I am loving it but tooo short... this is leaving me so wanting... can we have 2 updated then? 😳 I hope you see this as a compliment.
Originally posted by: ranogill
very good story ...and awesome arnav and thank god khushi is not that naive ...and i agree with you half down in ipk not only they tone down asr , they made khushi a clown...they were both awesome in initial stage of ipk...i am more exited about khushi and arnav interaction...even if khushi become his mistress i want to see how arnav react to that..awesome
Like the way write small little details like about the sunrise how Khushi looked in the morning it is like I can see all this in front of me loved itI wish you could give us a little longer part
Originally posted by: -Reader-
Arnav couldn't wait till afternoon to meet and deal with Khushi! On one side the sun has risen and brought a bright and beautiful morning to Khushi and on the other side Arnav Singh Raizada has risen is going to bring gloom to Khushi's life! But he has taken first step towards his destiny (love and all)... he acknowledged that he feels something for Khushi and she excites him... So, that's a start...baby steps Raizada, baby steps...
As long as you continue to thrill me with your updates and give a proper closure to your story, I promise to be with you till the end and more :)
it wasvery short updatewaiting for next
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