#3 Ashlok Dark FF - My Ransacked Heart/UPDATED/ Chapter 38 /(Pg-135) - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago


Thanku evil queen for explaining ...I was ready with my chappals to bombard on shlok...but now after reading what u wrote I am cooled down mahi...astha has to choose between bad and worst ...and she chose bad ...

And the GF part OMG mahi how many cheating episodes he has gone through...betrayals long queue is waiting that made him like this...he lost all hope in humanity...now I can't blame him...
Edited by Honeypot - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant update 👏👏👏
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Ooh...let me blow a big whistle for the mind blowing updates (34 & 35)...u r really an evil queen...oh my dear poor astha..she s paying for her dad's sins..i really pity her..she s completely broken..avdooth really deserves the punishment given by shlok...whatever shlok has n his mind...??? Be merciful and update quickly, dear meanie and evil queen..!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Honeypot



Thanku evil queen for explaining ...I was ready with my chappals to bombard on shlok...but now after reading what u wrote I am cooled down mahi...astha has to choose between bad and worst ...and she chose bad ...
Thanks dear! 😆 Yep once you understand a person and his reasons for hatred than you can't hate him for long! 😉 He is giving her a bad choice because he himself had to choose the worst choice he wasn't even given a bad choice he was forced to choose the worst for himself! Someday he may give her a good choice, when he'll start trusting her, but he do care for her in his own way but had forgotten to put them in words! He is completely lost and alone!

And the GF part OMG mahi how many cheating episodes he has gone through...betrayals long queue is waiting that made him like this...he lost all hope in humanity...now I can't blame him...
Yes dear, life didn't give him a chance to live a life of happiness, fate was too selfish and uncaring to him and he lost his humility to the cruel world, he is hollow from inside and needs someone to fill that gap!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Brilliant update 👏👏👏


Thanks a lot dear! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic and interesting update Mahi! 👏👍🏼
Okay! He is mean to her but, i love such dark stories! (of course only in books or films)
I think i'm a sadist too, like you mommy!😉
Your daughter is proud of you! Love you! 🤗
i'm waiting for next update!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Ooh...let me blow a big whistle for the mind blowing updates (34 & 35)...u r really an evil queen...oh my dear poor astha..she s paying for her dad's sins..i really pity her..she s completely broken..avdooth really deserves the punishment given by shlok...whatever shlok has n his mind...??? Be merciful and update quickly, dear meanie and evil queen..!!!



Thanks a lot dear for your appreciation! 😉 Yep Astha is given evil choices now, go away outside and survive in the harsh world or live here and survive with him! 😕 She is really broken after her father's betrayal and Shlok is making her relive his own life, same heartbreak, same betrayals he is making her broken like him!

And yep Avdhoot is given a mental torture by Shlok, he is indirectly punishing Avdhoot!

Will update soon dearu! 😆 Your evil queen has a very evil and meanie idea in her mind and soon she will exploit it! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Biggi.

Fantastic and interestin update Mahi! 👏👍🏼

Okay! He is mean to her but, i love such dark stories! (of course only in books or films)
I think i'm a sadist too, like you mommy!😉
Your daughter is proud of you! Love you! 🤗
i'm waiting for next update!


Thanks my child! 😃 Yep my jaan there is no doubt on that! You really are like your mommy! 😛 She likes dark stuff but only in movies and books not in reality! 😉 Your mommy is very proud of you too my jaan! 😳
Love u too! 🤗 Will update soon dear! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so finally he said it...

but astha still fighting not accepting it...

coz she could believe her father could ever do that

shlok part of story... is like what happen to astha...
right now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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the way shlok tell the story... very scary ...

how did you write this chapter...

no way i can continue reading...

have to take a break...

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