Arshi TS: Strangers In The Night ~ COMPLETED

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@Naina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: canapoem

You are welcome Naina. Its just last couple of days has been crazy and I was sick too. Otherwise probably I would have read the first two parts again and I would have come with some more crazy ideas. 😆

Hope you write more in this mystery thriller category. And next time write a SS so that we get more involved in it.

Hugs to you too. 🤗

Oh.. How r u now, dear.. Hope u r doing fine !!

Surely dear, will think of an SS, but not in the near future. I will have to complete both my other SS, along with dealing my office work. Will think after that. Mainly, I don't want to freak out people now itself... 😊

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@Naina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

You kept the momentum going, which had us glued to know what comes next. Having the audience's attention is in itself a testament of how wonderful you write. You deserve a pat on the back👏

Oh my god... Thanks dear... 😊 😊

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@Naina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: lovedrops
Excellent... My guess is absolutely right. When I was reading the first chapter... My thoughts kept going towards Khushi saying.. my parents are not home.. lets go to farm house... But frankly I didn't expect Arnav's parents to be there as well. At first I thought It might be Arnav's plan but later I fixed to Khushi's parents. Brilliant thriller Naina... I love thrillers and horrors. They have unique kind of magic in them. Loved it.

Hmmm.. I was waiting if anyone would point out about their parents convo. Oh, u felt it could be Arnav... ??? I didn't expect that. I thought he being agitated mostly, I didnt think anyone would doubt him at all. Yes, and now I am loving to write thrillers. But watching horror is still a nightmare for me.

Am glad u like it. Thanks a lot... 🤗

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 10 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: -NainaS-

Hmmm.. I was waiting if anyone would point out about their parents convo. Oh, u felt it could be Arnav... ??? I didn't expect that. I thought he being agitated mostly, I didnt think anyone would doubt him at all. Yes, and now I am loving to write thrillers. But watching horror is still a nightmare for me.

Am glad u like it. Thanks a lot... 🤗

Oh ..🤗 you too.

Naina .. You are Telugu too. I didn't know that. I am so happy to know that you are Telugu.

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@Naina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: lovedrops

Oh ..🤗 you too.

Naina .. You are Telugu too. I didn't know that. I am so happy to know that you are Telugu.

Me too, dear... 🤗 🤗

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#266

that was awesome
arshi parents really made them scared
with all the prank
loved it

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RenuHooda

@Hrithiksmile

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Posted: 10 years ago

#267

... Awsome tosome update
dont end
dil maange more

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@Naina7

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: SanayaMyLIFE
... Awsome tosome update
dont end
dil maange more

Thanks dear... !! 😊

I don't want to make this more creepy.. so just ended it. Will come up with another one in future. I just don't want people to freak out by seeing my name.. 😆 😆

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#269

🤣 Funny Ending... Yes I really enjoyed it.. Kept me thinking, who could it be?

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#270

Fantastic TS.

WOW this was freaky yet very very entertianing. I first tought that the prankster would be NK and La but they turned out to be Arnav and Khushi parents. They were crazy but they made the night awesome.

I didn't get that dream sequence of Arnav. I believ in ouja boards i think some spirit come through the portal and resides in their home which haunted Arnav in his dream and then cause those foot steps.