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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part...loving their friendship a lot...
manan ..awww so cute
u penned it beautifully
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Awsme loved it continues soon 👏
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Awesome update buddy!! Continue soon hope to see more of manan in the next part
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Originally posted by: aavani

awesome part...loving their friendship a lot...
manan ..awww so cute
u penned it beautifully
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH...
WILL CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...!!!!!
the friendship of manan is beautiful...!!!!
u penned it beautifully...!!!!!
its very interesting...!!!!!!
just bring the behaviour of adi towards nandu infront of manik soon...!!!!!
do continue soon...!!!!😃
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here's a new updated, as promised "MaNan" moments

PART 14

Agin it is a new morning, new day, new hopes, new relations, new feelings.

Everybody got ready and leave for the college.

Nandini too dressed up when her mom yelled her name from down stairs.

Nandini: yess mom coming.

She went down stairs and she almost shouted: tummm...??????

Manik: haaa itna chilla kyun rahi ho.

Nandini saw her mother serving breakfast to him, and he was eating peacefully. She came near to dining table.

Nandini: tum yaha kya kar rahe ho.?

Manik waving his hand near her eyes: dikhai de raja he na..?? ya phir andhi ho gayi ho..? dikhay nahi de raha breakfast kar raha hu.

Nandini: wo mujhe dikh raha he, pr yaha kyun.? Tumharae ghar me koi breakfast nahi banata.?

Nandini's mom was laughing while seeing both like this.

Manik throw spoon on the table: had he matlab, koi tumhare ghar aata he breakfast pe to tum aise behave karti ho.? Aunty aapne ise kuchh nahi sikhaya.?

Nandini's mom: are beta me bhi kya karu ye he hi aise... SADU'...

Manik gives high five to her mom, nandini made an O' face.

Nandini: mom aap bhi, thik he me ja rahi hu...

Manik hold her hand: are sorry achha sit and do your breakfast.

Nandini stand their with an angry pout and fold her hands infront of her chest.

Manik: are sorry bola na, bhav mat khao ab..

Nandini realised that she is hungry too, so she sit beside her mom and started eating and listening their talks.

Manik: waise aunty aap mom se kitne dino se mili hi nahi hongi na.

Mom: ha waise after nandini, we didn't met. Wo hum manglore chale gaye the.

Manik: aap ko milna chahiye.

Mom: bilkul kyun nahi.

Nandini got confused and chocked bread in his throat, and coughed

Mom: are ye le pani pi, dhire se khao beta, kaha jaldi he.

Nandini: aap ise kaise jante he mom.?

Mom: are ha me to bhul hi gayi, tum ise to janti hi hogi, isne mujhe bataya tum dono dost ho.

Nandini: ha par aap ise kaise jannti ho, and isi ki mom..?

Mom: are beta iski mom shaily, wo meri college ki best friend he, ye to aaj subah ise maine ghar ke bahar khada dekh, to mene ise puchha k tum kon ho, he introduced me k he is son of alok and shaily malhotra me tabhi pehchan gayi ke ye wahi shaitan manik he...

Nandini to her self: haa "Monster manik"

Manik: hmmm kuchh kaha tumne.

Nandini: nahi nahi to. Tumhe kaise pata meri mom tumhari mom ki dost he.?

Manik: actually i didn't know, tumhari mom ne bataya, aaj ghar ja ke mom ko surprise dunga, unhe bahot achha lagega.

Mom: bilkul...

Nandini smiled at her mom, she was happy to see the motherly love to manik.

They finished their breakfast and left.

Manik and nandini waved their hands to her mom.

Manik: come me collge jar aha hu sath me chalte he.

Nandini nodded in yes and sat in the car.

Nandini: waise tum subah mere ghar ke bahar kya kar rahe the.?

Manik: wo actually kuchh nahi bas aise hi

Nandini: koi aise hi subah subah kisi ke ghar ke bahar nahi khada rehta.

Manik little hesitated: woo me tumhe pick karne aya tha, pr kaise approach karu samja nahi aa raha tha.

She started laughing loudly, like crazy, manik first smiled

Manik: y r u laughing.?

Nandini: you don't have any experience in girls right.??? (again started laughing)

Manik stopped the car. She was still laughing.

Manik bend towards nandini, she suddenly stopped laughing and looking at him, he went more close, she hesitated and take her head little back, agin he went near, ahe again done the same, but now its the window touching her head from behind, he smirked and winked at her. She got confused, she was feeling so weak right now, she couldn't protest that. He came more close, she closed her eyes, he saw that and smiled and went near to her ears,

Manik seductive voice: yes I dont have any expierence in girls.

