up at the sky and tell me what you see?

JM looks up to realise the hordes of vultures flying high and taking rounds. Fear makes its presence as realisation hits in

JM: You are not serious are you? They will eat me up alive

Everyone stays silent

JM: No matter what I did you are still my elder brother and so you cannot in your conscious let me die like this (looks at Pratap and Shakti)

Shakti: You broke all ties when you tried killing Dada Bhai Pratap and carried evil intentions for Bhabisa

JM: No...you cannot leave me here (gets panicky)

All the others look at Pratap who nods his head and walks away from the crazy delinquent young prince Jagmal who screamed like crazy as the vultures descend from the sky and tear him up alive - thus ended the life of Kunwar Jagmal who was raised in the lap of jealousy, envy, hatred and competition if only his mother had been a little less preoccupied with her own dreams and desires maybe her son would not have turned out the way he did

 

 

 

Chapter 41

Chittor was not surprised to learn the fate of the young prince and his mother. As soon as the news of Jagmal's death reached the court everyone looked at each Ranaji who remained stoic while sounds of things breaking were heard from inside the palace. Court was adjourned and Ranaji went alone to check up on the situation - he found DheerBai had destroyed everything that was kept in her room - her tears did not stop as she sat by the bed holding her dead son's clothes

DB: I want revenge for my son

US: that is not possible

DB: Why? Why is it not possible Ranaji because your Pratap killed him

US: Pratap did not kill him neither did Shakti Dheer Baiji

DB stares at him blankly

US: Jagmal was eaten alive by the vultures

DB's face registers shock and horror on learning the manner in which her son died - screaming in agony as the vultures tore him apart

DB: They brutally murdered my son I won't forgive them

US: They don't need your forgiveness

DB: Of course you will side with them

US: I loved Jagmal like my own even though I knew he was not my son Dheer Baiji. You thought you had cleared all the proofs so that I would never learn about Jagmal's lineage but that clearly didn't happen

DB: No those are lies...Jagmal was your son

US: No he wasn't - he was your and Surtan Singh's illegitimate child. A child that was formed before our marriage

DB stunned does not say a word

US: Pack your belongings and be ready- you will be escorted out in an hour. As of now you are no longer welcome in Mewar. You will not be allowed to take any daasi with you as all relationships with you have ended DheerBai. I don't care where you go or what you do but if you are seen anywhere in Mewar's territories from tomorrow then you must know that the soldiers would have been given orders to eliminate you at first sight

US turns around and leaves a crying a DB while he headed off to meet Rawatji who was recovering from the wounds he had received from Jagmal

 

3 MONTHS LATER

The wedding went off smoothly and Ajabde had arrived at her in laws home with a huge celebration. They were at the new place Pratap had built since leaving his father and he was showing no signs of going back to his childhood home even though his mother and Sajja Baiji had gone back due to the consistent pleadings by the council. But Pratap and Shakti refused to pay any heed to them

Ajabde stood in the kitchen checking up on the dinner's preparation when her young brother -in-law Vikram ran him all muddied up

Ajabde: Wait right there Kunwar Vikram...What have you done to yourself?

Vikram: Nothing Bhabisa besides if you want to see something really muddy then go and see Dada Bhai Pratap and Dada Bhai Shakti

Ajabde leaves the kitchen with Vikram to see the commotion when her husband and elder brother-in-law come in bathed in muddy water along with their friends

Ajabde: Where do you think you are going?

They all come to a halt looking at her

Shakti: Bhabisa we had such a nice practice you know - I won my sessions

Ajabde: Haan...that's very good but why are all of you dirtying my home?

Everyone looks at the Kunwaranisa who was glaring at her husband who seemed to be really silent

Ajabde: All of you kindly use the back path to enter and before entering the rooms make sure there is no spot of mud on you, your clothes and shoes as well.

As they were all leaving she said

Ajabde: Wait a minute please

They thought she would speak to her husband so only Pratap turned and Ajabde smiled looking at him

Ajabde: You forgot him and she sent Vikram with them and turned around leaving them all stunned especially her husband

 

 

LATER THAT NIGHT

Pratap saw his wife getting ready for bed - she gently removed her jewellery one by one and then it appeared she was having a bit of problem with her neck piece so he slowly went behind her and assisted her

Ajabde felt her husband's fingers on her neck - his touch sent shivers down her spine making her feel everything - she saw him through the mirror their eyes locking into a stare but she dropped them low unable to handle his intense gaze. Pratap's hand moved for the next object which was her ear-rings. Ajabde never felt this sensitive before - they had not being intimate as right after their marriage Pratap had to leave for a war against the Afghans and it had been only a week since he came back from the war and they were just started to live their married life together as partners

Ajabde: Kunwar Pratap

Pratap did not say a word instead he just helped her up and turned her towards him

