Just finished all 24 chapters of this story...very interesting...I thought it would be a freedom fighter one...but no this is totally love story of ARSHI. It is a very unique concept with our favorite characters. I am amazed at the details you gave us pre independence time in this story. Khushi supports "Quit India Movement" and Arnav supports British.
Emotions that you have portrayed in these chapters are bang on...the raw passion between Arnav and Khushi...Love this feisty Khushi...tension between ARSHI...the terrace scenes are so beautiful...written well...together having pani poori...gardening together...both are poles apart in their view but still together. I loved the way Arnav proposed Khushi and after that her reaction. Again I love your Arnav more than Khushi as he is willing to sacrifice his career for her but she too stubborn. I love the way he took care of her when she was sick. You have shown a strong relationship between them.
Anjali and Ashok are aware of ARSHI's feelings but I am surprised that his mother is not able to see that love in his son's eye. Love the bonding between Khushi and Anjali...for a change Anjali is teasing Khushi. I love Ashok more than Sakshi as he knows his son so well. First time in this FF I love father more than the mother. I loved that Anjali married to Aman...Shyam is nowhere. Feeling really sad and bad for NK...the conversation between him and Aman was very emotional...you made me cry dear. In your story apart from ARSHI Ashok and Sakshi are also very strong characters. Another person NK...sorry but I found him a strong character and he is the only one who is strong enough to die for his country. Indian Independence was due to so many brave souls...just saw that you are just 18 yrs old and living in US...you still have a good knowledge of Indian History...Bravo. In India you will find lot of youth who don't know all this and does not care also.
Now Ashok and Sakshi's idea of sending them for honeymoon...Waiting to read further.
Such an impressive story dear...take a bow girl.
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