Raya OS: Begin Again - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Love the OS!!
Do write more!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Baagoan me bahaar hai, phooloan me nikhar hai.
chaaroan or pyar hai, raya ki khuamar hai πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

jo kya baat hai itni speedy execution πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
chalo baba ab priya ne soch liya toh ram should help her in everything πŸ˜‰ ramji k bina toh sab kuch aadha adhura hai πŸ˜†
nice.
ittu sa πŸ˜› dil maange more reEdited by bpatil3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb is
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful OS
Do write more
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely os.
Serial wale jo conversation of raya 4 2nd child bula gye tha vo apne bahot beautifully dekhaya.
Thank's 4 pm
waiting 4 ur other story.

Edited by ARUJI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful OS Jo...

As lovely as a breezy wind...

Raya set on their second innings...πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Priya feels to give Ram all his missed moments and Ram was soo concerned about her health...its lovely.

Eager to read more of ur writings.  If possible plz pm me ur first story's link.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
lil one but  superb one // 
 do write more dear 
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely os...
Would like to read more of your writings...
Please do write more...
Thanks for PMπŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lalmadhu

Beautiful OS Jo...


As lovely as a breezy wind...

Raya set on their second innings...πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Priya feels to give Ram all his missed moments and Ram was soo concerned about her health...its lovely.

Eager to read more of ur writings.  If possible plz pm me ur first story's link.

Thanks for the pm.


here is the link of my first os...😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4280609
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

sweet romantic OS JO

Ram and priya both want second child.
Ram concerned for Priya, his worry for her is perfectly shown.
Priya wants Ram to relish all those moments which he misses during Pihu time.
Jo itna chotta OS...aage likhna tha naπŸ˜‰. 
beautifully written JO. I want you to write one FFπŸ˜›
waiting JO...for one more OS or FF.

Thanks for PMπŸ€—


Thank u so much darling...πŸ€—

haan chotu sa...πŸ˜†
FF...?πŸ˜²πŸ˜† will see...πŸ˜‰