Nice flow yar...you have been able to pen down the father daughter conversation very well... I have seen my brother talking in such a manner with his daughter...makes sense.
Nice flow yar...you have been able to pen down the father daughter conversation very well... I have seen my brother talking in such a manner with his daughter...makes sense.
Wonderful . Very well written. Can't wait for the next part
Originally posted by: shinseen
its so nice,
mein pori trhan involve hogayi story main uer all the time i have smile on my face.you write very well and very touchylove it
Originally posted by: ...anika...
Beautiful update...
Continue sooonish...
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