Originally posted by: sandhyasn
Nice OS
u penned down very wellPlease PM me whenever u writeIm in ur buddy list😉
Thanks soo much 4 the comment😊
And will definitely let u know 😉
Originally posted by: sandhyasn
Nice OS
u penned down very wellPlease PM me whenever u writeIm in ur buddy list😉
Originally posted by: resha123
Beautiful lovely is
U had wrote very well
Raya emotion love their
confession n finally their
romance... Loved ur writing
Do write more n next tym pm me
Originally posted by: twinkling_stars
Congratulations dear!!🥳 Finally u posted ur first OS.. Awesome OS dear.. Beautifully written.. Now start writing more n give me d good news of ur own FF soon..🤗❤️
Originally posted by: krunalidivecha
Very nice os
Originally posted by: aanchaltulshan
Very good start dear
Written very nicely
The love develop between Raya after marriage was shown nicely and after realisation of feeling was awesome.
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