AD-VEH-TURE 2-Part 2 page 6 VIDYA dee 7/4/2015 4:00

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Posted: 9 years ago
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SAKIV-RAM   ----------------------------VIKAS

sakshi.ekansh----------------------------SAKSHI

sparkleamina        ---------------------------AMINA DEE

kuls_n-----------------------------------------Miss K

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vidya_prasad--------------------------------VIDYA



It would be RUMAN series.We will be writting in Turns.

Based on Writer's availability any one will be posting continuously .
Mean who ever is free will make  a post .





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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE.

Scene starts with Ruhi annoyed and angry and Raman following her.Raman was trying to make a call.
Raman "Ruhi rukho kahan jaa rahen hon?Hummey raastha nahen patha kho jaaogee beta?"
Ruhi not stopping and walking randomly in any direction except towards her father.
Raman call gets connected.

Raman "Ishita Ruhi theek hain.Main Ruhi key saath hun."
Ishita sobbing "Who theek  tho hain naa?Koi chooth tho nahen lagee?"
Raman "Calm down Ishita.Who bilkul theek hain aur koi choot nahen  lagee."
Ishita "Raman who kidnappers peechey kar rahen hongey.Aap kahan pey hon.?"
Raman "Ishita tum tension math lo.Main hun naa main sabh samhaalloonga."
Raman "Merey rehthey huen mere beti ko kuch naheen hoga?"
Ishita "Raman aap Ruhi  ko phoe deejiyen?"
Raman stops Ruhi and gives her phone.
Raman "Ruhi tumhaari Ishima phone par hain ussey baath karo?"
Ruhi just stood there silent keeping phone on ear but spoke nothing.She has Ruhi Bhalla look on her face.Indicating she is angry.
Ishita  "Ruhi tum theek hon.Ruhi baath karo beta.Plz tumhey chot nahen lagee naa."
Ruhi is having same Ruhi Bhalla look.
Raman takes the phone from her and 
Raman "Ishita who humsey naaraz hain  abhe thak shaayad maaf nahen kiyya theek hain..."
Before he finished saying his words phone got disconnected.
Raman "Nattery ko bhee abhee khatam hona thaa?"
Banging his phone to his own hand.
Ruhi is walking aways silently.
Raman "Abh iss sherenee ko samhaalana hain.Who bhee jhakmee hain."
Raman walks to her daughter seeing Raman comming from behind she increases the pace.
Raman increases his pace to catchup with his daughter  then Ruhi to increases her pace.
It continues as Raman enjoys his daughter cute activities.
Ruhi was not giving up racing.She is angry at her parents for what happened but she loves them the most.
Raman sensed that Ruhi is getting tired and acts as if he is tired.
Raman "Ruhi rukho naa papa tired ho gayen hain.Thoda dheerey chalon."
Ruhi then walks slowly but sure to maintain she is ahead of her father.
Raman "Ruhi tum kahan jaa rahen hon?"
Ruhi "Ghar." showing anger.
Raman "Ghar jaana hain tho humey isstaraf jaana hain naa?" showing other direction.
Ruhi confused as  to listening what happened.
Raman grabs the chance and takes her in his arms lifting up.
Ruhi "Leave me help help."
Raman laughing "Ruhi silent kidnappers sunengey tho tumhey waapas ley jaayengey."
Ruhi confused and silent.
Raman starts walking in opposite direction.Ruhi silent.

Here starts the journey of Raman Bhalla and Angry Ruhi Bhalla to back home
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Wow it cms 2 b a vry beautiful ride.
Looking 4ward 2 c hw the story turns.
Missed previouse challange series badly.
Plz update the story sn.
Best of luck all the writers.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow a wonderful start. Loved it buddy...
Ruhi is hell angry and Raman finding it cute. Off course his daughter is cutest of the lot.

Very well started buddy... I hope I would do justice to it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A brilliant start to the challenge story...thanks for the PM Bhai.
I hope I can do a good job...am a little anxious...but will give it a go...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Good start bro ...
Hope I can do enough justice to it
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#7
Wow...wat an amazingg start...
Already lovingg this story...
Plss continuee soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Gang Who is going to write first chapter?
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awesome start bro...👏👏👏
looking forward to read the story..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
aweee really amazing start so cute