GUIDING LIGHT - FINAL PT pg 323 -12.12.06

Vanita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1541

oh man!!! i was eating i almost choked on my food cuz that was sooooo damn good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haila!!! what a jhatka u gave! now thats a twist to bring in!!!! that sooooo good!!!!! please cont soon! 👏 👏 👏

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Manish Kumar

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1542

Hey Cordy.
Damn!!! What a turnaround!!!! 👏 👏 👏
Now a totally full-blown romantic part!!!! 😉 😉
Well, I think I just died and went to heaven!!!! 😛
Jai-Bani getting all passionate...... 😳 😳 😳
Loved Jai-Bani dialogue!!! 😃
Love ur Strike 3!!!!!
Cannot wait to read the next part!!!!
Pls continue sooooooooooooooon!!!!!

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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Arshi86

@Arshi86

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1543

that was terrfic, now I can't wait to see how Bani deals with Pia.

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MOE

@wite_rainbow

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1544

Strike 3😲 ...HAILA!!
gr8 update...sooo senti...but i didnt cry...kab rongi...waiting for that one day!! 😕

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maria-n

@maria-n

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1545

Hmmm, one of the more intense descriptions of passion seen on this forum... 😳 😳 😳 Perhaps you should have made it 18+? 😆 😆 😆

No, it was just great, Cordelia. And again their emotions, his pain, her understanding, very sensitively written. 👏

Now Bani will set off on a Pia-destruction-mission? That would be great! And he - will he slowly find back the ground under his feet, after letting out his shame and pain?

Sangita has started to (mis)use her powerful position now? 😆 members beware! 😆

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Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1546

uuhhhhhhhlalalallala that was ufff its getting hot in here......oh my kya scene tha...wah..wah wah 😳 meh toh gai
Kya cords kya likhti ho...cant wait to read what else happens....loved it yaar 😉

brilliant...just brilliant....loved it 😳

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Raania

@Raania

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1547

uuhhhhhhhlalalallala that was ufff its getting hot in here......oh my kya scene tha...wah..wah wah 😳 meh toh gai
Kya cords kya likhti ho...cant wait to read what else happens....loved it yaar 😉

brilliant...just brilliant....loved it 😳

Edited by Raania - 18 years ago

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Rimpy Kaur

@punjabi#1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1548

First I was blown away by the emotion, then the pasion and then the last sentence made me laugh and forget both. My favorite part of Part 25 was Strike three.

I can't wait to read the next part.

-Rimpy

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 18 years ago

#1549

Haila!!😳

Wow in more ways than one!!😉

Loved Jai pouring his heart out in front of Bani.......loved her determination - waiting for a opnfrontation between physco and Bani!!😛............and I simply loved the passionate moment!😳

Awesome as usual Cords!!👏

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