She can feel his warm breath on her neck, she feels weak in her knees, suddenly he opened her eyes, she found him near to her, very close, their eyes met,their eyelock...

Suddenly a car horn breaks their eye lock...

She sits properly and he also started the car.

They reach college without uttering a single word.

They went inside found navya mukti and cabir their.

Mukti: hey guys, tum dono sath me aaye ho kya.?

Cabir whistles: wooo hooo kal tum dono ko sath kya chhod diya aaj bhi sath me hi aaye.?

Nandini: aisa kuchh nahi he, wo aise hi, he was going from the same way, i was looking for the auto so he asked me so i came, zyada dimag mat chalao.

Manik nodded in yes and excused him from them.

Manik called dhruv

Manik: kaha he buddy.

Dhruv: are ye alia, wo...

Manik: don't tell me tum dono phir lade, yar itni mushkil se nandini ne hum tino ko sath kiya he, plz yr lad mat...

Dhruv: are buddy shant, wo me use uske ghar pick karne aaya hu, pr wo he ki aadhe ghante se ready ho rahi he, i don't know ye girlz itna kyun ready hoti he...

It was heard by alia...

Alia: kya bola dhruv... ?

Dhruv: are wo kuchh nahi dekho manik ka call bhi aa gaya, we are late.

Manik was just listening to their talks: achha buddy me call rakhta hu come fast we have to jam.

And he cut the call, he looked around found cabir and mukti doing some pranks on juniors and having fun, while nandini was painting something with navya.

He went there.

Manik: hello navya...

Navya: hi manik, waise tum log practise kab karoge.?

Manik: yah even i have to go back office little early (and looked at nandini, who is already looking at him) par wo dhruv and alia nahi aaye he abhi tak.

They both nodded in yes and again started doing their work.

Manik: any help needed girls.?

Navya nodded in no, but nandini nodded in yes.

Nandini: manik ye paint karoge tum.?

Manik: haa kyun nahi, mujhe dikhao kaise karna he.

He sit with a paint brush and started following navya.

Nandini just looking at him, she suddenly got some ideas, navya was looking at her, nandini gestured something to navya while manik was busy in his painting, his tounge came out of his mouth like he is deeply in his work.

Navya suddenly put her hands on her shirt accidently(it was purposely, but nandini and navya acted that it was an accident)

Manik shouted angrily: what the hell...?? navya ye kya kiya, mera white shirt...

Navya holding her smile: sorry manik wo galti se lag gaya... sorry..

Nandini who was hiding her laugh, started laughing like crazily...

Manik: what the hell nandini, now what so funny about it, ek to mera white shirt, upar se tum has rahi ho..

Navya too started laughing...

Manik got confused: ye tum dono itna kyun has rahe ho...??

Navya sorry manik ye sab is shaitan nandini ne kaha tha...

Nandini stopped laughing and widened her eyes: navya kya bol rahi ho...??

Manik: achha too ye he...

Nandini: nahi manik maine kuchh nahi kiya...

And manik put his hand in color bucket

Nandini got scared: no manik don't, don't..

And she started running, he too ran behind her.

They were running like crazily in the campus, this was all noticed by mukti and cabir, and other students too,

Nandini reach to the classroom, and he to came their and locked the room..

Manik: so ab kaha jaogi.

Nandini: dekho manik, sorry na... I m so sorry me to bas fun kar rahi thi (while she was speaking he almost came near)

Manik: achhaa fun..? so lets do fun na, in my way..?

Nandini got shocked as he was coming close to her, she was stepping back

Nandini: manik dekho...

Manik: shhh...

Manik came near to her, and her back was resting on the wall, she tried to escape, but he put his hand on the wall, so she can not run.

He was looking in his eyes,

Nandini: manik dekho, mujhe hath mat lagana bol rahi hu me

Manik was taking his hand on to her cheecks,

Nandini got scared so she covered her face with her hands, she didn't feel something so after some time she opened her eyes

Manik was looking at her, he started moving his hand to his cheeks, he colored his own ckeeks with the color, nandini got shocked and looked at him,.

Mani went near to her, more near, more near, and touched her cheecks with his cheeks and rubbed it so color will come on her cheeks, and done the same to her another cheeks.

He stopped her face like his nose touching her nose. They were looking at each other so passionately. She can feel his warm breath on her chicks, she got shiver in her all body, and their body was almost in eachothers touch.

Manik: hath nahi lagaya nandini.

She closed her eyes as if she wanted him to kiss her, he also wanted that, but he realised they were in collge and stepped back. She was breathing heavily.

Nandini opened her eyes and sees manik standing a bit distance away.

Nandini gave hi a confused look.

Manik: what..? you want me to kiss you..??

Nandini widened her eyes and nodded in no..

