thanks for the pm Nidhi π€
interesting concept...can't wait for Manik's intro... ...n to see his reaction on seeing Nandu πplzzz update next part SOOON π-Mini
thanks for the pm Nidhi π€
interesting concept...can't wait for Manik's intro... ...n to see his reaction on seeing Nandu πplzzz update next part SOOON π-Mini
Originally posted by: payal_diya
Thanx for d PM :)
The cliffhanger! Phew!!
5 patients Fab 5..Those eyes! It wud b Manik's, who else!!
Loved it..
Continue soon :))
part3
"Excuse me ...hello...we need help here ..." a girl shrieked ...not that I couldn't recognize whose voice it was ...mukti's it was
I still couldn't believe that fab5 were in front of me ...
I looked at him ...he had cut on his forehead ...dhruv had hurt his hand ...mukti seemed fine ...alya too
Cabir had hurt his leg maybe ..for he was limping
... The nurse came ...
I sat on the chair ...
Wen manik said : dhruv ...goo ur hand is badly hurt ..u get dressed first ...
He hadn't changed ...I smiled in my mind at that thought
Dhruv slowly came and sat near me ..on the chair ...I slowly began dressing his hand ...looking at an old friend of mine ...he still had the same boy next-door vibe , the same friendly smile that he housed in our college days
I was done with the dressing when I said : yes ..there you are done ...
Oh! This was the first time I spoke in front of him ...since the past half an hour of my shock cum meeting of fab5
... deep inside my heart wanted him to recognize my voice ...feel that we were near ...still my heart was racing ...i still wasn't convinced that this wasn't a dream ...he was near me ...in the same room ...after soo many years
I went to the room to check on whether nurse had done cabir's dressing as he was still lying down
I said : ca... suddenly I realized my mistake
I continued as he lay on the bed : are u fine ?..(touching the leg points )
Cabir: yaa...but pain is still there
I smiled to myself about how this guy had shaped up ...Every morning I heard him on the radio ...Once at a time he was in my lap ...Fighting betwixt life and death ...indeed life is weird and unpredictable
I slowly handed over a pain killer and a glass water and went to take my seat..And in a low voice instructed the nurse to send over manik to me for dressing
My heart raced as if it was going to come out today ...I was hyperventilating ...as he came near me and sat opposite to me ...
Soo close
After years ...
I looked at him ...the same old charm ...the same smirk ...
Those eyes that gave him away always ...
I slowly examined the wound on his forehead ...without touching
For I knew ...once I would touch his skin my self-control would be lost ...i would give away who I was to him then
My eyes were still fixed on his face
I could feel his gaze on me
Soo strong ...soo magnetic
I moved my hand lightly ...cleaning the wound ...
The second my hands touched his skin ...for me time froze
I could sense him ...I could sense that he recognized my touch as he closed his eyes
I quickly wiped the blood and put a bandage on it
My eyes still not leaving his ...
I knew my battles were down ...I could see that he was confused ..for he had recognized my touch ...the face behind the mask that I wore
When suddenly the door flung open ..only to make matters worse for me
nandu .!!!
I closed my eyes in thinking why did Rahul have to enter and call me just now!!...now that I could finally after years see my life sitting In front of me ...
I could sense everyone's gazes at me
well ...sorry guys ...i promise from the next part onwards you will hav loads of manan moments ...i hope you guys like this one too ...and thank you for all the lovely comments ...its really encouraging π³π€
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