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Posted: 10 years ago
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Would u guys like a manan version of heir basically it is a k drama of lee min ho[main fa4 character of kyy in korea manik is inpired by him not much but it has]and park shin hye[female lead] drma isbut quite mondest so would u guys like or not it has many shades of charcters hope u all like
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LIKE A MID SUMMER DREAM U CAME TO ME AND LEFT WITHBLINK BUT STILL UR MEMORIES REMAIN TO WEAVE A MORE BEAUTIFUL WEB OF TALE FOR ME OUR TALE OF SHINEE IN THE DARKNESS OF NIGHT
ELITE SPACE ACADEMY-
Prestigous institute of high school and college manage by MALHOTRA GROUP leading bussiness empire .it have all facilities fr student with promising future and high schlars as student here are of high standard nly grades nt their standard is their identity .student after high school enroll in same institute as for learning of maneging skill after all they r the future heir leading face of their company brand and association
where will a commoner like me fit here .i kept the brocher aside and its time 2 me for my another part time job its my daily routine which i loath but i have 2 work for living not dream of stopicate richnes ohhh srry guys im nandini and hi its my journey 2 the glamorous world not that i wish but some dragged me their who is he lets found it😊😊😛...



CHARACTER SKECTH-

THE MALHOTRAS

MANIK MALHOTRA-younger heir of malhotra industries .study in usa from past 6 year or on exile leave alone cold pernality with bore and laziness his concer is live leisurley but misse his family...
STATUS-Engaged
ARNAV MALHOTRA- MD of malhtra corpration .manik elder step brother want to achieve more and have cold pernality work is his life.hate his relationship with his family
STATUS single fr world but in relationshp secretly

AVINASH MALHTRA-father and md of mc group have faults but an equally calcutative person he has his way to concure people to knee befor him .his first wife died and he is griefed by it alot work from home

Nayonika Malhotra -mother of manik on birth cerificate second wife of avinash god mother of arnav manuplative person manage ES acadmey

SAPNA -manik real mother live in mansion but unknow to world missess her son hate arnav and nyonika foe sending her son away .she rule the house and is little temperd but good at heart relay on SHOBHA JI the most with lonelyness


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Even if it was one of the overrated kdrama , stopped watchin after ep 10 .
But would luv to read ur story,seems interestin...plz continue soon ,thanks ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...I loved the drama...the story was nice...
loved each n every scene of The Heirs...
that's great that U are writing Manan on the plot of The Heirs

good going...👍🏼😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I disliked the drama . PSH's character was too irritating . But I'll check out your story.👍🏼 it sounds interesting.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its good u people check out k drama they are cool so hope it come as expected its my first time writing after reading awsome ff by u all
thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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EPISODE -1
LIVE. ENJOY PLAY AROUND , LEISURE WILL GET EVERY THING THERE SO DONT WASTE TIME ON THINKING AND DREAMING ITS USELESS U ARE DESTINED AND ALREDY PUT IN SPECIFIC ROLE SO PLAY IT ALONG-AND NEVER THINK OF COMING BACK YOU ARE NOT NEEDED HERE.

.These were the last word or memory of your i had when we talk for more than just greeting.Memory of parting away before 6 yrs brother he ldecided to swim upward under water life is beautiful but there are much fun with waves than relishing the all record.
SOUTHERN CALIFORNIA
COASTLINE BEACH
FULL of people enjoying a summer sunday with chilly sun and leisure water
peter where is ur friend he doest come or what asked caly in intersted tone
oh sweetheart he is playing with waves peter replied while trying to located him in croud.
Manik playing with the water structure after all that why he is here to play and enjoy so he will do it with the thought he decided t take a turn but spot peter waving must me urgent so he swim till shore with his surfboard
man we are getting late hurry we got a perform peter said huridely
ya lets do it manik replised calmy
yaaa lets rock buddy
summer festivals are common here live performance we enroll in afterall music is the only thing i m passionate about time for spot.light

it went well peter ask while sipping his beer
ya cool i prefer my black coffee quiently gazing at the sun contrast and beauty much to a\captue d in a take
u okay missing home or what he concerly ask
kind off i repleid him
still dont u hate them for sending away ur brother father and mother who only contact appointely to u peter asked afterall he know me much 2 read my silence
dont know man what i feel or should do becaus im qite lazy to justify things manik replied and lean on the chair clsing his eye trying t saviour warmth and image of scenerio as it time for godbye is near


INDIA
MUMBAI
Sun look pretty when it is still setting but who have time to enjoy its only artist and book thing normallypeople are busy to spare n glance to watch time 2 pass .i got a tired day after all its a working day with rush hurs still 30 min to end my shift and after that tution classes
i m tired wana sleep bladly so i put my head upon hands and decided to rest but vibration of my phone poked me
hey lazy bun rent u gone serve . costomers are wating ...
nan to tired ...
ohh shuld i complain 2 your manager ...
dare u
with that i went outside and spot him with his laptop
arent you early today your girlfriend will be angry if she found u here i asked him
nah she still will be cute... still gazing at screen he replied we decided to meet here he continued to wrok
shall i bring something - i asked him i know my manager is looking at us afterall ur not allowed to sit unless u order something.
let alya ''come druv replied
just than miss queen arrived with dressed in red much to please giving me a angry glare like always
why are u two always together alya fired her question
come on we are frnds druv replied calmly
still not conveied she look at me how can u 2 be just frnds till now
because ur pretty than me i replied just to get away from troble
okay
they left after 15 min but druv left his umbrella here for me and asked to call when i reach home as always the caring one he is

OUTSIDE
are u cheating on me with her alya asked me while walking hand in hand
no not yet i answer playfully
druv grl and guy cannot be just frnds okay alya said sadly
and i hate her she know all about your childhood and u
ya practically we grew up together druv try ot sound reasonable
still i hate her let not talk about nandini...and why are u not wearing red i m wearing with that he look towards his red shoes and just than it start raining
dhruv alya said and druv put a his raincoat on their head and snuggle close to rush to the car

STREET
nandini just finished her classes and is walking home thanks god druv left umbrella for her she did needed it badly also streets look drenched with water
so she take the ther rute it has lights on whith closed shops she aside to a shop and let the vechicle pass
she moved ahead but a sight of jingle caught her attentin kept on windw display it look preety in street light falling on it
its a dream catcher ment to bring nice dreams to u


MANHATTAIN
JOAN AWENEW
MANSION
manik resting on grass look towards the sky
stars look preety quite much like a unreasonable dream which could only seen not achieve its better to aww them from far closeness bring only hardship to survival dreams are a myth

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The heir n boys over flowers were one of my fav Korean drama.. N u're doing a ff on the heir.. its amazing..plz don't end it n try to continue

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