Pratap: You look so beautiful

Ajabde blushed hard making him fall for her even more and so without speaking a word he carried her bridal style to their bed where they began their journey as husband and wife. Ajabde snuggled closer to her husband's warmth while he kept her close to him as possible

 

NEXT MORNING

Morning came early for Pratap who woke up before the sun rose but as he lay staring at the ceiling he felt something touching him - a feather like touch - so he looked down and realised that it was his wife's hair that were spread all over him and were also hiding her beautiful face from him. He gently moved them away from the face and looked at her - she looked so serene, calm and beautiful never had he seen someone so beautiful and here he was looking at his wife- someone he got to spend his entire life with her

Ajabde woke up to her husband's stare which automatically made her blush and look down but he held her chin pulling her close to him and he captured her lips in a kiss- a kiss that led to him covering her body with his and as she held her husband's broad shoulders both of them got lost into each other so much that they got a tad bit late for their morning routine

No one said a word to the couple as they saw the glowing looks on both of their faces and the happiness that radiated from them was enough to please veryone around them

EPILOGUE

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ONE YEAR LATER

The journey was a hard one but it was so worth it Pratap thought as he stood on the balcony of his room in Chittor palace. He had returned to his childhood home after he learned the fact that Mughal king Akbar was planning on invading his nation and also that his wife was expecting their first child and she wished to be with their mothers so that they had some elders around them at a crucial time like the one they were in so they had moved back home making a lot of people very happy including Ranaji who had already got toys made for his first grandchild

Ajabde was now 7months into her pregnancy and was feeling everything - sometimes she would feel so hot that she would feel like throwing off all the covers on the floor and sometimes she would be so cold that she would hog the covers and her poor husband had to bear with her as well but he had been a trooper throughout. Now as she paced in her room with her hand along her belly thinking about all the things that she would get to do with her baby when she felt it - that feeling of having that one juicy mango right then and there - just to eat that tangy fruit till she felt fully satisfied

Pratap saw her wife's face and realised that she was in one of her craving moods so he went and held her from behind and slowly whispered

Pratap: So what are you feeling the need for now my love?

Ajabde: I want a mango and not the ripe ones but those green small ones so tangy and juicy and plucked right from the tree ...

Pratap took her hands as he took her to the gardens where he proceeded to climb on the tree to get mangoes for his craving pregnant wife who seemed to be ordering him from below

Ajabde: Not that one Kunwar Pratap the one beside it - yes that one looks so yummy from below

Pratap: Yes Ajabde I will get that one

Ajabde: and the one besides it and that other one as well

Pratap: Ajabde...

Ajabde: You know get me that bunch

Pratap plucked one and threw it to his wife who caught it and totally forgot about her husband who got down with a few mangoes in his hand. Pratap saw his wife clearly enjoying her fruit like a happy pregnant woman so he sat down beside her and slowly rubbed his fingers on her hair

Ajabde placed her head on his shoulder and both of them enjoyed each other's company for the time

Amar Singh was his father's copy was everyone's first thought which was true as the toddler was his exactly like his father in every way - same eyes, same intense look on the face, same disarming smile that would save him from all troubles he would get into for his mischiefs. The young toddler had started crawling and getting into every nook and corner he physically could manage to get into so now here he was trying to get into a new corner he had found at the dangal sthal while his father and grandfather trained hard but before he could get into the corner he was picked up by Rawatji whose face made him smile and his chubby fingers touched his face as he smiled his smile

Rawatji held him and took him to see his father and grandfather train on the ground and seeing both the men made the toddler very happy who started to babble while Rawatji told him all the moves they were performing

 

Ajabde sat in front of her temple doing her puja as she closed her eyes praying for her family's safety and health when her husband came in with their son in his arms - as Amar Singh saw her mother's form he pointed to be put down and then as his feet touched the floor the baby stood unsteadily on his legs and took a fall but he got up again with help of the table kept and slowly unsteadily he took his first steps towards his mother who was watching him with pride shinning on her face - Amar walked straight into her arms with a huge smile and then the small family prayed together for each other and their motherland.

 

THE END


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All the chapters are amazing Garima ⭐️
What a perfect ending 👍🏼
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This was a superb story...continue with another stories...
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dher se hi sahi bt kya update diya h...mind blowing it ws.. superb..kisi ne socha nhi waisa end hua jagmaal ka...n superb ending.totally luvd it.. it ws superb
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what an ending for jaggu...he deserved it...you go praja scenes so professionally they are so nice...👏  thank you for your beautiful story
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fantastic story!!!!!!
hi, i have read all the stories in this forum  they are all superb.  😊
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Perfect ending!!👏Loved it so much.❤️
Finally both db&jagmal got what they deserve.
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sorry for the late response Garima - just catching up with the story now. 
amazing end to this lovely story..

waiting for your next one ;)