Manik: soo why are u standing like that.?

Nandini stood straight and put her hands on her cheeks, and felt the color.

Nandini: manik ye kya kiya.

Manik: wahi jo tumne kiya FUN... right.?

Manik winked at her.

Nandini blushed

Manik started unbuttoning his shirt, nandini got shocked.

Nandini: manik ye kya kar rahe ho.

Manik: nandini you so stupid dikh nahi raha shirt utar raha hu.

Manik was now shirtless, she was looking at him, his muscular body, he was looking hot, steaming hot.

Manik: kya aise kya dekh rahi ho.

Nandini came out of trance.

Manik: tumne meri shirt kharab ki, ab tum leke aao mere liye shirt warna mujhe koi problem nahi he aise ghumne me.

Nandini shook her head in no.

Manik: ghunghi ho..?

Nandini gave her a confused look.

Manik: to bol kyun nahi rahi ho.?

Nandini: aaa wooo, woo to kya karu me ab tumhe,

Manik: get me a shirt, or wash this.

Nandini: wash to kar lungi pr ye sukhega kab, i'll get you another shirt.

She called cabir, and asked her to get her a shirt or tshirt from his locker.

Cabir came in no time and give him the shirt.

She took the shirt from manik and put it in her bag.

Manik left for the campus

Cabir winked at nandini: ye tum log yaha kya kar rahe the..? let me guess, kamasutra movie ki practise.?

Nandini hit him hard in his stomach: shut up cabir.

Cabir: aauuu nandu...

Nandini: cabir yr...

Cabir: pehle apni sakal saaf kar, bandariya lag rahi he.

Nandini: I'll kill u cabir.

And ran behind him.

Manik and nandini wash their face and came to campus. Dhruv and alia too came by the time, they all went for the jamming.

Nandini: guys, but mujhe lyrics ya music kuchh nahi pata he me gaungi kaise..?

Manik: its ok, nandini, ye lo heres the copy of notes nad lyrics, you can sing accordingly, and we have still one month soo chill, we'll do, its just a trial.

Nandini goes through the lyrics: wow manik, ye to bahot ache he, kisne likhe he..?

Manik justed smiled and started adjusting the strings of the guitar. She just looked at him

Dhruv: manik ko lyrics likhna bhi bahot achha lagta he, ye song usne college me likha tha, but he didn't found the best voice for the song. Hope now he has found that voice.

Nandini looked at him and smiled.

Music started...

Manik was playing his guitar eyes closed she was looking at him and closed her eyes

Uljhi si baatein dil

Mujhse bhi baantein

To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya

(Mukti and alia)

(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)

Nandini sang looking in the lyrics

Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de

To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya

(Mukti and alia)

(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)

Manik sang with opened eyes looking at her.

Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani

Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai

She was looking at him smiling he again closed his eyes

Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu

Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..

Everyone gathered there and neonika too joined the audience

Nandini sang like she is enjoying singing...

Milte rahe jo aise hi dono

Lag na jaaye ishq ki nazar

Aye dil farebi, tham sa gaya kyun

Aisi waisi baat soch kar

Manik circled around her

Bas mein na mere ab ye raha hai

Tujh pe aake dil ye jo ruka hai

Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu

Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu

Nandini looked at him , he was so lost in singing, he sings from heart nandini noticed it, it was his passion, music.

Jaise Mera Tu..

Aye.. oo.. ee..

Na na.. yea..

(Mukti and alia)

(Mehar.. mehar.. meherbani ho)

Nandini saw neonika who was doing thumbs up to nandini, nandini realised that she is doing this for mam and this event. She looked at him, who was smiling at him

She suddenly lost in her thoughts but yet she sang( no smiling)

Fariyad karti phir yaad karti

Sochti hoon tumko baar baar

Na chahatein hain, par chaahte kyun

Tumko yunhi mere aas paas

Suddenly nandini came out of trance and looked at him

Kuch bhi nahi hai

Kuch phir bhi hai

Tumse milke dil ko ye laga hai

Aise tera main.. (Nandini sang)jaise mera tu

Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu

He was circling around her and stopped beside her and looking at her...

Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)

Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)

Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)

Hoo hoo.. (jaise mera tu)

(Mukti, alia and nandini)

Meher.. meher.. meherbaniyan

Jaise mera tu..

Jaise mera tu!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing..full of manan
Just love cabir..he neva misses a chance to tease them 😛
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Comment comment comment needed... 🥱 👍🏼
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Originally posted by: pooh2015

Amazing..full of manan
Just love cabir..he neva misses a chance to tease them 😛


Yeaahhh, because he is cabira...
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Very nice.liking the friendship that's blooming... Pls pm me the next time.continue soon

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